06 社会济篇
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微信优点微信已成生活中部分尤受年轻欢迎
优点：
1．非常迅速朋友进行文字表情等交流
2．朋友分享图片音乐视频等
3．仅发送语音讯息直接通话
4．时受时间点限制
5．时免费．
词数80左右开头已出计入总词数．
NowadaysWeChat has been a part of our life．_______________________________________
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Nowadays WeChat has been a part of our life． It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages． （点题）
First we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly． Second we can share pictures music and videos with them． Third we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly． 高分句型Besides we can use it in any time． Last but not least we use it for free and can save money．（微信优点）
In my view although WeChat has improved our lives it should be used properly．高分句型二We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it．（观点）
（二）
假定李明住苏州美国朋友David做关中国东部城市口状况调查发封邮件想解关情况．请认真阅读面邮件根信中容生活实际英语回复适发挥．
To： liming@163．com
From： davide@gmail．com
Subject： population
Dear Li Ming
I＇m doing a survey on the population of the cities in eastern China． I know you are living in Suzhou． Would you mind answering several questions on the topic？
•Is the population of the city increasing fast？ Why？
•What are the advantages of population change？
•What are the problems of population change？
•What influence does the change have on the development of the city？
•I look forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
David
注意：（1）词数90左右．开头结尾已写计入总词数．
（2）回复中提真实名校名等相关信息．
Dear David
Thanks for your email． I＇m very happy to answer your questions．
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I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey．
Yours
Li Ming
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Dear David
Thanks for your email． I＇m very happy to answer your questions．（开篇点明题意）
The population of Suzhou is increasing fast in recent years mainly because many people have moved to Suzhou from other places and now one family can have two children． The increase of the population means that more people can work together to build the city． However there are some disadvantages． The city has to face more pollution and traffic jams． Also People have difficulty in finding good education for their children高分句型． Anyway though there are some problems the increase of the population is good for the development of the city高分句型二． （针方信逐问题进行回答）
I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey．（结尾出期）
Yours
Li Ming
（三）
配合足球进校园活动班开展次题班会请足球迷身份根列表格中点提示英语学介绍足球项运动谈谈梦想
常 识
历史悠久深受喜爱
世界杯4年举行次
处
男生女生皆参加
利培养团队精神
考生拟(少1点)
偶
梅西足球天赋
梦 想
考生拟(少1点)
注意：1 词数90左右短文开头已写计入总词数
1短文须包括点逐词翻译适发挥短文连贯通
2短文中真实名校名等相关信息
参考词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20000 footballthemed schools by 2020
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Thank you for your attention
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Dear classmates
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20000 footballthemed schools by 2020．
Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．Firstboth boys and girls can take part in it．Secondit helps develop team spirit．What’s moreplaying football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
解析
试题分析：题求提纲提示介绍足球运动谈谈梦想求仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息明确文三方面写：介绍足球运动处说说偶谈谈梦想提示情景词语定逻辑关系写根表达容确定句子时态语态语言表达符合英语惯
写作亮点：文语言精炼第二然段Football has a very long history It is liked by people all over the world The World Cup takes place every four years it helps develop team spirit What’s more playing football is good for our health 等等句子简洁句意表达清楚时文动语态动名词作语定式作表语等等语法形式表达生动first second等短文层次清楚
（四）
学校否必设立作业日？班中进行调查请根表容写篇短文英语课交流阐述观点理
Opinions
Reasons
most students
Yes
◆have free time
◆feel relaxed
some students
No
◆waste time
◆get bad grades
I
…
…
注意：①短文必须包括表中容适增加细节
②词数：80100
③短文首句仅供选择计入总词数
参考词汇：作业日 Homeworkfree Day
短文首句：I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day Here are the results
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写作思路
篇材料类作文着重通调查作业日学生法：赞成反理第三称般现时写作中应适连词做文联系紧密符合逻切关系
满分范文
I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day Here are the results Most students think it necessary to have Homeworkfree Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like such as reading their favorite books going swimming and so on They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games
Some students however don＇t like it They＇re afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades They prefer to do homework as usual
