初中作文辅导课（精选多篇）

初中作文辅导课(精选篇)
第篇：六年级作文辅导课
六年级作文辅导课（2课时）
肖志辉
教学目：
1学生通具体事例表现物品质通物外貌动作语言神态表现物性格写留深刻印象
2学生写文章容具体叙述条理语句通连贯教学重难点：
样留深刻印象写时读者留深刻印象教学安排：
游戏：
1教师先讲明游戏规全班学分三组抢答请老师描述中抢答出描述物身份：老师医生作家警察男学老爷爷等竞猜老师手中卡片意飞教室意角落
例（1） 周 老师班数学老师中等子身材略胖40岁模样蔼亲面庞双眼睛里盛满笑意眼镜透出目光总炯炯神善声音特听清脆响亮张巧嘴巴分数数讲生动趣批评劝诫说真诚亲切语言听起总舒服次笑意盈盈眼睛总觉心里暖暖
例（2）位老汉眉毛胡子花白脸膛紫红色显神采奕奕身穿崭新青布棉袄棉裤头包着块雪白毛巾老汉蹲乐滋滋抽着旱烟
老汉头戴着顶破草帽露帽外边头发已斑白肩搭着件灰灰黄黄褂子整脊背黑亮闪闪发光涂层油面裤腿卷膝盖毛茸茸腿布满数筋疙瘩条条高高鼓起血串连着脚没穿鞋脚板老皮怕指厚……腰插着旱烟袋烟荷包搭拉屁股钟摆似两边摆动着
例（3）班张明学体育运动会100米短跑项目中飞快终点获第名）请段话张明终点外貌进行描写注意表情写生动
例（4）会英语早读开始英语课代表胡珂前面领读偷偷瞥张老师眼见张老师慢慢踱教室面板报前走全班学回头口里然旧读英语做做样子罢心绷紧弦说定什时候断注意力集中张老师举动会转身头呼啦子转回读书声音子洪亮起禁动作整齐感笑张老师走前面劲盯着脸找什答案急忙书
挡住脸会见慢慢走门外然站定透玻璃窗见正皱着眉头苦苦思索着什学样心绪惊疑定互相着知样
2游戏结：
请学回答：什家迅速抢答出描述物身份职业？请拾卡片学次卡片语句朗读遍仔细体会描绘物外貌动作神态描写方法
二 渡：明确课示
家猜猜节作文课辅导什容呢？（写）写文章写写熟悉敬佩写身边学朋友写面留深刻印象天课帮家回忆学六年生活中留深刻印象（板书）：记印象深刻显然篇写文章前面修饰语印象深刻写文章离开写事定说什话做什事留深刻印象通具体事例表现物品质通物外貌动作语言神态表现物性格深层展示物心世界合理物进行加工面做游戏
三 采访：
1找朋友
意首古诗句发学学古诗句恢复原貌样拥句学刚成搭档师检查朋友否找
2教师请名学配合示范采访师记者生采访者
采访问题：
学六年生活中谁留深刻印象？
（）说什话做什事感觉印象深刻？
名话件事生路会什样影响帮助？
3两互换角色生采访师
4学生刚找搭档进行互相采访师边提示采访问题边检查学生采访情况
四 集体交流
请组学讲台采访搭档分说说印象深刻
五分析指导样写印象深刻
写作文中写出物立体感够跃然纸呼欲出形象鲜明栩栩生种力样具备种力呢？解决问题世界没完全相树叶没完全相外貌神态思想性格均相写写出物思想品质性格特征精神风貌节课训练重点写留深刻印象写离开写事事情感动事定会留深刻印象样通件事表现物品质
通物外貌动作语言神态表现物性格？写留深刻印象三点讲开：
（）抓住特征写外貌
写物长相身材抓住特征神态做写谁谁读者见外貌绝面容身段衣着扮重年龄性职业甚学历爱等衣服分辨出甚显示出性格例：写老片段相写老师清洁工片段等
（二）典型事例写品
什典型事例？代表性意义事品物思想品质通件具体事例表现物思想品质中国句俗语什做什事写件事程中物样做？样说？通行动语言表现物精神风貌性格谈写事必讲写文章写事写事文章中事样记事文事交六素事件龙脉写清楚写记叙文根品性格特点写事写件事写件事者写件事片断总事根塑造物需进行取舍例：里事通物言行表达物性格特点说带典型特点（生读事）师评贝利世界足球王世界脚功
贝利记漂亮勾球动作：手起轻轻勾正头顶落原处丝毫差身份证明（足球王）
（三）深层展示写心理
说心世界更展示文章中物思想动态性格文中心理活动分两种：种文中物心理描写沉思默想联想表现思想品格种作者心理描写明显想直接表达物心理活动作者思想表现合理想象作者种心理活动里第三点学生说写稍稍难必求例：气恼愤恨——生裂唇作者直接表达心理活动
六练
请学趁热铁刚伴采访容根老师指导写片断通件具体事例表现留深刻印象
第二篇：节作文辅导课
节作文辅导课
老师课确实令难忘写作课开始文字游戏课觉新奇趣
讨研究众字造字原知道成单两成双写成俩三成众群众群众说三聚集起成群众趣问题日字加划组成字问题家觉兴趣回答道题目时候纷纷举起手想回答冯老师办法真够绝够组成五字学站起全班学站起冯老师够组成五字学坐组成六字学坐……站着越越少九字时候十学生站着十字时候站着冯老师字写黑板没原够写出十字刚站着开差冯老师请坐时告诉开差否会闹笑话点头意然老师够写出九字学生中两学生写快写两写出九字模样家笑老师发张红星卡
啊天真高兴知道汉字字历前认汉字汉字老师写现懂原汉字中间包含着道理想写汉字会写错
节课真难忘
第三篇：初中二年级作文辅导
根提示请school rules题写篇短文话提示：学校规章制度面学校规章制度请位新生mary作介绍容包括：
1 课迟
2 教室保持(keep)干净安静
3 见老师问（greet)
4 允许教室里吃东西
5 许课堂听音乐玩游戏
6 损害花草树木（pick flowers climb trees）
school rules
