读续写考情分
读续写高考英语中新增加种写作题型2016年开始应高考综合改革试点省份高考中着高考综合改革试点推广全国范围越越学生会高考英语中遇读续写种题型开始学进行读续写前先解读续写类写作题型具体求
第节 读续写题型解读
目前止已许省份高考英语中开始读续写考查面2017年6月浙江省高考真题例起分析读续写考查重点
阅读面短文根情节进行续写构成完整事
On a brightwarm July afternoon Mac Hollan a primary school teacher was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friendsOne of his friends had to stop to make a bicycle repair but they had encouraged Mac to carryon and they would catch up with him soonAs Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at homeHe hoped to show them this beautiful place someday
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him Man that's a big doghe thoughtBut when he looked to the side he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all but a wolfquickly catching up with him
Mac's heart jumpedHe found out his can of bear sprayWith one hand on the bars he fired the spray at the wolfA bright red cloud enveloped the animal and to Mac's relief it fell back shaking its headBut a minute later it was by his side againThen it attacked the back of Mac's bike tearing open his tent bagHe fired at the wolf a second time and againit fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)
Mac was pedaling hard nowHe waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow downHe saw a steep uphill climb before himHe knew that once he hit the hill he'd be easily caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh
注意
1续写短文词数应150左右
2应5短文中标划线关键词语
3续写部分分两段段开头语已写
词语续写完成语划段标出关
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him
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A few minutes later the other two cyclists arrived
2017年浙江省高考真题中发现读续写考试形式教育部考试中心颁布普通高等学校招生全国统考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试)中描述相提供段350词语言材料(体裁记叙文)事没结束留线索考生续写文章题目求考生根已出事信息结合已写两开头语应材料中5标划线关键词语完成篇约150词作文(150词包括已出两段开头语)
读续写考生毫编事求考生读懂原文基础找原文出线索然丰富准确语言完成篇原文紧密结合读续写作文总体说进行读续写时点需考生注意:
1 重描述
读续写重点情节描述描述程中应加入更具体动作情感描写具体动作代抽象表达学较擅长写结性语言例She felt really nervous and cold样句子然语法没错误直接形容词表达会导致续写呈现抽象结没画面感会读者留深刻印象学进行读续写时定注重描述讲究生动画面感书第二章中家提供描述情绪动作高频词(短语)希家学致
2关注语言
高考英语写作中考生采句型结构定程度会影响阅卷老师考生写作水判断考生尤应该避免句型单化通篇定语句样会阅卷老师觉考生种句型掌握够充分考生进行读续写时应该意识句型结构语法点非谓语形容词作状语虚拟语气等书第三章中相关语法点进行讲解
3 注意衔接
阅卷老师阅卷时间十分限考生定作文中清晰逻辑衔接词样帮助老师快速抓住文章结构促老师更理解文章旨时显示出考生写作时严谨逻辑读续写中时间线索串联重例uponone's artivalthenhoweverbesideswhile等衔接词够文章提供明确时间线索承接文学日常学中应该积累
4 正结局
情节历年真题户外历考生需注意设计结局应正化险夷例
浙江省2016年11月高考读续写真题中讲述简丈夫野营时吵架走散迷路事事结局应设计简终获救2017年6月高考读续写真题中讲述马克朋友骑车阿拉斯加朋友车坏停修车马克单独前行途中遇狼事事结局应马克终成功脱险2017年11月高考读续写真题中讲述作者家四口祖父母家乡驾旅游作者母亲健忘结局应母亲健忘途中发生趣事情2018年6月高考读续写真题中讲述作者父亲西部荒原度假时骑马游玩途中迷路事结局应作者父亲安找路学写作时定抓住文中线索握事发展方