In my view Homeworkfree Day will certainly help a lot I can choose to watch some interesting English programs which will help improve my listening and speaking skills
名师点评
文章中非常短语句子会文章增色such as 例 Homeworkfree Day 作业日prefer to do sth更喜欢做某事I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day （介词接宾语句）Most students think it necessary to have Homeworkfree Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like（宾语句定式做语结果状语句）I can choose to watch some interesting English programs which will help improve my listening and speaking skills （非限制性定语句） 运or however 等文衔接更
（五）
现越越学生作业帮APP 搜查会做题目法请根文字提示适发表观点写篇英语短文
优点
1 时帮助学生解决学中遇困难
2 家学简单方便
3 选择喜欢老师学兴趣更浓
缺点
1 学生假装学事实玩游戏
2 学生想独立思考直接抄答案根关心学虚度光阴
建议
联系实际出合理建议
求：
1 80－100 词（开头首句已出计算词数）
2 文中出现姓名学校名称相关信息否予评分
参考词汇：convenient方便便利 pretend to do假装做…… think independently独立思考
Today more and more students are using the App zuoyebang However different people have different ideas about it Some people think ___________________________________________________
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写作思路
篇作文求介绍作业帮应软件法联系实际发表观点题目中利表格形式列出写作容审题知短文应包括部分：作业帮优点缺点观点分三段分进行叙述理表格中已呈现学生需正确英语容表达出部分容需学生联系实际生活发挥想象力补充适容文章应般现时第三称第称叙述写作时应注意：首先题目中求容包括作文中遗漏点根表达需适发挥文章容更加充实完整需注意合理性紧贴题目求文章旨次应注意英语表达惯汉语逐词翻译表格容写汉语式英语应句子整体结构出发简单句结构基础穿插列句复合句复合结构提升作文档次时语句间恰连接成分行文连贯然
参考范文
Today more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang Different people have different ideas about it Some people think it’s useful The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time It’s easy and convenient for them
They can study at home They can choose their own teachers they like and they will be more interested in studying However others don’t think so They think some students just pretend to study in fact they play games They don’t want to think independently but only copy the answers They don’t care about their studying at all It’s a waste of time
I think it’s good for students who are hardworking They can study better But for students who don’t want to study it’s very bad
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文作者根题目求作业帮应软件法进行介绍发表观点短文特点：首先文章容完整包含题目中求信息没遗漏点部分容间层次清晰叙述条理三段式作文目然段题明确次短文中正确时态称语法规范词准确语言体句子结构完整符合英语表达惯简单句结构外短文里and连接列句宾语句状语句定语句等复合句动词定式动名词等非谓语动词结构短文中较句型The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time
They can choose their own teachers they like and they will be more interested in studyingThey think some students just pretend to study in fact they play gamesI think it’s good for students who are hardworking等
（六）
年学生意外伤害事频发许家庭带永久伤痛作中学生该效保护免受伤害呢 市正举行How to Keep Safe题中学生安全知识英语征文赛请根表提示写篇短文参赛吧
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights electric bikes（电动车）…
Swimming
rivers swimming pool…
Internet
ID number code(密码） unhealthy websites…
……
……
求：
1短文必须包含提示中容适发挥
2 语句通意思连贯语法正确书写规范
3 文中出现真实名校名名
4 词数：80100（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student how to keep safe is very important
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After all life is very important We should learn something about selfprotection so that we can protect ourselves well
写作思路
年学生意外伤害事频发许家庭带永久伤痛作中学生该效保护免受伤害呢 市正举行How to Keep Safe题中学生安全知识英语征文赛出材料较全面做首先应正确英语句子容表达出基础适发挥注意遗漏材料中出点写作前先结合表达事情确定句子称时态注意标点符号写等问题犯语法错误注意文间逻辑关系语意连贯
参考范文
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student how to keep safe is very important
First we should obey the traffic rules When the lights are red we shouldn＇t cross the road And we shouldn＇t ride the electric bicycles Second we shouldn＇t swim in the river because it＇s dangerous We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool Third we shouldn＇t tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet We shouldn＇t surf unhealthy websites What＇s more we shouldn＇t go out with friends without our parents＇ permission If we are in danger we can ask for help from our parents or teachers even police
After all life is very important We should learn something about selfprotection so that we can protect ourselves well
名师点评
文中非常句型：we should obey the traffic rules When the lights are red we shouldn＇t cross the roadThird we shouldn＇t tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet文章增色少
（七）
假李军家2017年列精准扶贫帮扶象政府两年帮扶家变化巨时值学校校报举办家变化题征文活动请根容点英语写篇70词左右短文参加次活动
容点：
1 家庭贫困房屋破旧
2 母亲生病母担忧成绩滑
现
3 住进新房母亲康复学进步
4 生活日趋改善
求 1 词数70词左右短文开头语已出计入总词数
2 短文中必须包括点逐词翻译适发挥
3 短文中出现真实名校名
My name is Li Jun Thanks to the government my family has changed a lot in the last two years ___
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参考范文
My name is Li Jun． Thanks to the government my family has changed a lot in the last two years． （点题）
