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1 2017学生读书笔记
2 关新学生寒假读书笔记
3 中国学生写英语文常见错误总结读书笔记
4 中学生花夕拾读书笔记
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中国学生写英语文常见错误总结读书笔记
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标题:
the most common habits from more than 200 english papers written by graduate chinese engineering students
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摘:
文提出种常见中式英语惯超两百份中国学生写英文文中观察文中解释惯部分情况出实际文中出现例子正确法试图解释改正避免错误情况解释什惯会出现文成单独科技文编写指南尤难寻找母语英语编辑时
意
section 1
a an the
冠词面名词冠词名词间修饰词修饰名词(a big blue bicycle the first award)aan定冠词the定冠词单数形式数名词指代数事务普通名词次需限定词(determiner)
方法图示:
incorrect figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on surface of main
and splitter blades15
correct figure 2 shows the distribution of relative velocity on the surface of the
main and splitter blades15
分析面例子surface单数数没限定词特定单词the修饰blades复数数没特殊限定词特定单词the修饰
very long sentence
太长句子利读者理解应该量分句子参数陈列量列表者整齐子句
prefacing the main idea of a sentence by stating the purpose
location or reason first
句子前面陈述目位置原等陈述句子含义样减弱句子旨混淆读者理解
incorrect for the application in automobile interiors this paper studies the nesting
optimization problem in leather manufacturing 5
correct this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing
for application in automobile interiors
tendency of placing phrases which indicate time at the beginning of
a sentence
倾表示时间短语放句首样然
incorrect when u is taken as the control parameter the bds for δ 00 0001 0005
are shown in fig 8
correct figure 8 shows the bds for δ 00 0001 and 0005 when u is taken as the
control parameter
place the most important subject at the beginning of the sentence for
emphasis
重题放句首示重视样理解错误
incorrect based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a cad
model the extended stl format is described in this section4
correct the extended stl format is described in this section based on the triangulation
structure built from unorganized points or a cad model
which that
respectively’ and respective’
1 respectively is misplaced in the sentence it is put before the nouns to which it refers
incorrect equations 2~6 can be respectively linearized as……(equations given)…13
correct equations 2~6 can be linearized as……(equations given)… respectively
incorrect the weights of the two experts are respectively 0600 and 040019
correct the weights of the two experts are 0600 and 0400 respectively
2 respectively is inserted to express that there is a certain order in which something was
done however the order is already implied elsewhere in the sentence or does not need
to be expressed because it does not add value to meaning of the sentence
incorrect if both the core technology score and core quality score of a bottleneck process
are respectively below certain scores then we refer to strategy 1 otherwise if
either is respectively above a certain score then we refer to strategy 2
similarly if the core technology and core quality are respectively above a
certain score then we refer to strategy 3 otherwise if either is respectively
below a certain score then we refer to strategy 419
correct if both the core technology score and core quality score of a bottleneck process
are below certain scores then we refer to strategy 1 otherwise if either is
above a certain score then we refer to strategy 2 similarly if the core
technology and core quality are above a certain score then we refer to strategy[page]
3 otherwise if either is below a certain score then we refer to strategy 4
respectively通常出现句子结尾两者更事定序提起者指定时respectively包含种序种序前面提读者领会
例子:
for example bobby nicole and daren wore red green and blue coats respectively
list 1 list 2
bobby wore a red coat
nicole wore a green coat
daren wore a blue coat
in this paper’ in this study’
study指作者做出工作paper指作者表达工作文混淆
两短语两方:
1 介绍者总结全文时
2 文中指出作者没完成工作两短语描述工作
numbers and equations
阿拉伯数应该出现句子开头应该英文单词
incorrect 12 parameters were selected for the experiment
correct twelve parameters were selected for the experiment
阿拉伯数滥应该出技术指标时表示普遍信息
句子中符号者表达式应该语言描述(般文求表达式单独写出特定格式)
middle load…
correct if the power battery soc is greater than soclo and the driving torque
belongs to the middle load…
format
paragraphs
分段错误两:第种换行没缩进读者知道否新段
第二种段前面单行句子句子段时缩进
(句话理解太清晰怀疑理解错原文:the second
error occurs when a paragraph is preceded by a single sentence on a single line the
single line is indented along with the succeeding paragraph as in example # this
commonly occurs in chinese texts but is never done in english)
figure’ and table’
figuretable正确缩写分figtbl缩写出现句首figuretable数间必须空格
variables
变量必须斜体
capitals
写母出现句中出现句首
such as’ and etc’
such as含义for example样etc含义等and so on果放句子里冗余
such as意味着面完整列表果面列出元素应such as
incorrect compared to traditional industry microelectronic fabrication has three
characteristics such as high complexity high precision and high automation
correct compared to traditional industry microelectronic fabrication has three
characteristics high complexity high precision and high automation
section 2
1.列单词具样单数复数形式:
literature (when referring to research)
equipment
staff (referring to a group of people)
faculty
2.列单词时仅仅
3.单词求修饰名词必须复数:
4.永远阿拉伯数者英文缩写作句子开头
5.by this wayby doing this者using this method代
6.永远how to作句子开头(口语中说)
no how to find the optimal parameter is the main objective
yes determining how to find the optimal parameter is the main objective
7.写the results are shown as figure 2写the results are shown in figure 2
8.变量斜体特变量英文母表示时候
9.避免单词obviously方法:
no obviously detecting regimes by means of pmh maps is a novel method8
yes detecting regimes by means of pmh maps is a novel method8
10.国际文应该域相关单词例at homeabroadhereour country等等应该in china
11.避免度that is to say者namely应该量句子中表达完整意思
12.句子末尾too尤科技文中
记
完文受益匪浅果没科技文写作课文绝会帮助实学开设科技文写作课没什作正作者文中说找母语英语老
师难找母语英语时懂科技文写作难目前数学外教少熟悉科技文写作中国学生写英文文葫芦画瓢然画似模似样中文惯带进细微处难分明中国读英文文章囫囵吞枣英语母语眼里含混晦涩
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