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2)词准确语言表达基求阅卷老师考生英语水初印象恰分词汇选择老师文章含义清楚明
3)长句短句简单句复杂句交叉句型间转换阅卷老师更解考生句子结构掌握运
4)句句间段段间衔接关系词正确文章结构紧凑逻辑关系明确思想表达更成熟
渡词
1时间序
at first in the first place to begin with first firstly in the second place next second secondly eventually finally in the end
2较
in comparison in the same way similarly
3
but despite in spite of however in contrast in spite of this nevertheless on the contrary on the other hand whereas yet
4果
accordingly as a consequence as a result because because of this consequently for this reason hence in consequence in order to owing to this since so so that therefore thus
5举例
for example for instance such as as follows
6纳
as a rule for the most part generally in general normally usually on the whole in most cases to some extent
7显然
after all as one might expect clearly it goes without saying naturally obviously of course surely
8态度
admittedly certainly fortunately luckily oddly enough strangely enough undoubtedly unfortunately
9结
in brief in conclusion in short to conclude to sum up
10解释说明
in other words namely that is to say this means to be more precise to put it another way
11外
apart from this as well as besides furthermore in addition moreover not onlybut also too what is more
12事实
actually as a matter of fact in fact
13强调
chiefly especially in detail in particular mainly notably particularly
高分作文——文章亮点
词汇选择——标新立异
1 越越more and more people a growing number of people
2 越越
become more and more importantsignificantbecome increasingly importantsignificant
3 灰心 make sb disappointeddisappoint sb
4 数学生most studentsthe majority of students
绝数学生 the overwhelming majority of students
5 many studentsheaps of studentsa considerable number of students
much homeworkendless homework
6
goodnicehospitable considerate warmhearted beneficial beautifully cut wellfurnished
7 棒
greatextraordinary marvelous splendid magnificent prominent outstanding
8 ……not only…but also… and … as well
9 …害益
be good to do good tobe beneficialbe conducive tobring benefits tobenefit sb
be bad todo harm tobe harmful tobe detrimental toharm sb considerably
10 出现appeararise(havehas arisen) New problems have arisen
11 增加increaseon the riseon the increasegrowclimbsoarskyrocket
减少decreaseon the decreasefalldeclinereducedescend
12 约aboutapproximately
二渡词汇恰
三表达准确性——语言切忌绝化
in most cases to some extent to some degree on some occasions
四易拼错词:
nowadays convenient healthy difficulty succeed success successful comfortable
五结构造句——众
1)**1976年发生次震
A There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in 1976
B A terrible earthquake hitstruck Tangshan in 1976
C 1976 witnessedsaw a catastrophic earthquake struck Tangshan
2)八月十五日信天早晨收
A I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning
B Your letter of August 15th reached me this morning
六单谓结构系表结构句子视情况合
①Women have to work outside
②They are unable to take good care of their children
a Working outside makes women unable to take good care of their children
b Working outside makes it impossible for women to take good care of their children
c Working outside deprives women of the chance to take good care of their children
d Working outside women can hardly take good care of their children
七简单句改写复合句
学生刚刚毕业想立刻找高薪工作
①Every year many college students graduate
②They all want to find jobs
③These jobs can give them a lot of money
④This is impossible
a Every year heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes They all want to find jobswhich they hope can offer them handsome salariesbut this is hardly possible
b It is impossible for newlygraduated students to find wellpaying jobs
写作例句
I 文章题句
1 说…
It goes without saying that…(It is) needless to say (that)It is obvious that…Obviously …
例︰说早睡早起值
It goes without saying that it is worthwhile to keep early hours
2否认…
There is no denying (the fact) that It is out of the question to deny
例︰否认 成功事业关键健康身心
There is not denying (the fact) that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind
3 深信…
I am firmly convinced (that) I am greatly assured (that)
例︰深信预防治疗
I am firmly convinced that prevention is better than cure
4 种…中 …
Among various kinds of … … Of all the … …
例︰种运动中尤喜欢慢跑
Among various kinds of sportsI like jogging in particularthe best( jogging is my favorite)
5 …容易证明
It can be easily proved (that)…
例︰时间珍贵容易证明
It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time
6 …强调
… cannot be overemphasized
例︰交通安全重性强调
The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized
7 法…认…
