初中一年级作文辅导（精选多篇）

初中年级作文辅导(精选篇)
第篇：初中作文辅导
点思考力
什感悟？感悟事物感触领悟某种道理某种哲理某种诗化思想
什作文中感悟？作文中感悟通事景物生活现象抒写表现表达感受领悟感悟类作文时会更深度表现出动心弦作
篱笆铁钉
前脾气坏男孩爸爸袋钉子告诉次发脾气者吵架院子篱笆钉颗钉子
第天男孩钉37颗钉子日子里慢慢学着控制脾气天钉钉子逐渐减少发现控制脾气实际钉钉子容易终天颗钉子没钉高兴件事告诉爸爸
爸爸说：果天没发脾气篱笆拔掉颗钉子
日子天天篱笆钉子拔光
爸爸带篱笆边说：子做篱笆钉孔吧永远恢复原样子吵架说难听话会心里留伤疤钉子洞样
啊
原文结尾：
啊伤害家道歉伤疤总留知道心灵伤疤身体伤疤样难恢复
雄赳赳父子
次登黄山感慨万千雄赳赳父子
山途中父亲子说：苦累定帮奶声奶气子挺挺胸：苦累许帮——说
登天峰顶段困难攀登途中亲眼目睹父子悲壮先子摔倒父亲伸手扶满头汗子摆摆手拒绝毕竟摔挺重摇摇晃晃难站稳父亲想伸手扶毅然手收回
怦然心动道风景道父亲理智子坚毅画美风景步脚印勇敢坚定前走终登天峰
山高白云身边飘仿佛撕片擦汗手绢呼啸山风中深刻父爱肃然起敬然更会怀疑奶声奶气孩子肯定会长成真正鹰
根容理解文章选结尾说说原
a雄赳赳父子
b祝愿越飞越远越飞越高
c时刻明白道理：孩子交磨难爸爸真正理智爸爸甜美种伤害位父亲深谙道理
鱼鱼
鱼问鱼道：妈妈朋友告诉钓饵东西美点危险样尝种美味保证安全？孩子鱼说两者存安全办法绝吃说便宜取代价鱼说完全错鱼说便宜恰贵希图付代价整生命知道里面裹着钓钩判断里面没钓钩必须掌握什样原呢？鱼问原实说鱼说
种东西味道美便宜似付代价钓钩藏里面蚕
生活中织厚厚茧
种细细柔韧丝织成痛苦丝织成
埋怨气愤然焦急甚折磨想死结束时死突破网表示抗议
终疲劳征服沉沉睡着做许梦关花草梦关风水梦关阳光彩虹梦关爱追逐生育女梦……
梦里安定欣慰力量热情……
觉醒突然明白拯救牙齿吐丝根根咬断咬破织茧
果然新光芒投云隙间阳光刺激着眼睛新空气清新酒陶醉简直跳起
简直飞起
伸腰果然飞起原沉睡时刻背长出两片粉翅膀
便记住切告诉子孙：
感悟类文章特点
叙说事件
讲述事
叙写种现象
转述传说
描绘种景物
吟咏类物品
然亮出精美闪光道理 想写感悟类作文积累生活观察现象积累富哲理语言（ 重仅仅语言素材身智慧学会哲理思考）
点感染力 作文题：真没想
求：选选事选景选物写篇少600字记叙文 构思提示：写记事写景状物升华出点什表达什样感悟表达感悟句话力求精炼点哲理点诗意点理性……
第二篇：初中二年级作文辅导
根提示请school rules题写篇短文话提示：学校规章制度面学校规章制度请位新生mary作介绍容包括：
1 课迟
2 教室保持(keep)干净安静
3 见老师问（greet)
4 允许教室里吃东西
5 许课堂听音乐玩游戏
6 损害花草树木（pick flowers climb trees）
school rules
welcome to our school mary here are someofour school rules let me tell you we can＇t arrive late for class we can＇t talk loudly in class we have to be quiet in class and we have to keep our class clean when we meet the teachers on the way we must greet them we can＇t eat or drink in the classroom but we can eat outside we can＇t listen to music or play games in class either we can＇t pick flowers or climb trees
根提示写封60~80字信
tom 邀请li ping 参加周日生日宴会li ping父母出差月回奶奶卧病床需顾说英语考试法前参加生日宴会li ping感抱歉写信辞谢
dear tom
thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday partyi＇d love to go but i can＇tmy parent____________________________________from li ping
dear tom
thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday partyi＇d love to go but i can＇tmy parents are out on businessthey are coming back next monthand now i have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bedand i also need to study for my coming english exami＇m very sorry but i can＇t go to your partythank you for asking mei hope you can have a good time
英国朋友参加班举行英语晚会作持需英语准备份6080词欢迎辞包括英文提示容（开头已出）：
1 the number of students (boys 32 girls 28)
2 what do you think of english
3 how do you learn english in your free time (magazines tv radio etc)
4 your english programs (plays songs etc)
5 ending（结束语）
good evening ladies and gentlemen
welcome to our class and welcome to our english evening
first of all let me say a few words about our class
good evening ladies and gentlemen