welcome to our school mary here are someofour school rules let me tell you we can＇t arrive late for class we can＇t talk loudly in class we have to be quiet in class and we have to keep our class clean when we meet the teachers on the way we must greet them we can＇t eat or drink in the classroom but we can eat outside we can＇t listen to music or play games in class either we can＇t pick flowers or climb trees
根提示写封60~80字信
tom 邀请li ping 参加周日生日宴会li ping父母出差月回奶奶卧病床需顾说英语考试法前参加生日宴会li ping感抱歉写信辞谢
dear tom
thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday partyi＇d love to go but i can＇tmy parent____________________________________from li ping
dear tom
thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday partyi＇d love to go but i can＇tmy parents are out on businessthey are coming back next monthand now i have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bedand i also need to study for my coming english exami＇m very sorry but i can＇t go to your partythank you for asking mei hope you can have a good time
英国朋友参加班举行英语晚会作持需英语准备份6080词欢迎辞包括英文提示容（开头已出）：
1 the number of students (boys 32 girls 28)
2 what do you think of english
3 how do you learn english in your free time (magazines tv radio etc)
4 your english programs (plays songs etc)
5 ending（结束语）
good evening ladies and gentlemen
welcome to our class and welcome to our english evening
first of all let me say a few words about our class
good evening ladies and gentlemen
welcome to our class and welcome to our english evening
first of all let me say a few words about our class there are 60 students in our class 32 of us are boys and the others are girls most of us like english and study hard at it in our free time we often read english books newspapers and magazines sometimes we learn english on the radio and sometimes on tv this evening you＇ll enjoy some short plays songs dances and so on by our classmates
i hope you＇ll like these programs and have a good time
thank you
根情况写篇短文介绍位笔友
李华英文名tony第中学年级二班学生．出生1989年8月12日．出生广东深圳．年13岁爱音乐篮球．喜欢英语爱玩电脑游戏．常放学学篮球． b)写短文介绍开头已出
i have a good pen pal let me tell you something about him
________________________________________________________________
i have a good penfriend let me tell you something about him his name is li hua he has an english name it is tony he is a middle school student in class two grade one of no 1 middle school he is 13 years old now he was born in shenzhen guangdong his birthday is august the twentieth he likes playing basketball and listening to music he often plays basketball with his classmates after school his favourite subject is english and he likes playing computer games best i like to write to him he is my good friend
