四级考试作文 写作方法
作文评分标准
满分15分分五等2分5分8分11分14分
2分 — 条理清思路紊乱语言支离破碎部分句子均错误数严重错误
5分 — 基切题表达思路清楚连贯性差较严重语言错误 8分 — 基切题方表达思想够清楚文字勉强连贯语言错误相中严重错误
11分 — 切题表达思路清楚文字连贯少量语言错误
14分 — 切题表达思想清楚文字通连贯性较基语言错误仅错
写作方法(四级出现提纲式(三段式)作文议文)
()抛开句子构成段落展开类文体作文写作技巧等理说单实原写四级作文应注意方面五1切题2干净3减少错误4开门见山5闪光点
1切题作文跑题似老生常谈非想象般轻易举 例Benefits of Sports(运动处)考生列举系列运动优点写道运动固然处应避免运动量否量运动害度疲劳损害心肌拉伤腿等等殊知样写着写着已跑题文求写运动处副作坏处根应文章讨范围
考生写How university graduates find work文竟写成喜欢什样工作样词汇量语法知识南辕北辙假文章重点放词算抓住害面试写简介进行包装推销等等
2干净作文改情感然喜欢干净讨厌潦草肮脏阅卷员天批改百份试卷作文果潦草清成片涂改会费力辨甚猜想意 作文干干净战术性事成 1
战略性问题
记住作文写干净整齐等阅卷员发送信息———尊重辛勤劳动作文分帮助
3减少错误写作程中碰会写准词句型写写 法写采取避开代方法英语中做play safe
四级作文万写太高明首先保证减少错误量作文做懈击
例About Hong Kong①The Present State②Hong Kong s Past③Its Future 第段香港现状例 it the pearl in the east
中写prosperousdiligentuniquebooming等词时候准办呢
时脑子学会急转弯busyhardworkingspecial代busy完全代表prosperous意思车水马龙热闹繁忙景象基表达出
需指出play safe意味着必苦功记必十分基词汇词率高computerenvironmentefficiency等避开考生考场连modernsocietypollution甚benefit类词拼写准基功太差印象
4开门见山5闪光点
两术语什意思呢
Good Health篇作文①Importance of good health ②Ways to keep fit ③My own practices
先第段身体重性考生写道With the rapid development of our economywith the improvement of our living standardwith more and more people s realization of the importance of good healthnow people are attaching
greater importance to their health着济飞速发展着民生活改善着家健康重性解忘记四级作文总写百十字开头罗罗嗦嗦说三四十字没说正题领切记作文应该单刀直入直截兜圈子绕弯子第句话采topic sentence点明题重点突出———开门见山 应该写
Good health is important to everyone
开门见山旗帜鲜明亮出观点面应该事例支持观点事例做闪光点果事例采FirstSecondThird类排列方法
考生会说写议文先端出点出知道时候想起事实例子支持结办
时两相重词汇家应该铭记心———withwithout尤议文中算开启式门锁万钥匙Good health is very important to everyone With itwe can study hard We can serve the country We can do everything as we like Without good healtheverybody knowswe will fail to do things We can’t work efficiently We may stay in hospital We’ll become a burden of our familyetc
记住withwithout说废话正证法反证法述事情第二段保持健康方法
In my opinionthere are two ways for me to keep fit Firstwe must eat a balanced diet That is to say—we must eat not only eggsfishmeat but also some vegetables and fruit everyday Besides eatingdrinking clean water is also important Never get addicted to drinking the socalled soft drinks Secondexercising is a vital part of our daily life We can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon
第三段实践考生会问写点什呢忘记第二段中提吃锻炼保持健康佳途径第三段写吃锻练———做行 会说前做
写决心保证吧
From today onI willI will者I plan to do it as follows实践
顶算希计划样写跑题见切题仅指全文三段中段存否切题样问题
考生样写第三段基说达求
As a university studentI pay much attention to my physical exerciser I do some swimming in Summer and some skating in WinterI often play badminton and tennis I’m also careful with my diet In a wordkeeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously
(二)会问知道项原考场什写出呢牵涉英文作文两考试目
英文作文底考家什 考查两方面———思路表达英文水
考生作文题常常会抓耳挠腮知道该写什肚里空空做没思路思路倒英文水较低然更思路没英文样高分难度想知面分谈谈思路英文两件事
家知道考场作文第件事———思路没思路心欲信手写写着写着知道写里种作文难道会条理清楚难道会中心突出做干净整洁乱涂乱画作文第件事审题列出提纲家中客先列出份菜单样菜单列单菜买素材炒端桌英文表达
没菜单高明作家会巧妇难米炊列菜单作文提纲必长寥寥数语中英文皆
例作文Electricity and Our Daily Life ①Electricity is essential in our daily life ②If there were no electricity ③Therefore