welcome to our class and welcome to our english evening
first of all let me say a few words about our class there are 60 students in our class 32 of us are boys and the others are girls most of us like english and study hard at it in our free time we often read english books newspapers and magazines sometimes we learn english on the radio and sometimes on tv this evening you＇ll enjoy some short plays songs dances and so on by our classmates
i hope you＇ll like these programs and have a good time
thank you
根情况写篇短文介绍位笔友
李华英文名tony第中学年级二班学生．出生1989年8月12日．出生广东深圳．年13岁爱音乐篮球．喜欢英语爱玩电脑游戏．常放学学篮球． b)写短文介绍开头已出
i have a good pen pal let me tell you something about him
________________________________________________________________
i have a good penfriend let me tell you something about him his name is li hua he has an english name it is tony he is a middle school student in class two grade one of no 1 middle school he is 13 years old now he was born in shenzhen guangdong his birthday is august the twentieth he likes playing basketball and listening to music he often plays basketball with his classmates after school his favourite subject is english and he likes playing computer games best i like to write to him he is my good friend
请校办公室名义英语发notice告知初二学生明天四方作调查注意事项写提示里题目：notice写作提示：
1visit four places
2tomorrowleave after breakfast at 800
3lunch at the place of visit
4come back in the afternoon
5four groupseach group to a place
6each class a groupsay which place you want to visitthen tell the office
notice
all the students in grade two will visit four places tomorrowyou will leave school after breakfast at 8 o＇ clocklunch will be at the place of visitall must come back in the afternooneach class will be a groupthere＇ ll be four groups togethereach group will visit a placeplease tell the school office which place you want to visit
school office in no14 middle school
may 16th2014
朋友jean发生争执反省觉必写封信道歉提意见请发封email表示诚意60词
dear jean
i am sorry to argue with you several days agowe haven＇ t talked with each other these daysyou are my best friendaren＇ t you
few days ago when i heard you lost my lovely booki was really madso i argued with youand said that i could not be your friend from then onlateri didn＇ t sleep well those daysi always remembered a lot of fun we hadso i decided to write a letter to say sorry to youi also think you should be careful and take good care of your thingslet＇ s be best friends againok假han meimei现青州中学笔友mary邀请参加聚会请英语写封信mary点：
1．抱歉
2．母亲病医生卧床日顾母亲
3．谢谢寄漂亮明信片喜欢放书桌
dear mary