In my opinion …to my mind As far as I am concerned…
例︰法 网络游戏花费时间害健康
In my opinionplaying net gamescyber games not only takes much time but also is harmfuldetrimental to health
8 知道众周知…
Everyone knows (that)…As is known to all …
9 毫疑问…
There is no doubt (that)…Undoubtedly …beyond doubt…
例︰毫疑问视国年轻中严重问题
There is no doubt that nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country
Undoubtedly nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country
Nearsightedness beyond doubt is a serious problem among the youth of our country
10 根验 …
According to my personal experience…Based on my personal experience…
例︰根验微笑已带许处
According to my personal experiencesmile has done me a lot of good
According to my personal experience smile does wonders to me
11 认识中 许没…更值尊敬
Of all the people I knowperhaps no one deserves my respect more than …
例︰认识中 许没英文老师张老师更值尊敬
Of all the people I knowperhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang my English teacher
12 求学程中 忘…
In the course of my schooling I will never forget …
例︰求学程中忘学英语遇困难
In the course of my schooling I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English
13 (A) 着口增加… With the increasegrowthexpansion of the population …
(B) 着科技进步 … With the advance of science and technology …
例︰着济快速发展 许社会问题产生
With the rapid development of economya lot of social problems have arisen
The rapid development of economy gives rise to a lot of social problems
14 (A) 信息年代 …扮演重角色
In the age of information and communication … plays an important role
(B) 日工业社会中…生命缺
In today's industrial society … is indispensable to life
例︰信息年代 计算机扮演非常重角色
In this age of information and communicationthe computer plays an extremely important role
15 讨… 承认…
In dealing with …one cannot but admit(that)
例︰讨未职业 承认早决定未职业重
In dealing with one's future careerone cannot but admit that it is very important to decide one's future career as early as possible
16 世没什…更令高兴
Nothing in the world can delight me so much as …
例︰世没什快餐店吃汉堡更令高兴
Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fastfood restaurants
17 … 必 It is necessary that(should)
… 重 It is importantessential that(should)
… 适 It is proper that(should)
… 紧急 It is urgent that(should)
例︰保持公场清洁应
It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean
18 听… 忍住感兴奋悲伤Whenever I hearsee … I cannot but feel excitedsad
例︰想家附条清澈溪 忍住感悲伤
Whenever I think of the clean brook near my homeI cannot but feel sad
Every time I think of the clean brook near my homeI cannot help feeling sad
19 说… It is said (that)…
般认… It is thought (that)…
家知道… It is known (that)…
报导… It is reported (that)…
预料… It is expected (that)…
估计… It is estimated (that)…
家相信… It is believed (that)…
例︰家相信阅读增加知识扩心胸
It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind
20 …理…
The main reason why … is that
例︰青少年犯罪理社会环境日益败坏
The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse
21 俗语说:…’
As an old saying goes(runs says) …
例︰俗话说:诚实策’
As an old saying goes Honesty is the best policy
22 (A) …列方法…… in the following waysby the following means(B) … 三理 … for three major reasons(C) … 少做三件事 To …there are at least three things we can do
例︰(A) 列方法增加信心
I increase my confidence in the following ways
(B) 学外语三理
People learn a foreign language for three major reasons
(C) 维护健康天少做三件事
To keep healthythere are at least three things we can do every day
II 文章承转句
23 (说)……
That is to say …That is …Namely …
例︰生活需规律说早睡早起戒烟酒
We need to live a regular life That iswe can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities
24 (A) 基理… For this reason …
(B) 目… For this purpose …
例︰基理已决定行医作未职业
For this reason I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career
25 理相信…
We have every reason to believe (that)
例︰理相信体罚应该严格禁止
We have every reason to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited
26 事实…
As a matter of fact … In fact …In effect
例︰事实 健康重
As a matter of factit is health that counts
27 (A)例… For example …
(B)…做例子 Take … for example
例︰例盲目提高生活水准降低生活品质
For examplewe elevate the living standards blindly but lower the quality of life
28 外 应忽视…
Besides(In addition)we should not neglect …
例︰外 应忽视想温馨祥社会
In additionwe should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society
29 相反…
on the contrary… by contrast …
例︰相反 少数学生似鬼混
On the contrarya few students it seems are still fooling around
30 方面…
on the other hand…
例︰政府应严格执法 方面 众应该培养减少污染惯
The government should enforce laws strictly On the other handthe public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution
31 然惜…
Howeverit is a pity that
例︰然惜总时抱佛脚