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．高分句型I don＇t have any new clothes．My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn＇t afford to see a doctor．Sometimes I even want to leave school to support my family．（）Now with the help of the government great changes took place in our lives．高分句型二 We live in a new house．My mother is healthy．I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study．Our life is improving day by day．（现）
名师点评
高分句型
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．
家前穷住旧房子．used to do sth常常做某事．
高分句型二
Now with the help of the government great changes took place in our lives．
现政府帮助巨变化发生生活．with the help of …帮助．
（八）
手机APP买菜手机菜场菜品丰富洗净配预约送菜门……外国朋友感兴趣
请A New Use of the Mobile Phone题写篇110词左右英语短文介绍手机买菜带便利外国朋友解中国民生活中新变化
词典
acknowledge v承认认 bone n 骨骼 chest n 胸部
cipher n 标记 crowd n 众 elect v 选举推选
franc n 法国法郎 invisible ad 见 muscle n 肌肉
profound adj 深刻 radio telescope射电远镜 reflect n 反射
signal n 信号 stimulate v 刺激 toe n 脚趾
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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写作思路
篇材料作文求A New Use of the Mobile Phone题写篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带便利外国朋友解中国民生活中新变化首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作写作时注意连句成篇保持文章连贯性层次清楚点分明中心突出时注意语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯量熟悉单词句式写太长复合句量选取简单易拼写单词确保正确率词汇句式丰富样文章增色添彩细心复核检查确保正确误
参考范文
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking Now in China new mobile apps are here to help
These apps provide you with meat fish and vegetables almost everything you need for a meal You an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive If you like they can be washed cut and packed for a certain dish Some apps even guide you to cook step by step making cooking easier
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market mobile apps save your time and energy With such a new use of the mobile phone you can enjoy a more relaxing life
（九）
年十月份越越游客溪赏枫叶．请根提示说说游客留景美更美印象身做起做文明溪
提示词：beautiful views美丽景色
求：
1．语意连贯层次清晰书写规范．
2．文中出现真实姓名校名．
3． 短文开头已出计入总词数．
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．__________________________
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参考范文
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．Let＇s leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（开篇点明题意）
First We must be friendly．UsepleaseOKwelcome with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides we should be ready to help others（高分句型）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need uswe should help them．What＇s more we should follow the rules． For examplewe mustn＇t step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn＇t drop litter carelessly．At last we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（四方面展开成文明市民述）
Why not do as above points？Let＇s try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（结尾倡议家成文明市民）
（十）
现全世界倡导低碳生活(lowcarbon life)：降低二氧化碳排放采取低量低消耗低开支生活方式低碳生活家处请写篇短文家英文报社投稿容包括：具体做法感受建议
提示词语：be good foreveryoneride a bikethinkmake a differenceenvironmentsuggest
reuse
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满分范文
Lowcarbon life is good for everyone
To help with the environment I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car
Besides I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom I think it＇s my duty to live a lowcarbon life And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment
So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible And we＇d better not spend much money on expensive clothes
If everyone does something for the environment I believe the earth will be a better place
（十）
着社会发展网购物成种新型购物方式请根表提示谈谈网购物利弊
求：
语句流畅书写规范
包含提示容适发挥
词数80左右首句已出计入总词数
文中出现名名等真实信息
Advantages
方便（convenient）
24时营业
排队
Disadvantages
见物品
容易受欺骗 (be cheated)
享受朋友起购物乐趣
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now
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满分范文
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now It is a new way of shopping Many things are offered and wait for your choosing Convenience is the most important advantage You can buy anything as you like You don＇t have to queue with other shoppers Meanwhile it is often open for 24 hours a day
However there are many disadvantages about shopping online You can＇t actually see the real products So you may be cheated easily Also many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping
In conclusion we should make proper use of the Internet shopping