Outline
①电途提供动力明日常生活②假没电生产生活会受影响③节约电
Electricity is essential in our daily life It runs the machines in factories It starts the vehicles and light the streets and rooms With itwe can watch TVlisten to the tape recordercook meals or store food in the fridge In a wordit helps us a lot in our daily life
If there were no electricityall the machines would stop working At nightit would be very dark We would have to wash our clothes with our hands Students would use oil lamps to do their homework We would live as our ancestors did centuries ago Thereforeelectricity is very important to us Our life cannot go on without itnot to mention the construction of our country Our country is short of electricitynow Soeverybody should try to save it
(三)提纲列出步较标准英文想说意思表达出需较英文基功底包括单词句子结构语法词组等等面家先两篇作文思路算清晰文章较切题层次合理单语言文字方面问题呢
例 Traffic in Big Cities
1Traffic has become a social problem in big cities 2 One way to solve this problem is 3Another way is
Traffic has become a social problem in big cities Of coursehave a car is a good thingbut if every person own a carthe streets will became too crowded Sotraffic jams occurred during the rush hours and accidents happened more often
One way to solve this problem is develop public transportation system For examplewe should buy more buses and we should built more roadsespecially roundthecity roads And underground trains is also a good solution Another way is to reduce the big city s population Our country population control is a wise and necessary policy If
big city people reducetraffic will less crowded
第句抄起始句问题第二句作者想说车件事采取汉语表达方式have a car is a good thing英文错特错须知英文语般四部分组成名词(含代词)动名词ving动词定式to句子动词have万万语少应改having接every person动词own然应该加sstreets will面动词原形become第三行so写sTraffic Jams occurred and accidents happened动词完全需式样种事情已现已堵车没交通事印象切记议文中式 定合理滥
第二段One way to solve this problem is to develop行般说句话应谓语动词(列时成)is
develop必须消掉(消动词三招to vvingved分词)We should buildAnd应写underground trains is谓语协调改trains are改train is者更处查数讲种情况铁种形式办法
末段改
Our country s population control is a wise and necessary policy If the number of the people in big cities is reducedtraffic will become less crowded
综述篇英文想写道起码应注意方面
①语述四部分
②谓语动词(句话句算句话)动词时态语态语气正确 shallwillmustmaycan等情态助动词原形 谓语外动词消掉(做动词非谓语形式) ③语谓语致
④物动词介词宾语形式(系表外)
⑤定语状语位置放合理
⑥句引导词 恰
⑦单词没拼写错误
(四)现已知道作文体样写
①审题列出提纲(约5分钟)
②开始写(1)切题(2)干净(3)少犯错误(4)开门见山(5)闪光点(约20分钟)
③交卷前检查(1)拼写错误(2)语法错误等(约5分钟)
两种观点 较 型 文章 模板
第段 开门见山
第二段
题句(第句) As for whether … people have different opinions
第二句Some people argue believe claim that hold the opinion that… 第种观点理
However others hold that… (Others on the contrary think that… ) 第二种观点理
者
People have quite diverse views on whether
Those who are in favor of approve of 第种观点… argue claim that 理… However others hold that… (Others on the contrary think that… ) 第二种观点理
第三段 观点面两种观点取
As far as I am concerned Personally I side with share the opinion of the former latter It is undeniable that… however…
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