请校办公室名义英语发notice告知初二学生明天四方作调查注意事项写提示里题目：notice写作提示：
1visit four places
2tomorrowleave after breakfast at 800
3lunch at the place of visit
4come back in the afternoon
5four groupseach group to a place
6each class a groupsay which place you want to visitthen tell the office
notice
all the students in grade two will visit four places tomorrowyou will leave school after breakfast at 8 o＇ clocklunch will be at the place of visitall must come back in the afternooneach class will be a groupthere＇ ll be four groups togethereach group will visit a placeplease tell the school office which place you want to visit
school office in no14 middle school
may 16th2014
朋友jean发生争执反省觉必写封信道歉提意见请发封email表示诚意60词
dear jean
i am sorry to argue with you several days agowe haven＇ t talked with each other these daysyou are my best friendaren＇ t you
few days ago when i heard you lost my lovely booki was really madso i argued with youand said that i could not be your friend from then onlateri didn＇ t sleep well those daysi always remembered a lot of fun we hadso i decided to write a letter to say sorry to youi also think you should be careful and take good care of your thingslet＇ s be best friends againok假han meimei现青州中学笔友mary邀请参加聚会请英语写封信mary点：
1．抱歉
2．母亲病医生卧床日顾母亲
3．谢谢寄漂亮明信片喜欢放书桌
dear mary
thank you very much for inviting me to your party． but i am very sorry i can＇t come．my mother is ill． the doctor asks her to stay in bed for several days． i have to take care of my mother．thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard． i like it very much． i am going to put it on my desk．could i hear from you soon﹖give my best wishes to your family．
yours
han meimei
集邮（collect stamps）爱？请谈谈集邮历史果没谈谈爱容写篇60词左右短文
i like to collect many thingssuch as nice stonesnames of moviesbookstoysphotos of famous peoplebut i like collecting stamps besti have been collecting stamps for five yearswhen i was very youngmy uncle sent me a stamp from australiai loved it at oncesince then i tried to collect stamps and fell in love with iti have more than one hundred stampssome were sent by my friendssome were collected by myselfsome were from foiregn countriessome were chinesei like themofteni take them out and show them to my friends