Howeverit is a pity that he should always cram at the eleventh hour
32 换言…
in other words … to put it differently
例︰换言会努力达成目标
In other words I will try my best to attain (gain live up to) my goal
33 认事实 认…
It may be true as assumed by others but I don’ t I believe that
例︰认事实认…
It may be true as assumed by others but I don’t I believe that if you have strong determination and perseverance success will certainly come to you in the end
34 已发现…
Ever since thenI have found that
例︰ 已发现…
Ever since then I have found smile the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives
35 更严重 …
What is more serious is (that)What is even worse is that…
例︰更严重 珍惜野生动物
What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife
What makes things worse we do not cherish the wildlife
36 鉴社会实际需…
In view of the practical need of society …
例︰鉴社会实际需 愈愈学英语兴趣
In view of the practical need of society there are more and more people taking interest in learning English
III 文章结句
37 果实践三点…
If one can really put the three points into action (practice) …
例︰果实践三点定健康幸福生活
If one can really put the three points into actionpractice he will surely be able to live a healthy and happy life
38 做简单事 定…
By doing these simple thingswe surely can …
39 相信…
In this wayI believe (that)
例︰ 相信家够样享受坐公车乐趣
In this way I believe that all the people may be able to enjoy the bus ride like me
40 (A) 唯符合三项求…
Only by living up to the three requirements can we …
(B) 唯努力…
Only with combined efforts can we …
例︰唯努力 期环境逐步改善
Only with combined efforts can we expect environment to be improved gradually
41 非重…
Last but not least …
例︰ 非重 教育缺陷助长青少年犯罪原
Last but not least shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency
42 证显示……重性强调
This evidence shows that the importance of …cannot be overemphasized
例︰证显示交通安全重性强调
This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized
43 总言…
In conclusion …To sum up …
We may safely draw the conclusion that… We can therefore come to the conclusion that…
例︰ 结 世珍贵
We can therefore come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world
44 …原
Thusthis is the reason why …
45 列讨明…
Wethereforecan make clear from the above discussion that
例︰ 列讨明毅力克服困难
We therefore can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty
议文模板
I 立观点型
(1) … has become a hot topic among people recently Opinions vary from person to person Some people are inclined to think that … On the contrary there are still many people who won’t agree and they claim…
Those who criticize… argue that… However people who advocate … on the other hand maintain that…
As far as I am concerned my favor goes to the firstsecond view Admittedly …but it doesn’t follow that… Only if … can we… just as the saying goes…
(2) When being asked about… different people will offer different answers It is held by some people that…However it is also believed by other people that…
Those who hold the first opinion think that…In contrast those who hold the second view think that…
In my opinion both sides are partly right When we… we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision
II 说明利弊型
(1) NowadaysAt presentCurrentlyToday … is playing an increasingly significant role in people’s daily life However people’s opinions are still divided on this point
Those who are in favor of … claim that it has a lot of advantages For one thing… For another… Those who are opposed to … hold that disadvantages are many Firstly … Secondly …
By and large the advantages derived from… far outweigh the disadvantages … entails I therefore do deem that … should be donemadeusedutilizedmade use of reasonably to benefit people to the largest extent
(2) There is a good side and a bad side to everything with no exception to … Generally speaking the positive aspects could be listed as follows For one thing … For another…
However as every coin has two sides the negative aspects are also obvious On the one hand … On the other hand…
Up to now we could see it clearly that … The key lies in the user So long as we could make proper use of it it can be most helpfulbeneficialconducive to us in many respects
III 问题解决型
Recent years have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon…
After contemplation and meditation we can find three possible reasons to account for this trend To begin with … In the second place … Finally
In the face of it is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly Only through combinedjoint efforts can we solve this problem to our satisfaction
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