样写句子(1)
样写句子
写作重标准考查学生否会英语清楚贴切表达思想句子表达完整独立思想语言单位合理句子结构表达思想关重坏否直接关系篇文章成败
写句子基素
1简洁性(Conciseness)
举世闻名英国剧作家诗莎士亚(William Shakespeare)句名言言简洁贵(Brevity is the soul of wit)谓简洁语言凝练概括高度浓缩简明扼较少语言表达丰富容冗长弊拖沓嫌做文约事丰言简意赅充分体现英语语言身发展求古中外作家惜墨金中国著名作家鲁迅说竭力字句段删毫惜美国作家海明威(Ernest Hemingway)语言风格西方文学中更独树帜文笔含蓄简练清新流畅善词短句著称称电报式风格
告诫子说Never use more words than you have to—it detracts from the flow of actions然学生写作中忽略点简洁句子变成冗长词语堆砌结果佶屈聱牙冗长费解写出语言优美短精悍文章必须作句子精短词简洁词句中起应作具体说影响准确清晰表达前提句子简化部分量简化省略量省略精炼语言表达丰富思想表达深层语义明白流畅目然达简明扼清澈晶莹效果
1)句变成单句短语 短语变成单词If you compare the two methods carefullyyou will find the difference
句子简单句足表达清楚含条件状语句复合句反显冗长累赘面句精炼
Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference
When I pushed the door open I saw a group of young people
句现分词短语代时间状语句文字更简短紧凑干净利落Pushing the door openI saw a group of young people
During the past forty yearsthe population of China has been rising at a rapid rate
句中介词短语at a rapid rate根句中语法功完全单副词rapidly取代句子文字简练
2)避免必重复包括语义重复词重复
She is attractive in appearance but she is rather a foolish person
前半句属语义重复attractive(迷吸引力)须in appearance 半句属词重复全句宜改
She is attractive but rather foolish
改写行文然表达完整意义含英咀华感
The workers and technicians in this factory have made a lot of new innovationsinnovations(something newly introduced)已含new 义汉语口语中新发明说法母语负迁移(negative transfer)影响容易等翻译英文叠床架屋感
I will go to the movies together with my brother
某起with sbtogether with (as well as in addition to)意加连例These new facts together with the evidence you have already heard prove the
prisoner＇s innocence(新事实连已听证证明押告辜)The final result of the match is 21 to our team
句中final result搬汉语说法没注意result 身意结果结局final异画蛇添足
化简句子保持信息量优点避免臃肿达少胜效果避免句子类似问题方面解英汉两种语言语法句型词义等方面异方面英语思维表达方式取代汉语排母语负迁移干扰
3)改写必冗长句子结构动语态原句结构做必调整It is necessary for students to fill out both registration forms
Students must fill out both registration forms
British was defeated by the United States in the war of 1812
British lost the war of 1812 to the United States
My short stay in the country gave me the greatest happiness that I have had
period of my life
My short stay in the country gave me the greatest happiness in my life
over the entire
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样写句子
写作重标准考查学生否会英语清楚贴切表达思想句子表达完整独立思想语言单位合理句子结构表达思想关重坏否直接关系篇文章成败
写句子基素
1简洁性(Conciseness)
举世闻名英国剧作家诗莎士亚(William Shakespeare)句名言言简洁贵(Brevity is the soul of wit)谓简洁语言凝练概括高度浓缩简明扼较少语言表达丰富容冗长弊拖沓嫌做文约事丰言简意赅充分体现英语语言身发展求古中外作家惜墨金中国著名作家鲁迅说竭力字句段删毫惜美国作家海明威(Ernest Hemingway)语言风格西方文学中更独树帜文笔含蓄简练清新流畅善词短句著称称电报式风格
告诫子说Never use more words than you have to—it detracts from the flow of actions然学生写作中忽略点简洁句子变成冗长词语堆砌结果佶屈聱牙冗长费解写出语言优美短精悍文章必须作句子精短词简洁词句中起应作具体说影响准确清晰表达前提句子简化部分量简化省略量省略精炼语言表达丰富思想表达深层语义明白流畅目然达简明扼清澈晶莹效果
1)句变成单句短语 短语变成单词If you compare the two methods carefullyyou will find the difference
句子简单句足表达清楚含条件状语句复合句反显冗长累赘面句精炼
Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference
When I pushed the door open I saw a group of young people
句现分词短语代时间状语句文字更简短紧凑干净利落Pushing the door openI saw a group of young people
During the past forty yearsthe population of China has been rising at a rapid rate
句中介词短语at a rapid rate根句中语法功完全单副词rapidly取代句子文字简练
2)避免必重复包括语义重复词重复
She is attractive in appearance but she is rather a foolish person
前半句属语义重复attractive(迷吸引力)须in appearance 半句属词重复全句宜改
She is attractive but rather foolish
改写行文然表达完整意义含英咀华感
The workers and technicians in this factory have made a lot of new innovationsinnovations(something newly introduced)已含new 义汉语口语中新发明说法母语负迁移(negative transfer)影响容易等翻译英文叠床架屋感
I will go to the movies together with my brother
某起with sbtogether with (as well as in addition to)意加连例These new facts together with the evidence you have already heard prove the
prisoner＇s innocence(新事实连已听证证明押告辜)The final result of the match is 21 to our team
句中final result搬汉语说法没注意result 身意结果结局final异画蛇添足
化简句子保持信息量优点避免臃肿达少胜效果避免句子类似问题方面解英汉两种语言语法句型词义等方面异方面英语思维表达方式取代汉语排母语负迁移干扰
3)改写必冗长句子结构动语态原句结构做必调整It is necessary for students to fill out both registration forms
Students must fill out both registration forms
British was defeated by the United States in the war of 1812
British lost the war of 1812 to the United States
My short stay in the country gave me the greatest happiness that I have had
period of my life
My short stay in the country gave me the greatest happiness in my life
over the entire
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