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（）
微信优点微信已成生活中部分尤受年轻欢迎
优点：
1．非常迅速朋友进行文字表情等交流
2．朋友分享图片音乐视频等
3．仅发送语音讯息直接通话
4．时受时间点限制
5．时免费．
词数80左右开头已出计入总词数．
NowadaysWeChat has been a part of our life．_______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
满分范文
Nowadays WeChat has been a part of our life． It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages． （点题）
First we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly． Second we can share pictures music and videos with them． Third we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly． 高分句型Besides we can use it in any time． Last but not least we use it for free and can save money．（微信优点）
In my view although WeChat has improved our lives it should be used properly．高分句型二We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it．（观点）
（二）
假定李明住苏州美国朋友David做关中国东部城市口状况调查发封邮件想解关情况．请认真阅读面邮件根信中容生活实际英语回复适发挥．
To： liming@163．com
From： davide@gmail．com
Subject： population
Dear Li Ming
I＇m doing a survey on the population of the cities in eastern China． I know you are living in Suzhou． Would you mind answering several questions on the topic？
•Is the population of the city increasing fast？ Why？
•What are the advantages of population change？
•What are the problems of population change？
•What influence does the change have on the development of the city？
•I look forward to hearing from you soon．
Best wishes
David
注意：（1）词数90左右．开头结尾已写计入总词数．
（2）回复中提真实名校名等相关信息．
Dear David
Thanks for your email． I＇m very happy to answer your questions．
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey．
Yours
Li Ming
满分范文
Dear David
Thanks for your email． I＇m very happy to answer your questions．（开篇点明题意）
The population of Suzhou is increasing fast in recent years mainly because many people have moved to Suzhou from other places and now one family can have two children． The increase of the population means that more people can work together to build the city． However there are some disadvantages． The city has to face more pollution and traffic jams． Also People have difficulty in finding good education for their children高分句型． Anyway though there are some problems the increase of the population is good for the development of the city高分句型二． （针方信逐问题进行回答）
I hope my answers will be of some help to your survey．（结尾出期）
Yours
Li Ming
（三）
配合足球进校园活动班开展次题班会请足球迷身份根列表格中点提示英语学介绍足球项运动谈谈梦想
常 识
历史悠久深受喜爱
世界杯4年举行次
处
男生女生皆参加
利培养团队精神
考生拟(少1点)
偶
梅西足球天赋
梦 想
考生拟(少1点)
注意：1 词数90左右短文开头已写计入总词数
1短文须包括点逐词翻译适发挥短文连贯通
2短文中真实名校名等相关信息
参考词汇：梅西 Messi
Dear classmates
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20000 footballthemed schools by 2020
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Thank you for your attention
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Dear classmates
I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20000 footballthemed schools by 2020．
Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．Firstboth boys and girls can take part in it．Secondit helps develop team spirit．What’s moreplaying football is good for our health．
I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．
Thank you for your attention．
解析
试题分析：题求提纲提示介绍足球运动谈谈梦想求仔细阅读关提示弄清试题提供信息明确文三方面写：介绍足球运动处说说偶谈谈梦想提示情景词语定逻辑关系写根表达容确定句子时态语态语言表达符合英语惯
写作亮点：文语言精炼第二然段Football has a very long history It is liked by people all over the world The World Cup takes place every four years it helps develop team spirit What’s more playing football is good for our health 等等句子简洁句意表达清楚时文动语态动名词作语定式作表语等等语法形式表达生动first second等短文层次清楚
（四）
学校否必设立作业日？班中进行调查请根表容写篇短文英语课交流阐述观点理
Opinions
Reasons
most students
Yes
◆have free time
◆feel relaxed
some students
No
◆waste time
◆get bad grades
I
…
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注意：①短文必须包括表中容适增加细节
②词数：80100
③短文首句仅供选择计入总词数
参考词汇：作业日 Homeworkfree Day
短文首句：I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day Here are the results
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写作思路
篇材料类作文着重通调查作业日学生法：赞成反理第三称般现时写作中应适连词做文联系紧密符合逻切关系
满分范文
I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day Here are the results Most students think it necessary to have Homeworkfree Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like such as reading their favorite books going swimming and so on They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games
Some students however don＇t like it They＇re afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades They prefer to do homework as usual
In my view Homeworkfree Day will certainly help a lot I can choose to watch some interesting English programs which will help improve my listening and speaking skills