张鹏林涛信询问样学英语请根面点回封信遇什困难放弃天花时间学英语记忆单词量阅读英文书报等听唱英语歌英语更感兴趣
dear lin tao
i am glad to receive your last letter you want to know how to learn english well here is my advice
you mustn’t give up whatever you meet any difficulties that you meet every day you should spend some time in learning english remember as many english words as possible and try your best to use them
read english books magazines or newspapers as often as you can it is useful and important for you to improve your english i think listening or singing english songs can make you more interested in english learning
hope you make great progress in your english learning
yours zhangpeng
回复友问侯(reply for regards)
directions you have just had an operation and received a note of regards from your friend jenny now please write a reply to her to tell her your current situation
you should write about 100 words
jan8th
dear jenny
thanks for your letter of sympathy i received the day before yesterday the operation on my leg was a wonderful success you know i had been suffering a lot from my leg since my childhood
the operation removed the cause of trouble it is quite worth having the operation i am daily recovering from my illness i’m confident i will soon be in the office again after proper treatment thank you for kind wishes
my best wishes to all your family
×××
话题作文
1 关中国传统技艺术（例剪纸）
paper cutting can be seen in many parts of china during the spring festival people paste patterns on the window door lintel or desks for the festival atmosphere
the ancient people cut papers into animals or people a thousand years ago paper cut was used for decoration some people made a living by it
paper cutting is all made by hand noncraftsmen need only a knife and paper paper cutting covers nearly all topics from flowers birds animals legendary people figures in classic novels to types of facial makeup in peking opera paper cutting has various styles in different parts of china
at present there are factories and associations for paper cutting in china exhibitions and exchanges are held regularly paper cutting has changed from decoration to a kind of art at the same time paper cutting also appears in cartoons on stage in magazines or in tv series
2 关水
water and life
as humanwe should know the importance of water