读续写样写作题型学时定积累词句进行量句子翻译练找合适写作步骤样考场限时间完成篇高分作文
家更理解2017年6月浙江省高考真题例梳理读续写写作步骤:
1通读事梳理已知情节
材料中讲述马克朋友骑车阿拉斯加朋友车坏停修车马克单独前行途中遇狼事
2续写情节致走作出判断
正结局原文结局应设计马克终成功脱险
3 根题目已知开头语确定文章类型
题目中出第段开头辆车突然停面前明显属事描述接考生必然需描述车停马克面前马克车脱险第二段开头分钟外两行车骑手接
写马克朋友分享次历继续次旅行处理成事描写
4 梳理续写思路选取划线词汇语法结构
第段续写思路:辆车突然停面前(开头语)保罗开车门马克车马克扔行车汽车狼终离开第二段续写思路:分钟外两行车骑手(开头语)马克行车听讲述次历休息马克感谢帮助朋友继续路路马克十分想念妻子孩子想快分享次旅程历
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him Comeon get in the car Paul shouted and opened the doorMac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without hesitation as the wolf was about to tear him into piecesWhat a narrow escape The wolf was gone Though Mac was safehe still felt the dread stopping the passage of air into his lung and his legs trembling After a few minutes he suddenly shouted Oh my God my friends are still repairing the bicycle Being enormously worriedthey decided to wait for them at the spot
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A few minutes later the other two cyclists arrivedThank God it's nice to see you againDid you see itMac held his two friends tightly in arms I spotted a big dog running on the road when I was riding and then I figured out it was a wolfThen Mac said in a relaxing tone Without their help I would be the dinner of the wolf so don't let me pedal alone again
They all laughed about the accident then got back on roadHow Mac missed his wife and children He couldn't wait to share this exciting experience with them
读续写评分标准解读
读续写评分标准
读续写评分标准解读
档次 描述
短文融洽度高提供段落开头语衔接合理
第五档 容丰富应5短文中标出关键词语
(2125分)语法结构词汇丰富准确许错误完全影响意义表达效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
短文融洽度较高提供段落开头语衔接较合理
第四档 容较丰富应5短文中标出关键词语
(1620分)语法结构词汇较丰富准确许错误影响意义表达
较效语句间连接成分续写短文结构紧凑
短文关系较密切提供段落开头语定程度衔接
第三档 写出干关容应4短文中标出关键词语
(1115分)应语法结构词汇满足务求错误影响意义表达
应简单语句间连接成分全文容连贯
短文定关系提供段落开头定程度衔接
第二档 写出关容应3短文中标出关键词语
(610分) 语法结构单调词汇限语法结构词汇方面错误影响意义表达
较少语句间连接成分全文容缺少连贯性
短文开头语衔接较差
第档 产出容太少少短文中标出关键词语
(15分) 语法结构单调词汇限较语法结构词汇方面错误严重影响意
义表达
缺乏语句间连接成分全文容连贯
0分 白卷容太少法评判写容提供容关
官方出评分标准读续写评分程中受四素影响考生需格外重视
1 题目已信息衔接
考生写作初构思程中应根半段事情节出线索题目出段首语构思完事立刻开始编半部分事生搬硬套进两段落里面样会出现衔接问题
2 划线词语应
建议划线词语词性分成名词形容词副词动词三类首先推荐名词名词类中常出现名物品名基事情节里必须先名词外需注意根年阅卷反馈名词单复数变化动词时态变化计入划线词词性变化计入划线词
3词汇语法应
读续写般记叙性文章阅卷时会更加重视考生词汇语法掌握评分标准里词汇语法求:丰富准确词汇丰富指词汇样性表达开心全文happydelightedpleased等样形容词smilelight up等样动词(词组)名词表达语法丰富指句型样性全文简单句定语句堆叠起长句子够灵活三句非谓语虚拟语气倒装句强调句等词汇语法准确表达正确单词拼写正确时态语态正确句型应高级词汇语法发挥出更作
4 事中衔接成分
衔接部分直考生容易出现问题方部分考生读续写写作初期会关注动作觉情节写完情节事定通读起会较流水账时候需加入衔接词at this momentunfortunately等充衔接成分情节变更加通层次丰富
