成考:英语议文写作方法技巧
英语议文写作具体点(点)限定需横捭阖旁征博引麻雀五脏俱全篇100字议文样必须逻辑严密结构清晰语言洗练必须中心言笔者试篇章结构句子修辞词汇运等三方面谈谈写篇议文基方法技巧
篇章结构
()先规矩然心欲逾矩
议文写作住正反两方面述约定俗成议模式题句正面述反面述结四块营造文章基结构(四块)例某题目求述学校规定课间学生呆教室里’?话题果作者认学校规定应该文章第块(段)亮出观点:There is currently much discussion about whether students should stay in their own classrooms or not during break timesPersonally I believe that—第二块应该正面述课间呆教室里理说:I would argue that break times are our only opportunity to choose what we want to do 第三块反面观点课间呆教室里出发批驳方观点进步阐述方观点例说:Another reason why people say that students have to stay in their own classes at break times is that it would be difficult to organize dinners块(段)语言次强调已方观点乍议文四块仿佛八股文嫌疑四块符合认知规律值模仿操练
(二)围绕中心述确保述容直接题服务
例中学生课间时呆教室里题句述时应该紧紧围绕学写时候先说学生课间允许班级活动交更朋友然说交更朋友学更知识学更知识社会做出更贡献种述方式貌似环环相扣承前启实中心涣散流水账说仅读者会头雾水连作者会忘说什
(三)确立写点置段段首
整篇文章整篇文章中心点段落段落分点选取点时问问:点否会信服?果—点连说服放弃段落点呈现羞羞答答犹报琵琶半遮面深藏露读者总结纳必须文章开篇段落开头亮出点置篇首段首
纲举目张确保跑题前提两例子中第结构松散群龙首令读者知云第二例子中心突出章法严谨请:
1Firstlyit is very convenient in daily lifeThere are many shops and supermarkets in a cityI can buy everything I need easily in these placesWhen I am sickI can easily see a doctor in any clinic or hospitalTransport services are good in a citywhen I want to go somewhereI can take a busa train or something elseThere are also many kinds of entertainment in a cityPublic buildings(such as libraries)and parks can easity be found in a citytoo
2Firstit is convenient and comfortable to live in a cityTo begin withthere is good housing in a cityas all the houses and flats are wellequipped with good facilities and surrounded by modern amenities such as places of entertainmentpublic libraries and parks
中心句写法讲究中心句必须高度概括段落关键词应该—中重复适体现种关痛痒叙述说明性句子适宜作中心句例:
1Students always feel relaxed and happy during breaks(叙述性句子)
2Break times are scheduled for about 10 minutes(说明性句子)
述学校规定课间学生呆班级里’?篇学生作:Although some people believe that students should stay in their own classrooms during break timesI would like to argue that we should be allowed to spend break times in another class
The most important reason for believing that is that many students have friends in other classesWe spend all day in our own classroomand break times are the only time we have to spend with other friendsIt can become very tedious(令厌倦)to have to spend even more time with the same people
A further reason for allowing student to choose where they spend their break times is that it would stop arguementsIf students are forced to spend time with classmates who are not good friendsthey can annoy each otherThis leads to problems that have to be sorted out by teachersTeachers argue that we all should stay in our own classesbecause it is then easier to know what is going onThey say that it is difficult to keep track of students when they are walking round the corridorsHoweverstudents could be given the chance to choose a different classroom to spend the whole break time inThat would mean that there would not be any students in the corridors
As I have explainedalthough it might be a little easier to manage when everyone stays in their own classroomit would make break times happier for all students if they were allowed to choose where they spent their time
篇范文符合四块基模式正反述兼顾结构严谨中心突出
二句子修辞
()应修辞增强说服力
适采喻头韵(连续数单词头音头字母相)夸张等修辞手法采幽默行结构等写作手法道理说更加透彻观点表达更加鲜明淡容表现更加生动更传递信息增添文采激发读者鸣例:
1Many people have tried a thousand times before they achieve their goals(夸张)
2Only a madman would choose to live in a modern city(夸张)
3Our life would be like soup without salt or flowers without sunlight(喻)
4The best way is to reducereuse and recycle(头韵)
5For childrenthe Internet is another way to waste more hours(幽默)