a bout 70 composition of a person＇s body is waterwithout water there will be no life and now the world is in short of fresh water so we should do something to save water how to do it firstwe shouldn＇tkeep water running without stop after washing second the water used for washing fruit and vegetables can also be used in cleanning floor and washing the toilet
everyone on the earth should remember not to waste water so that our life and our offspring’s life can be better
环境污染世界问题根提示请写篇短文介绍样保护节约水资源（how can we protect and save water in our daily life）
容包括方面：
生命离开水
饮水减少
水污染严重 (water pollution serious)
应该保护节约水
water is very important to humans we can’t live without water there is less and less water on the
earth but some people don’t seem to care of that they waste a lot of water they pour water into rivers lakes and pollute them they throw rubbish into them too many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted we must do something to stop the pollution and save water we must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it if we don’t the last drop of water will be a teardrop
healthy eating habits题写篇英语发言稿呼吁学复期间注意饮食养成良饮食惯
dear friends
as we all know we live on what we eat food is the best medicine therefore food is very important to us however there are still many bad eating habits among us students some of us often go to school without breakfast some like to have snacks some others are particular about food and still some eat or drink too much all these bad habits will surely do harm to our healthto keep fit we should have various healthy diets including fish meat vegetables fruit as well as main food besides we’d better have meals at a regular time if we get into good habits of eating meals it will be good for us what is more good eating habits can protect us from all kinds of illnesses
in my opinion we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body after all health is the most important in our life only in this way can we study better
that’s all thank you
3 关网络
the internet in our life
internet plays a very important role in our life it has some advantages and disadvantages
first of all there is a lot of information on the internet if we need some information we can get it quickly for example if i want to know today’s news i can find it soon through the internet in this way it saves our time and money we can also listen to some music so that we won’t feel so tired after school