thank you very much for inviting me to your party． but i am very sorry i can＇t come．my mother is ill． the doctor asks her to stay in bed for several days． i have to take care of my mother．thank you very much for sending me such a beautiful postcard． i like it very much． i am going to put it on my desk．could i hear from you soon﹖give my best wishes to your family．
yours
han meimei
集邮（collect stamps）爱？请谈谈集邮历史果没谈谈爱容写篇60词左右短文
i like to collect many thingssuch as nice stonesnames of moviesbookstoysphotos of famous peoplebut i like collecting stamps besti have been collecting stamps for five yearswhen i was very youngmy uncle sent me a stamp from australiai loved it at oncesince then i tried to collect stamps and fell in love with iti have more than one hundred stampssome were sent by my friendssome were collected by myselfsome were from foiregn countriessome were chinesei like themofteni take them out and show them to my friends
张鹏林涛信询问样学英语请根面点回封信遇什困难放弃天花时间学英语记忆单词量阅读英文书报等听唱英语歌英语更感兴趣
dear lin tao
i am glad to receive your last letter you want to know how to learn english well here is my advice
you mustn’t give up whatever you meet any difficulties that you meet every day you should spend some time in learning english remember as many english words as possible and try your best to use them
read english books magazines or newspapers as often as you can it is useful and important for you to improve your english i think listening or singing english songs can make you more interested in english learning
hope you make great progress in your english learning
yours zhangpeng
回复友问侯(reply for regards)
directions you have just had an operation and received a note of regards from your friend jenny now please write a reply to her to tell her your current situation
you should write about 100 words
jan8th
dear jenny
thanks for your letter of sympathy i received the day before yesterday the operation on my leg was a wonderful success you know i had been suffering a lot from my leg since my childhood
the operation removed the cause of trouble it is quite worth having the operation i am daily recovering from my illness i’m confident i will soon be in the office again after proper treatment thank you for kind wishes
my best wishes to all your family
×××
话题作文
1 关中国传统技艺术（例剪纸）
paper cutting can be seen in many parts of china during the spring festival people paste patterns on the window door lintel or desks for the festival atmosphere
the ancient people cut papers into animals or people a thousand years ago paper cut was used for decoration some people made a living by it
paper cutting is all made by hand noncraftsmen need only a knife and paper paper cutting covers nearly all topics from flowers birds animals legendary people figures in classic novels to types of facial makeup in peking opera paper cutting has various styles in different parts of china