6If you want to earn a satisfactory grade in the training programyou must arrive punctuallyyou must behave courteouslyand you must study conscientiously(行结构)值注意喻等修辞格谚语等引关作者英语文化理解英语中意义理解相径庭容易误学认真分析应环境起锦添花果没十分握切生搬硬套否会适反
(二)表达位言成理通常
作者述观点清楚观点传达读者时词准确逻辑欠严密受中国式思维干扰令表达位结果读者堕五里雾中作者应站读者立场考虑问题始终牢记读者明明白判断写作否成功重标准
请表达位例句改正方法
1They gave me what I needbut not what I want析:want译想汉语角度整句子流畅英语逻辑wantneed意义极易混淆整句子意义表达位含糊清改:They have given me what I need but not What I often ask for
2Maybe there are also some disadvantages of living in a citybut I think they are less importantI feel convenient and comfortable
析:句子半部分逻辑关系未交代清楚令前语搭语感觉改:Theere are surely disadvantages of living in a citytoobut they are less important and tend to be deemphasizedFor the sake of the advantages mentioned aboveI prefer to live in a city
3Different people have different choicesSome people like living in a city and some people like living in a village析:Choice含义十分宽泛面like相称应改:Different people have different likes and dislikesSome like to live in a cityothers like to live in a village
4The peoplethe society and so on were quite different from now析:The peoplethe society然足读者完全理解述话题改:The peopIethe society and other aspects of life were quite different from now
5Thieves should be sentenced for what they have done析:sentence未免言实应改:Thieves should be punished for their wrongdoing
(三)简洁洗练言烦语言简洁力
文风干净利落议文重特征应该指出句子长短英雄长句未必简洁短句未必哆咳作者写作时力求做章冗段段冗句句冗词改变断断拖泥带水现象
1The Are No Good Reasons Why Boys and Girls Should Not Be Treated Equally析:标题句作者滥双重否定句子长宜改:Boys and Girls Should Be Given Equal Treatment
2For instanceI knew how to communicate with other people and how to look after myselfThe most important thing was that I learn to be independent析:意义讲look after myselfindependent关系紧密合起句子改:For instanceI knew how to communicate with others and how to look after myself as an independent girl
3Moreoveras some girls study harder than boysthey may be even superior析:moreover继续句会干扰读者思维改:Moreoversome girls are very dilgentAs a resultthey may prove superior to ordinary boys
4What I mean to say is that wellintentioned lawmakers sometimes make fools of themselves析:what句未提供新信息删句子改:Wellintentioned law—makers sometimes make fools of themselves
三词汇运
()书面语少口头语
相口头语言书面语更增添文章厚重感读者文章信感列组句子中第二句书面语言词更加规范前句子略胜—筹
1We still have the social problems
The same social problems still exist today 2For methere is no need for further protection of woodlands As far as Im concernedfurther protection of woodlands is not needed 3With the development of computer technology commercial information exchange is
becoming easier
Computers have greatly influenced business communication 4Everything has two sides and this problem is quite the same Everything has two sides and this issue is not an exception (二)连接词句子间连接词文章脉络更加清晰逻辑关系更加流畅例:
1The water was pollutedAs a resultthe fish died
2Howeverothers think we should have junk food
3On the other hand packaging can have many disadvantages
4Firstly many people die of passive smoking(动吸烟)and secondly it can aggravate(恶化)lung diseases
相关连接词:On the contraryall in allin shortgenerallyworse stillon the other handin conclusionas a consequencehencealsopersonallyfurthermoredefinitelysurelyundoubtedlyobviouslyadditionallyin additionmoreoverconsequentlyclearlybesidesas welllikewisein my opinionfor the sake oflast but not the leastto begin withfirstly(first)etc
时候常句式句子承启相关信息巧妙渡衔接例:
The main reason is that
I cant agree more
Another thing we cant forget is that
There is every reason to believe that
As we all know
总言篇议文总结构逻辑语言等方面略胜筹
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