名师点评
文章中非常短语句子会文章增色such as 例 Homeworkfree Day 作业日prefer to do sth更喜欢做某事I＇ve done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homeworkfree Day （介词接宾语句）Most students think it necessary to have Homeworkfree Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like（宾语句定式做语结果状语句）I can choose to watch some interesting English programs which will help improve my listening and speaking skills （非限制性定语句） 运or however 等文衔接更
（五）
现越越学生作业帮APP 搜查会做题目法请根文字提示适发表观点写篇英语短文
优点
1 时帮助学生解决学中遇困难
2 家学简单方便
3 选择喜欢老师学兴趣更浓
缺点
1 学生假装学事实玩游戏
2 学生想独立思考直接抄答案根关心学虚度光阴
建议
联系实际出合理建议
求：
1 80－100 词（开头首句已出计算词数）
2 文中出现姓名学校名称相关信息否予评分
参考词汇：convenient方便便利 pretend to do假装做…… think independently独立思考
Today more and more students are using the App zuoyebang However different people have different ideas about it Some people think ___________________________________________________
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写作思路
篇作文求介绍作业帮应软件法联系实际发表观点题目中利表格形式列出写作容审题知短文应包括部分：作业帮优点缺点观点分三段分进行叙述理表格中已呈现学生需正确英语容表达出部分容需学生联系实际生活发挥想象力补充适容文章应般现时第三称第称叙述写作时应注意：首先题目中求容包括作文中遗漏点根表达需适发挥文章容更加充实完整需注意合理性紧贴题目求文章旨次应注意英语表达惯汉语逐词翻译表格容写汉语式英语应句子整体结构出发简单句结构基础穿插列句复合句复合结构提升作文档次时语句间恰连接成分行文连贯然
参考范文
Today more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang Different people have different ideas about it Some people think it’s useful The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time It’s easy and convenient for them
They can study at home They can choose their own teachers they like and they will be more interested in studying However others don’t think so They think some students just pretend to study in fact they play games They don’t want to think independently but only copy the answers They don’t care about their studying at all It’s a waste of time
I think it’s good for students who are hardworking They can study better But for students who don’t want to study it’s very bad
名师点评
篇优秀作文短文作者根题目求作业帮应软件法进行介绍发表观点短文特点：首先文章容完整包含题目中求信息没遗漏点部分容间层次清晰叙述条理三段式作文目然段题明确次短文中正确时态称语法规范词准确语言体句子结构完整符合英语表达惯简单句结构外短文里and连接列句宾语句状语句定语句等复合句动词定式动名词等非谓语动词结构短文中较句型The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time
They can choose their own teachers they like and they will be more interested in studyingThey think some students just pretend to study in fact they play gamesI think it’s good for students who are hardworking等
（六）
年学生意外伤害事频发许家庭带永久伤痛作中学生该效保护免受伤害呢 市正举行How to Keep Safe题中学生安全知识英语征文赛请根表提示写篇短文参赛吧
How to Keep Safe
Traffic
traffic lights electric bikes（电动车）…
Swimming
rivers swimming pool…
Internet
ID number code(密码） unhealthy websites…
……
……
求：
1短文必须包含提示中容适发挥
2 语句通意思连贯语法正确书写规范
3 文中出现真实名校名名
4 词数：80100（开头结尾已出计入总词数）
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student how to keep safe is very important
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After all life is very important We should learn something about selfprotection so that we can protect ourselves well
写作思路
年学生意外伤害事频发许家庭带永久伤痛作中学生该效保护免受伤害呢 市正举行How to Keep Safe题中学生安全知识英语征文赛出材料较全面做首先应正确英语句子容表达出基础适发挥注意遗漏材料中出点写作前先结合表达事情确定句子称时态注意标点符号写等问题犯语法错误注意文间逻辑关系语意连贯
参考范文
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough As a student how to keep safe is very important
First we should obey the traffic rules When the lights are red we shouldn＇t cross the road And we shouldn＇t ride the electric bicycles Second we shouldn＇t swim in the river because it＇s dangerous We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool Third we shouldn＇t tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet We shouldn＇t surf unhealthy websites What＇s more we shouldn＇t go out with friends without our parents＇ permission If we are in danger we can ask for help from our parents or teachers even police
After all life is very important We should learn something about selfprotection so that we can protect ourselves well
名师点评
文中非常句型：we should obey the traffic rules When the lights are red we shouldn＇t cross the roadThird we shouldn＇t tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet文章增色少
（七）
假李军家2017年列精准扶贫帮扶象政府两年帮扶家变化巨时值学校校报举办家变化题征文活动请根容点英语写篇70词左右短文参加次活动
容点：
1 家庭贫困房屋破旧
2 母亲生病母担忧成绩滑
现
3 住进新房母亲康复学进步
4 生活日趋改善
求 1 词数70词左右短文开头语已出计入总词数
2 短文中必须包括点逐词翻译适发挥
3 短文中出现真实名校名
My name is Li Jun Thanks to the government my family has changed a lot in the last two years ___
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参考范文
My name is Li Jun． Thanks to the government my family has changed a lot in the last two years． （点题）