at present there are factories and associations for paper cutting in china exhibitions and exchanges are held regularly paper cutting has changed from decoration to a kind of art at the same time paper cutting also appears in cartoons on stage in magazines or in tv series
2 关水
water and life
as humanwe should know the importance of water
a bout 70 composition of a person＇s body is waterwithout water there will be no life and now the world is in short of fresh water so we should do something to save water how to do it first
we shouldn＇tkeep water running without stop after washing second the water used for washing fruit and vegetables can also be used in cleanning floor and washing the toilet
everyone on the earth should remember not to waste water so that our life and our offspring’s life can be better
环境污染世界问题根提示请写篇短文介绍样保护节约水资源（how can we protect and save water in our daily life）
容包括方面：
生命离开水
饮水减少
水污染严重 (water pollution serious)
应该保护节约水
water is very important to humans we can’t live without water there is less and less water on the
earth but some people don’t seem to care of that they waste a lot of water they pour water into rivers lakes and pollute them they throw rubbish into them too many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted we must do something to stop the pollution and save water we must protect the water as well as find ways to reuse it if we don’t the last drop of water will be a teardrop
healthy eating habits题写篇英语发言稿呼吁学复期间注意饮食养成良饮食惯
dear friends
as we all know we live on what we eat food is the best medicine therefore food is very important to us however there are still many bad eating habits among us students some of us often go to school without breakfast some like to have snacks some others are particular about food and still some eat or drink too much all these bad habits will surely do harm to our healthto keep fit we should have various healthy diets including fish meat vegetables fruit as well as main food besides we’d better have meals at a regular time if we get into good habits of eating meals it will be good for us what is more good eating habits can protect us from all kinds of illnesses
in my opinion we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body after all health is the most important in our life only in this way can we study better
that’s all thank you
3 关网络
the internet in our life
internet plays a very important role in our life it has some advantages and disadvantages
first of all there is a lot of information on the internet if we need some information we can get it quickly for example if i want to know today’s news i can find it soon through the internet in this way it saves our time and money we can also listen to some music so that we won’t feel so tired after school