总说考生想读续写中高分简单事写完必须注意运样词汇句型语法少5划线词语注意两段首句衔接事情节中衔接
读续写高频词
读续写般记叙性文章情节描写重中重想文章生动具画面感丰富词汇必少章考生提供读续写中常见情绪类动作类词汇(短语)表达掌握章容考生写作中表达会更加轻松准确丰富
情绪类高频词汇短语开心
高兴delightedcheerfuljoyful
精神高涨 in high cheerful spirits
某开心to one's delight
狂喜be wild with joy
面带微笑wear a shining smile
发肺腑开心 joy wells up inside sb
心情in a good mood
开心哼着曲 hum a tune merrily
愤怒
感愤怒feel furiousirritated
眼睛火eyes burning
脸气通红 flush with anger
怒气天anger boils over sb
气直跺脚 stamp one's feet in anger
怒视某 glare at sb
脸生气扭曲 face twists with rage害怕
害怕in panic
恐惧in terror
全身颤抖 tremble from head to toe
感害怕 fear creeps over sb
心底开始害怕aflood of fear wells up in sb
害怕哽咽 choke with fear
脸色变白 face turns pale
难
难depressed
沮丧 discouraged
眼睛湿润 eyes are wet
低垂着头head drooping
心情in low spirits
头埋手里hide one's face in his her hands
沉浸悲伤中 be immersed in sorrow be overcome with sorrow
泪流满面 tears roll down one's cheeks
沉浸悲伤法拔float in an ocean of sadness
心沉heart sinks
困惑
迷茫at a loss
头脑空白mind goes blank
眉头紧锁eyebrows knot together
疑惑解 puzzled confused bewildere
皱着眉头afrown stand on one's face
挠头scratch one's head
感动
股暖流涌心头a warm current rises in one's heart
眼泪夺眶出tears well up in one's eyes
感动流泪 be moved to tears
心融化 heart melted
特感动 be touched moved profoundly
感温暖feel warm
惊讶
震惊惊愕astonishedastounded
张嘴 with one's mouth wide open
惊呆be numb with shock
惊讶 in astonishment
某惊讶to one's amazement
尴尬
窘脸红flush with embarrassment
尴尬embarrassedawkward
低头 lower one's head
骄傲 proud
傲慢arrogant
趾高气扬 hold one's head high
充满豪burst with pride
起 swollen with pride
紧张焦虑
焦躁anxious
安restless
踱踱pace up and down
坐立安get ants in one's pants
心跳快 heart beats wildly
手掌出汗palms get sweaty
坚定神色adetermined look
坚定眼神 determined eyes
心焉absentminded
感愧疚感惭愧悔guilty ashamed regret
悔已be trapped in regret
动作类高频词汇短语
强颜欢笑force a smile
开怀笑smile broadly
··微笑 flash asmile at
苦笑 smile bitterly
表情变明亮face lights up brightens
破涕笑break into a smile
面露喜色a wide smile appears on spreads across one’s face
喜极泣shed tears of joy
脸绽放笑容 face broadens into a smile
眼含泪水 tears spring to one's eyes
泪流满面tears break free
眼泪滚脸颊 tears roll down one's cheeks
流…泪水shed tears of
泪水模糊视线 tears blur one's eyes vision
哭啜泣 weep one's eyes out
快哭close to tears on the verge of tears
抑制泪水 hold back one's tears
擦泪水 wipe the tears from one's eyes
悲痛欲绝cry one's heart out
抱着枕头痛哭cry into one's pillow
抽泣choke with sobs
某物 sbcatches sight of sth sthcatches sb's eyes
盯着stare at eyes fix on eyes glue to
怒视 glare at
瞥眼 glimpse at
扫视glance at
翻白眼 roll one's eyes
目光落···eyes fall on sth
浏览look through
眨眼 blink