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．高分句型I don＇t have any new clothes．My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn＇t afford to see a doctor．Sometimes I even want to leave school to support my family．（）Now with the help of the government great changes took place in our lives．高分句型二 We live in a new house．My mother is healthy．I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study．Our life is improving day by day．（现）
名师点评
高分句型
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house．
家前穷住旧房子．used to do sth常常做某事．
高分句型二
Now with the help of the government great changes took place in our lives．
现政府帮助巨变化发生生活．with the help of …帮助．
（八）
手机APP买菜手机菜场菜品丰富洗净配预约送菜门……外国朋友感兴趣
请A New Use of the Mobile Phone题写篇110词左右英语短文介绍手机买菜带便利外国朋友解中国民生活中新变化
词典
acknowledge v承认认 bone n 骨骼 chest n 胸部
cipher n 标记 crowd n 众 elect v 选举推选
franc n 法国法郎 invisible ad 见 muscle n 肌肉
profound adj 深刻 radio telescope射电远镜 reflect n 反射
signal n 信号 stimulate v 刺激 toe n 脚趾
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
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写作思路
篇材料作文求A New Use of the Mobile Phone题写篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带便利外国朋友解中国民生活中新变化首先认真审题清题目中求点然根提示容列出写作点点中表达然紧扣点动笔写作写作时注意连句成篇保持文章连贯性层次清楚点分明中心突出时注意语言表述应该符合语法结构造句应该符合英语表达惯量熟悉单词句式写太长复合句量选取简单易拼写单词确保正确率词汇句式丰富样文章增色添彩细心复核检查确保正确误
参考范文
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking Now in China new mobile apps are here to help
These apps provide you with meat fish and vegetables almost everything you need for a meal You an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive If you like they can be washed cut and packed for a certain dish Some apps even guide you to cook step by step making cooking easier
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market mobile apps save your time and energy With such a new use of the mobile phone you can enjoy a more relaxing life
（九）
年十月份越越游客溪赏枫叶．请根提示说说游客留景美更美印象身做起做文明溪
提示词：beautiful views美丽景色
求：
1．语意连贯层次清晰书写规范．
2．文中出现真实姓名校名．
3． 短文开头已出计入总词数．
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．__________________________
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参考范文
How to be a polite citizen
Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves （枫叶） in October．Let＇s leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views but also as a Benxi citizen．How to be a polite citizen？（开篇点明题意）
First We must be friendly．UsepleaseOKwelcome with smile when you talk with visitors． Besides we should be ready to help others（高分句型）．Try to be a helpful person． If visitors need uswe should help them．What＇s more we should follow the rules． For examplewe mustn＇t step on the grass or pick flowers． We mustn＇t drop litter carelessly．At last we also need to behave well in public．We stand for our city Benxi in public．So it needs our good manners．（四方面展开成文明市民述）
Why not do as above points？Let＇s try our best to be a polite citizen（高分句型二）．（结尾倡议家成文明市民）
（十）
现全世界倡导低碳生活(lowcarbon life)：降低二氧化碳排放采取低量低消耗低开支生活方式低碳生活家处请写篇短文家英文报社投稿容包括：具体做法感受建议
提示词语：be good foreveryoneride a bikethinkmake a differenceenvironmentsuggest
reuse
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Lowcarbon life is good for everyone
To help with the environment I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car
Besides I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom I think it＇s my duty to live a lowcarbon life And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment
So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible And we＇d better not spend much money on expensive clothes
If everyone does something for the environment I believe the earth will be a better place
（十）
着社会发展网购物成种新型购物方式请根表提示谈谈网购物利弊
求：
语句流畅书写规范
包含提示容适发挥
词数80左右首句已出计入总词数
文中出现名名等真实信息
Advantages
方便（convenient）
24时营业
排队
Disadvantages
见物品
容易受欺骗 (be cheated)
享受朋友起购物乐趣
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now
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Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now It is a new way of shopping Many things are offered and wait for your choosing Convenience is the most important advantage You can buy anything as you like You don＇t have to queue with other shoppers Meanwhile it is often open for 24 hours a day
However there are many disadvantages about shopping online You can＇t actually see the real products So you may be cheated easily Also many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping
In conclusion we should make proper use of the Internet shopping
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