but the internet can also do harm many students like playing computer games and forget to studyoverallthe internet has done a lot for us but we should use it properly
电脑天改变着生活电脑做事情例写文章办公玩游戏重通计算机网网做更事情网购物查材料世界交流总电脑网络生活越越方便根提示 英语写篇少80词作文
computers are changing our life day by day we can do many things on computers for example we can write articles do office work and play games but the most important usage of computers is to get on the internet we can do more things on the internet we may do shopping search information and communicate with people all around the world in short computers and internet are making our life more and more convenient
第三篇：辅导初中作文
浅谈初中作文教学
众周知作文教学语文教学中非常重组成部分考试中占40％例分数说占语文学科半壁江山学生作文水普遍低数学生谈文色变提起笔搜肠刮肚半天写出字学生见作文心烦老师呢？害怕作文教学努力讲解学生适筹莫展特作文批改工作更费时费力吃力讨学生写作水难提高师生感奈烦恼
具体情况呢？妨组作文例子初二节作文课求学生母亲题写篇文章结果出现种情况：
a学开头样写道：老母老母亲直身边常吴闲严厉面写母亲督促做作业事老母伟应该努力学报答老母养育恩回报整篇文章够300百字流水帐白话连篇 b学开头样写道：七八岁时身体常生病母亲常带病接着第二段写风雨交加夜晚发高烧母亲背着病路母
亲雨伞移身结果母亲浑身雨水淋湿漉漉感动段感谢母亲结束全文 c学写较开头样写：母亲普通劳动妇女生中导师十五春夏秋冬数艰难困苦您母亲总辞劳苦毫怨言陪走接着段详细写遇困难时母亲教导克服困难获成功第次写作文验足懂文法结果交白卷回家件事告诉母亲母亲便牺牲休息时间教导写作技巧帮助寻找写作灵感纠正错字直深夜第二天作文交老师老师表扬作文写错心底感激母亲十三岁懵懂成长总觉母亲苦口婆心叮咛唠叨母亲发生争执意间见母亲灯光流泪时终读懂母亲心段果说取成绩懂做道理感谢母亲结束全文整篇文章文笔流畅详略写
作文例子中难发现学生写作水参差齐意什原造成呢？想原三：
学生阅读量太少导致词语积累少词达意
古云：熟读唐诗三百首会作诗会吟年着考试指挥棒魔力断增学生整天沉浸题海战术里注意考试技巧力少时间机会阅读量课外书籍加现中学生电视剧游戏机网qq时读报散文少文学名著更少时缺少积累词语惯导致学生知识贫乏书面表达出白话连篇词达意口语化加强甚写出文章知道难懂例a学写 1

二学生生活单调枯燥导致题材缺乏写作时话说
叶圣陶先生说：作文件事离开生活生活充实什程度会造成什文章生活作文素材取源泉现中学生生活方程式：吃饭－学－睡觉三点线非常淡加学生身少积极解社会解生活学生写作时总写毫新意题材例b学写
三缺乏写作兴趣导致作文生畏
学生学基础差少尝试成功喜悦加老师少鼓励批评等原学生作文生畏仰视作文积极进入作文实践中久久作文反感情绪越越种情况写出作文天方夜谭
四学生基础知识掌握够导致作文时方法欠缺偏题离题
种原现许学生基础知识掌握够基词汇句式语法修辞等知识少少现中学生通病接作文题假思索想什写什作文切合题目否错字满篇语句通更谈什立意谋篇写作方法技巧总作文交行
面中学生写作文时存诸类问题作中学语文教师应该样指导学生摆脱写作困境步入写作佳境呢？认应方面入手：
读写结合读促写
阅读写作基础现少学生两耳闻窗外事心读教科书认学书知识够时少阅读课外书籍缺少写作材料缺少写作鉴作文生畏果作文话说物写必须积累写作材料应该通提高阅读力促进学生写作力提高
（） 读写联系相互影响
读写着密切联系古云：读书破万卷笔神非常形象反映读写促进作语文教学中读写行发展读书阅读力强文章写精彩读书少肯定会写文章相反果写句话觉难读书会里呢？样写读书般阅读文章力定非般司马迁通读古籍写出鲁迅誉古绝唱韵离骚史记李白杜甫王维等文学非造诣读书止万卷钱钟书博览群书学贯中西著作精彩绝伦样例子胜枚举说明读写关系 吕叔湘先生说：阅读领学会写文章难道出读写密切关系力构成基思维转化程中学生作文力发展规律积累模仿鉴创造积累作文材料积累包括生活历积累知识技语言积累知识技语言积累助阅读通阅读学生学文章写作规律种写作技巧积累量语汇提高语言表 2
达力基础学生通模仿鉴佳作技巧语言思路手法典型实例灵活运文章中完成文章写作学生作文力发展定程度时会觉觉摆脱模仿鉴拐杖独立进行创作学生作文水提高反助阅读理解力概括力思维记忆力提高助知识技积累语言积累形成良性循环
样读写会达相互补充相互促进相益彰效果
（二）激发学生阅读兴趣培养学生阅读惯循序渐进提高学生阅读力
①激发学生阅读兴趣呢
苏霍姆林斯基说：智力方面工作赖兴趣知果学丧失兴趣信心丧失求知欲学效果谈起现代资讯发达日常书面语言范围频率已远远少口语电视直接面五彩缤纷电视画面电脑紧张刺激游戏qq闲聊少兴趣阅读中外名著？少名著说出然？尤中学生更加缺乏阅读兴趣提高中学生写作水首先培养阅读兴趣兴趣动力孔子说：知者者者乐者说兴趣学生觉性形成作提高学生阅读兴趣根学生年龄特点研究学生阅读兴趣阅读心理指导学生进行阅读时采形式样丰富彩读书活动激发学生健康阅读兴趣例组织学生进行课外阅读时组织学生进行交流学生说说读部书篇文章独特感受体验理解样通常说千读者千哈姆雷特样学生体差异文章体会感受相说充分肯定足中肯纠正样师生讨变言堂群言堂果学生体会探究问题根源快乐开始试着阅读获丰富知识学生阅读兴趣会慢慢增强听说读写力会提高