眼睑开始垂eyelids begin to droop
目转睛 eyes never leave sth can't take one's eyes off sth
仔细peer closely
直视某眼睛 look into one's eyes
嚼 chew
吞swallow
尝 taste
咬 bite
声说 murmur
脱口出 blurt out
断interrupt
坚持说insist
继续说add
边哭边说say through tears
尖 scream
耳语 whisper into one's ears
责骂scold
哼歌 hum
吹口哨whistle
说 utter
惊声说exclaim
坚定说 say without the least slightest hesitation
严肃说 speak in a serious voice
情禁问can't help asking
奇问 ask with curiosity
言语talk to oneself
安慰 comfort
抱怨complain
喊声 let out a cry
口误aslip of tongue
头部动作
抬头 raise one's head
高抬着头hold one's head high
低头 lower one's head
点头nod one's head
摇头 shake one's head
转头turn one's head around
陷入沉思 be lost in absorbed in buried in thought
手部动作
紧紧拥抱 hug tightly
温柔抱着某hold sbin a tender embrace
投入某怀抱throw oneself into sb's arms
某搂进怀里 put one’s arms around sb gather sbinto one's arms
挥舞手臂wave one's arms
举手 raise one's hand
手指point at
拍肩膀 pat on one's shoulder
握着手hold hands
腿部动作
跃起 spring to one's feet
摇摇晃晃站起 stagger to one's feet
瘸拐走台阶hobble down the stairs
挣扎着床爬起 struggle out of the bed
…溜走slip out of
拖着疲劳双腿drag one's legs
进 rush into
跪 kneel down
追逐chase after
dash
溜进 slip into steal into
逃跑 flee away
前head for to
加快脚步quicken one's steps
读续写高频语
章学读续写中常词汇果篇完整续写文章作座房子疑词汇建造座房子砖瓦章学续写高频语法建造房子需水泥钢筋章介绍语法知识点源作者年教学实践总结例句真实课堂考场种语法类型兼具实性操作性中包括:形容词作状语非谓语动词having done非谓语动词doingdonewith复合结构倒装结构虚拟语气名词性句
面形容词作状语例
形容词作状语
形容词作状语实学高接触语法知识点功表达物做某动作原结果者伴状态
表原
1Depressed and helpless(沮丧助)Eric burst into tears
2 Curious to know what was happening inside(想知道里面发生什)_Eric pushed the door open and slipped into the house
讲解 第1句中Eric突然哭沮丧助突出原该句形容词depressedhelpless作原状语
第2句中Eric推开门溜进房子原奇突出原该句形容词结构curiousto do作原状语
表结果
1Eric finally made it to the top of the mountain hungry but excited(饥饿兴奋)
2 Eric was encouraged by the teacher's smile full of confidence in his plan (计划充满信心)
讲解 第1句中Eric登山顶时状态饥饿兴奋表达结果该句形容词hungryexcited作结果状语
第2句中Eric老师微笑鼓舞情绪充满信心表达结果该句形容词结构full of confidence作结果状语
表伴
1 Deep in thought (沉思) Mary sat still against the door
2 Lost in the forest (迷失森林中)Marylay under a tree full of fear and despair(充满恐惧绝)
讲解第1句中Mary动动门坐着时状态沉思表达种状态该句形容词结构deep in thought作伴状语
第2句中Mary躺树原森林中迷路表达原该句形容词结构lostin the forest作伴状语时躺树时心充满恐惧绝表达种情绪状态该句形容词结构full of fear and despair作伴状语
高频语法训练
1回答出老师问题学生保持沉默
2回家途中中年男子躺路边烂醉泥
3害怕挨骂Eric起逃学念头
4躺床睡着听着外面呼啸风声
5Mary满脸通红气喘吁吁门口跑进
6Jack房间里回踱步陷入深思
7直升飞机帮助Mary安然恙出森林见丈夫
8困迷雾中什做哭泣助失落
9意吵架决心充实生活
10转身面准备眼
中愤怒失
11Lucy道歉说:起满脸羞愧责
12绝疲惫Jane跪眼泪着脸颊流
13Lucy犹豫知道样回答诚实婉转
14言发听着知道安慰会更生气
15Harry奇想知道商店里群什便挤进
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