but the internet can also do harm many students like playing computer games and forget to studyoverallthe internet has done a lot for us but we should use it properly
电脑天改变着生活电脑做事情例写文章办公玩游戏重通计算机网网做更事情网购物查材料世界交流总电脑网络生活越越方便根提示 英语写篇少80词作文
computers are changing our life day by day we can do many things on computers for example we can write articles do office work and play games but the most important usage of computers is to get on the internet we can do more things on the internet we may do shopping search information and communicate with people all around the world in short computers and internet are making our life more and more convenient
第四篇：辅导初中作文
浅谈初中作文教学
众周知作文教学语文教学中非常重组成部分考试中占40％例分数说占语文学科半壁江山学生作文水普遍低数学生谈文色变提起笔搜肠刮肚半天写出字学生见作文心烦老师呢？害怕作文教学努力讲解学生适筹莫展特作文批改工作更费时费力吃力讨学生写作水难提高师生感奈烦恼
具体情况呢？妨组作文例子初二节作文课求学生母亲题写篇文章结果出现种情况：
a学开头样写道：老母老母亲直身边常吴闲严厉面写母亲督促做作业事老母伟应该努力学报答老母养育恩回报整篇文章够300百字流水帐白话连篇 b
学开头样写道：七八岁时身体常生病母亲常带病接着第二段写风雨交加夜晚发高烧母亲背着病路母亲雨伞移身结果母亲浑身雨水淋湿漉漉感动段感谢母亲结束全文 c学写较开头样写：母亲普通劳动妇女生中导师十五春夏秋冬数艰难困苦您母亲总辞劳苦毫怨言陪走接着段详细写遇困难时母亲教导克服困难获成功第次写作文验足懂文法结果交白卷回家件事告诉母亲母亲便牺牲休息时间教导写作技巧帮助寻找写作灵感纠正错字直深夜第二天作文交老师老师表扬作文写错心底感激母亲十三岁懵懂成长总觉母亲苦口婆心叮咛唠叨母亲发生争执意间见母亲灯光流泪时终读懂母亲心段果说取成绩懂做道理感谢母亲结束全文整篇文章文笔流畅详略写
作文例子中难发现学生写作水参差齐意什原造成呢？想原三：
学生阅读量太少导致词语积累少词达意
古云：熟读唐诗三百首会作诗会吟年着考试指挥棒魔力断增学生整天沉浸题海战术里注意考试技巧力少时间机会阅读量课外书籍加现中学生电视剧游戏机网qq时读报散文少文学名著更少时缺少积累词语惯导致学生知识贫乏书面表达出白话连篇词达意口语化加强甚写出文章知道难懂例a学写 1

二学生生活单调枯燥导致题材缺乏写作时话说
叶圣陶先生说：作文件事离开生活生活充实什程度会造成什文章生活作文素材取源泉现中学生生活方程式：吃饭－学－睡觉三点线非常淡加学生身少积极解社会解生活学生写作时总写毫新意题材例b学写
三缺乏写作兴趣导致作文生畏
学生学基础差少尝试成功喜悦加老师少鼓励批评等原学生作文生畏仰视作文积极进入作文实践中久久作文反感情绪越越种情况写出作文天方夜谭
四学生基础知识掌握够导致作文时方法欠缺偏题离题
种原现许学生基础知识掌握够基词汇句式语法修辞等知识少少现中学生通病接作文题假思索想什写什作文切合题目否错字满篇语句通更谈什立意谋篇写作方法技巧总作文交行
面中学生写作文时存诸类问题作中学语文教师应该样指导学生摆脱写作困境步入写作佳境呢？认应方面入手：
读写结合读促写
阅读写作基础现少学生两耳闻窗外事心读教科书认学书知识够时少阅读课外书籍缺少写作材料缺少写作鉴作文生畏果作文话说物写必须积累写作材料应该通提高阅读力促进学生写作力提高
（） 读写联系相互影响
读写着密切联系古云：读书破万卷笔神非常形象反映读写促进作语文教学中读写行发展读书阅读力强文章写精彩读书少肯定会写文章相反果写句话觉难读书会里呢？样写读书般阅读文章力定非般司马迁通读古籍写出鲁迅誉古绝唱韵离骚史记李白杜甫王维等文学非造诣读书止万卷钱钟书博览群书学贯中西著作精彩绝伦样例子胜枚举说明读写关系 吕叔湘先生说：阅读领学会写文章难道出读写密切关系力构成基思维转化程中学生作文力发展规律积累模仿鉴创造积累作文材料积累包括生活历积累知识技语言积累知识技语言积累助阅读通阅读学生学文章写作规律种写作技巧积累量语汇提高语言表 2
达力基础学生通模仿鉴佳作技巧语言思路手法典型实例灵活运文章中完成文章写作学生作文力发展定程度时
会觉觉摆脱模仿鉴拐杖独立进行创作学生作文水提高反助阅读理解力概括力思维记忆力提高助知识技积累语言积累形成良性循环
样读写会达相互补充相互促进相益彰效果
（二）激发学生阅读兴趣培养学生阅读惯循序渐进提高学生阅读力
①激发学生阅读兴趣呢
苏霍姆林斯基说：智力方面工作赖兴趣知果学丧失兴趣信心丧失求知欲学效果谈起现代资讯发达日常书面语言范围频率已远远少口语电视直接面五彩缤纷电视画面电脑紧张刺激游戏qq闲聊少兴趣阅读中外名著？少名著说出然？尤中学生更加缺乏阅读兴趣提高中学生写作水首先培养阅读兴趣兴趣动力孔子说：知者者者乐者说兴趣学生觉性形成作提高学生阅读兴趣根学生年龄特点研究学生阅读兴趣阅读心理指导学生进行阅读时采形式样丰富彩读书活动激发学生健康阅读兴趣例组织学生进行课外阅读时组织学生进行交流学生说说读部书篇文章独特感受体验理解样通常说千读者千哈姆雷特样学生体差异文章体会感受相说充分肯定足中肯纠正样师生讨变言堂群言堂果学生体会探究问题根源快乐开始试着阅读获丰富知识学生阅读兴趣会慢慢增强听说读写力会提高
②时注意培养阅读惯
叶圣陶说：什教育？简单句话养成良惯良语文学惯学力容标志学成功重前提充分说明培养阅读惯语文重性
首先培养学生边读边动笔惯俗话说：记性烂笔头阅读程中理解字词句做记录助工具书请教解决单纯教师满堂灌效果培养学生时记录读书心惯提高学生阅读力表达力帮助
次培养学生摘录积累惯文豪苏轼张博约取厚积薄发学生养成摘录积累惯学生正确模仿做准备鲁迅先生说：必须蜜蜂
样采许花酿出蜜叮出非常限说明积累作文十分重作学生提笔作文 3
左右逢源信手拈气呵成取竭势究原便积累功夫阅读意识收集整理阅读材料中词语句式名名言等材料储备丰富少学生写作苦言题轻叹根原缺乏素材腹中空空仓库储存素材寡直接关系作文质量应培养学生积累素材良惯
三 培养学生写作兴趣
兴趣积极探究某种事物某项活动时产生快感兴致激发剂培养学生作文兴趣呢
第善发现闪光点时肯定鼓励俗话说乐彼学种东西兴趣关重获知识进行创造性创作种觉动机鼓舞推动学生创作动力提高写作水重途径作文教学中鼓励学生创作培养创作兴趣推荐发表文章激发学生创作办法学生作文批改时面批书面批找长处中发现闪光点加肯定鼓励次作文时求学生认真选出佳作张贴出课堂朗读出怕字妙开头写精彩衷心表扬番激发学生写作兴趣记次班位成绩较差学时写作文语句通词达意写够字数次发现作文选材错 新颖特意指导番然作文讲评课作文感情朗读出肯定进步建议全班学学写作态度积极次写够字数时会认真阅读课外书作文教学中老师应创造机会种水学生获写作成功体验享受成功喜悦样更加激发学生写作兴趣
第二施教分类指导俗话说：十指头长短学生作文水高低致种正常现象刀切教法学生吃饱差学生吃消会学生失兴趣产生消极心理行次作文根学生程度提出求务分类指导学生鼓励参加类作文竞赛积极报刊投稿发表满足实现需差学生降低求减少难度努力达目标激发写作兴趣
四培养学生观察生活善思考心灵感受世界惯
作文源生活身边天发生着计数新鲜事惜学生视见听闻学生写起作文话说事写象挤牙膏似想句写句生编硬套字词够究原生活缺乏观察惯思考鲁迅说：
创作第必须观察贮备丰富材料写文章挥洒活生生中写作材料善观察善思考写作源泉定长流息问渠清许源头活水观察汲取生活源泉获作文素材重手段身边缺少美缺少发现美眼睛必须热爱生活时时处处做生活心观察生活发现生活中真善美假恶丑思考生活观察现象问 4
什？拥思想周围点点滴滴形成法独见解总生活观察越细致描写事物越生动培养学生观察生活善思考心灵感受世界惯
五 帮助学生纳写作方法技巧提高写作水
1．教学生写作技巧――定靓丽标题题目文章眼睛醒目标题篇文章引注目亮点想文题靓丽新颖引导学生采方法：a引式直接引材料中心相吻合诗句名句歌词俗语广告做文章标题类文题醒目易引起读者鸣例世妈妈b修辞式修辞格拟标题常见喻拟代等手法种方法拟定标题形象传神感染力例环保话题作文标题拟树叹息
c 标点式标点符号属声语言标点作文章标题文章新颖独特引发读者究竟兴趣例生活？？？
2．提供策略方法指导――写开头结尾古文章开头称凤头文章结尾称豹尾开头引注目热先声夺感结尾回眸笑百媚生老师应样指导学生写开头结尾？提供方法例开头写法：①巧修辞展示风采②悬念入题引入胜③抒情开篇真情感④转折入题生动深刻⑤描写入题然真挚结尾方法：①然收束式②画龙点睛式③首尾呼应式④名言警句式⑤抒情议式
3．写作文必须指导学生锤炼词语善修辞文章增添光彩孔子说：言文行远精品佳作定求富文采语言淡索然寡味瘦难瘪三文章理然遭啐弃决定指导学生作文前提思想：中学生写作文定先光彩夺目然淡然作作文初学者写作文时候时刻丰富词汇优美文辞吸引读者博取作文高分写作文必须指导学生锤炼词语善修辞文章增添光彩
总冰冻三尺非日寒全面提高学生作文水需语文教师胆改革调动学生积极性养成良作文惯扬长避短具体写作实践中提高写作水作文教学老难中老难永远成
第五篇：初中作文辅导讲义
初中作文辅导讲义第三章立意力(20141016 153324)转载标签：杂谈 分类：作文
力定位
立意确定题题通物事件情节叙述描写表现出种思想题文章灵魂根红线贯穿全篇成整篇文章中心文章选材剪裁结构表达题受题约束篇文章立意成败质量高低决定篇文章成败质量优劣笔前定立意番功夫
点阐释
初中语文纲提出：根写作需确定表达容中心初中写作训练基求作文成功关键确定题射箭靶子登山目标夜船航灯立意求简括五：
（）正确谓正确指文中表现观点思想必须符合马列义毛泽东思想符合正确伦理观念道德标准必须积极意义法必须符合客观实际读受教益写文章基求课文件珍贵衬衫通叙述件衬衫历高度赞扬周总理爱护民关心群众易高贵品质立意正确少数学认识水低缺乏非观念时错误东西成正确宣扬譬作文题尝试．考生谈恋爱架偷东西吸烟等坏行写进持肯定态度样立意错特错
（二）深刻谓深刻指文章立意应该揭示事物质读深受启发深受教育事件中出思想光辉深度层次性等等琐忆文记叙作者鲁迅先生交中件事歌颂鲁迅先生横眉冷千夫指俯首甘孺子牛伟格表达鲁迅先生永远怀念深深崇敬样立意深刻
（三）鲜明文章作者爱什恨什赞成什反什孰美孰丑谁谁非态度必须明朗旗帜必须鲜明例火刑文．记叙描写抒情议饱含布鲁诺坚持科学捍卫真理英勇屈视死高尚格伟精神热情赞颂读感受鲜明印象深刻外明白立意求鲜明表达
时注意含蓄说题蕴涵具体记叙描写中般宜明显话语揭示出表现物勤劳品质通具体事生动细节表现宜勤劳二字成标签贴物身记叙件意义事宜空洞抽象意义说通应具体情节中然显示出记叙中适插抒情议必深化题起画龙点睛作种龙睛数量位置限决胡点滥点否周身睛便成龙
（四）集中篇文章题思想全文围绕中心写学作文时想写想写结果写出文章漫中心中心实际没中
心作文题惯学生写作时选取常电视里高水足球赛惯表现通观足球赛培养爱国情操题记叙惯时中间穿插段中日争夺奥运会出线权足球赛样原题外增添新题反淡题知云
（五）立意新颖新角度立意意高文胜耳目新感话题作文拔河常规立意加强团结心协力类考生团结协作基础深挖方联想双方团结联想竞争双方相互竞争角度立意子突破庸见显深刻致令振奋
实例解说
实例：家新鲜事
题解：家限制选材范围新鲜限定材料性质题眼文记事情前般家庭里少出现者已出现没引起注意家里应第次出现注意新鲜时重现材料思想意义立意时联系时代背景反映时代精神处选材处立意写文题构思原
立意：
①爸爸营服装生意年赚笔钱乐全家合拢嘴富民政策啊
②写爸爸先前学文化学科学偏见着工厂改革断发展认识学重性努力学动参加厂里职业培训回家继续钻研碰懂问题竟师虚心求教说明社会行业知识重视渴求
③周末爸爸持召开家庭时事报告会爸妈积极登台演讲讲述评议国外重事件抒见气氛热烈表现关心国家事天翁精神
辨析：立意①合题意说赚表明件事家非首次谈新鲜社会商赚钱皆更算新鲜立意②立意鞠躬充分表现孝敬③④⑤较立意合题深度
实例二文题材料：英国诗柯勒律治读者分四类：第类计时沙漏读书漏沙注进头点痕迹没留第二类海绵什吸收挤挤流出东西原封动甚脏第三类滤豆浆布袋豆浆流留豆渣第四类宝石矿床里苦工矿渣甩旁拣纯净宝石读段名言受什启发？请属类读者？题联系实际写篇议文
解说：
明显段名言中心思想告诉正确读书方法做沙漏海绵布袋似读者做宝石矿床里苦工样读者书山中拾取纯净宝石中心思想实际写议文中心点确定中心点写般议文样举出生活中事例进行证行
实例三文题材料：赵国家里老鼠成灾吃苦头中山国猫猫会捉老鼠爱咬鸡月家老鼠确实没鸡没子事发愁说：什猫赶走呢？说：道理懂家祸害老鼠没鸡老鼠偷吃粮食咬坏衣服穿通墙壁毁家具器皿挨饿受冻没鸡害处更？没鸡吃鸡罢离挨饿受冻远着呢什猫赶走呢？求：根寓言理解联系实际写篇议文
解说：
寓言事角度思考说明道理说角度概括中心思想：①失②世界事物十全十美利必弊③问题全面正面反面④问题流方材料种思想决定材料种立意题目没作限制抓住中种立意取点余
高效训练
（）面题已角度分立意请辨析立意优劣
1．题目：家庭风波
审题：家庭限制取材范围风波喻纠纷乱子限定材料性质家温暖说明什时候充满笑语亲间互相体贴说什时候融洽间隙矛盾处．分歧处家庭旋律温馨睦种协调插曲认识见解差异日常生活中种种避免磕碰思想意识交锋兄弟姊妹间缝隙老少辈间代沟见认真分析实际情况作文题素材丰富然篇文章中够反映种矛盾突说反映种矛盾决定历体会应根材料积累定选材时量选家庭中重事件样立意会较深．叙述时易出波折会增加文章分量注意事件结果般宜矛盾化解喜剧收场
立意：
（1〕爷爷婚爷爷年六十五岁奶奶前年世爷爷心灵孤独朋友帮助产生婚念头姑妈支持件事父母叔叔坚决反
（２）年优异成绩考市重点中学家庭济条件爸爸想学妈妈肯定说：穷’字娃前途耽误砸锅卖铁念
（3）电视报道知长江嫩江洪灾严重消息爸妈心情沉重决定灾区民献片爱心捐款数额发生争执
２．题目：事悔
审题事文章基容文章中心物叙事称悔重点题旨发’心深处种表白文章思想感情凝聚点行文紧扣悔深处立意材料必须回味价值启发深思信手拈写题前提
立意
（ｌ）物理单元考前帮助邻居陈冬复功课结果物理考砸事悔
（２）升学考试时升高级学校买通班里尖子生张军请关终考取理想学校心安没什悔毕竟愿偿进入梦寐求重点中学
（3）昨天学块街买东西店老板忙乱中找十元钱发现退事说嘴肉吐出傻瓜点悔
（4）高考前夕舅舅美国电话说公司生意兴隆急需招聘员工希前职保证更加优厚遇快谢绝舅舅意决心全力赴考取名牌师范学毕生精力献祖国教育事业亲戚朋友说昏头认准条路
（二）读面事选择恰角度拟题目写篇短评
材料：山忧心忡忡卵石说：孙骨肉越长越呢？：峥嵘峻峭岩石磷峋岿然动：根基没棱没角处乱滚成什样子？卵石然回答：样子什？
（提示：三方面立意：山角度喻老辈革命者劳动者坚韧刚强身洋溢着民族精神立面卵石代表时部分缺少信仰波逐流青年二卵石角度喻气蓬勃青年代敢破传统锐意改革断适应社会发展需立面山代表老辈中具保守思想惯新生事物部分三山卵石重谈谈代沟问题意老辈青年代互相理解互相信
（四）列作文题确立点？深新？
1．谈压力
（提示：确立样点：①化压力动力②压力怕怕没压力③正确心态压力④压力太会精神崩溃⑤父母孩子太精神压力⑥压力适度⑦加压点中⑦富新意般样外压力角度思考点立足样断超越实现新突破）
2．减负
（提示：确立样点：①减少作业量②减少考试次数③减轻学生重负担④减负学生题海战术中解放出⑤重减轻学生心理负担⑥增效减负⑦减负项系统工程点中①②较浅事事⑥⑦较深⑥揭示增效减负相互存制约转化辩证关系具启发性⑦着眼全局整体视野开阔）
3．前印度位富裕农民寻找埋藏宝石土变卖家产出外探索吃少苦获终贫困死卖出土里发现世界珍贵祖母绿宝石
（提示：材料中提炼出点：①宝贵东西许身边②珍惜拥③善发现潜力④解世界捷径解）

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