②时注意培养阅读惯
叶圣陶说：什教育？简单句话养成良惯良语文学惯学力容标志学成功重前提充分说明培养阅读惯语文重性
首先培养学生边读边动笔惯俗话说：记性烂笔头阅读程中理解字词句做记录助工具书请教解决单纯教师满堂灌效果培养学生时记录读书心惯提高学生阅读力表达力帮助
次培养学生摘录积累惯文豪苏轼张博约取厚积薄发学生养成摘录积累惯学生正确模仿做准备鲁迅先生说：必须蜜蜂样采许花酿出蜜叮出非常限说明积累作文十分重作学生提笔作文 3
左右逢源信手拈气呵成取竭势究原便积累功夫阅读意识收集整理阅读材料中词语句式名名言等材料储备
丰富少学生写作苦言题轻叹根原缺乏素材腹中空空仓库储存素材寡直接关系作文质量应培养学生积累素材良惯
三 培养学生写作兴趣
兴趣积极探究某种事物某项活动时产生快感兴致激发剂培养学生作文兴趣呢
第善发现闪光点时肯定鼓励俗话说乐彼学种东西兴趣关重获知识进行创造性创作种觉动机鼓舞推动学生创作动力提高写作水重途径作文教学中鼓励学生创作培养创作兴趣推荐发表文章激发学生创作办法学生作文批改时面批书面批找长处中发现闪光点加肯定鼓励次作文时求学生认真选出佳作张贴出课堂朗读出怕字妙开头写精彩衷心表扬番激发学生写作兴趣记次班位成绩较差学时写作文语句通词达意写够字数次发现作文选材错 新颖特意指导番然作文讲评课作文感情朗读出肯定进步建议全班学学写作态度积极次写够字数时会认真阅读课外书作文教学中老师应创造机会种水学生获写作成功体验享受成功喜悦样更加激发学生写作兴趣
第二施教分类指导俗话说：十指头长短学生作文水高低致种正常现象刀切教法学生吃饱差学生吃消会学生失兴趣产生消极心理行次作文根学生程度提出求务分类指导学生鼓励参加类作文竞赛积极报刊投稿发表满足实现需差学生降低求减少难度努力达目标激发写作兴趣
四培养学生观察生活善思考心灵感受世界惯
作文源生活身边天发生着计数新鲜事惜学生视见听闻学生写起作文话说事写象挤牙膏似想句写句生编硬套字词够究原生活缺乏观察惯思考鲁迅说：创作第必须观察贮备丰富材料写文章挥洒活生生中写作材料善观察善思考写作源泉定长流息问渠清许源头活水观察汲取生活源泉获作文素材重手段身边缺少美缺少发现美眼睛必须热爱生活时时处处
做生活心观察生活发现生活中真善美假恶丑思考生活观察现象问 4
什？拥思想周围点点滴滴形成法独见解总生活观察越细致描写事物越生动培养学生观察生活善思考心灵感受世界惯
五 帮助学生纳写作方法技巧提高写作水
1．教学生写作技巧――定靓丽标题题目文章眼睛醒目标题篇文章引注目亮点想文题靓丽新颖引导学生采方法：a引式直接引材料中心相吻合诗句名句歌词俗语广告做文章标题类文题醒目易引起读者鸣例世妈妈b修辞式修辞格拟标题常见喻拟代等手法种方法拟定标题形象传神感染力例环保话题作文标题拟树叹息
c 标点式标点符号属声语言标点作文章标题文章新颖独特引发读者究竟兴趣例生活？？？
2．提供策略方法指导――写开头结尾古文章开头称凤头文章结尾称豹尾开头引注目热先声夺感结尾回眸笑百媚生老师应样指导学生写开头结尾？提供方法例开头写法：①巧修辞展示风采②悬念入题引入胜③抒情开篇真情感④转折入题生动深刻⑤描写入题然真挚结尾方法：①然收束式②画龙点睛式③首尾呼应式④名言警句式⑤抒情议式
3．写作文必须指导学生锤炼词语善修辞文章增添光彩孔子说：言文行远精品佳作定求富文采语言淡索然寡味瘦难瘪三文章理然遭啐弃决定指导学生作文前提思想：中学生写作文定先光彩夺目然淡然作作文初学者写作文时候时刻丰富词汇优美文辞吸引读者博取作文高分写作文必须指导学生锤炼词语善修辞文章增添光彩
总冰冻三尺非日寒全面提高学生作文水需语文教师胆改革调动学生积极性养成良作文惯扬长避短具体写作实践中提高写作水作文教学老难中老难永远成
第四篇：初中作文辅导讲义
初中作文辅导讲义第三章立意力(20141016 153324)转载标签：杂谈 分类：作文
力定位
立意确定题题通物事件情节叙述描写表现出种思想题文章灵魂根红线贯穿全篇成整篇文章中心文章选材剪裁结构表达题受题约束篇文章立意成败质量高低决定篇文章成败质量优劣笔前定立意番功夫
点阐释
初中语文纲提出：根写作需确定表达容中心初中写作训练基求作文成功关键确定题射箭靶子登山目标夜船航灯立意求简括五：
（）正确谓正确指文中表现观点思想必须符合马列义毛泽东思想符合正确伦理观念道德标准必须积极意义法必须符合客观实际读受教益写文章基求课文件珍贵衬衫通叙述件衬衫历高度赞扬周总理爱护民关心群众易高贵品质立意正确少数学认识水低缺乏非观念时错误东西成正确宣扬譬作文题尝试．考生谈恋爱架偷东西吸烟等坏行写进持肯定态度样立意错特错
（二）深刻谓深刻指文章立意应该揭示事物质读深受启发深受教育事件中出思想光辉深度层次性等等琐忆文记叙作者鲁迅先生交中件事歌颂鲁迅先生横眉冷千夫指俯首甘孺子牛伟格表达鲁迅先生永远怀念深深崇敬样立意深刻
（三）鲜明文章作者爱什恨什赞成什反什孰美孰丑谁谁非态度必须明朗旗帜必须鲜明例火刑文．记叙描写抒情议饱含布鲁诺坚持科学捍卫真理英勇屈视死高尚格伟精神热情赞颂读感受鲜明印象深刻外明白立意求鲜明表达时注意含蓄说题蕴涵具体记叙描写中般宜明显话语揭示出表现物勤劳品质通具体事生动细节表现宜勤劳二字成标签贴物身记叙件意义事宜空洞抽象意义说通应具体情节中然显示出记叙中适插抒情议必深化题起画龙点睛作种龙睛数量位置限决胡点滥点否周身睛便成龙
（四）集中篇文章题思想全文围绕中心写学作文时想写想写结果写出文章漫中心中心实际没中
心作文题惯学生写作时选取常电视里高水足球赛惯表现通观足球赛培养爱国情操题记叙惯时中间穿插段中日争夺奥运会出线权足球赛样原题外增添新题反淡题知云
（五）立意新颖新角度立意意高文胜耳目新感话题作文拔河常规立意加强团结心协力类考生团结协作基础深挖方联想双方团结联想竞争双方相互竞争角度立意子突破庸见显深刻致令振奋
实例解说
实例：家新鲜事
题解：家限制选材范围新鲜限定材料性质题眼文记事情前般家庭里少出现者已出现没引起注意家里应第次出现注意新鲜时重现材料思想意义立意时联系时代背景反映时代精神处选材处立意写文题构思原
立意：
①爸爸营服装生意年赚笔钱乐全家合拢嘴富民政策啊
②写爸爸先前学文化学科学偏见着工厂改革断发展认识学重性努力学动参加厂里职业培训回家继续钻研碰懂问题竟师虚心求教说明社会行业知识重视渴求
③周末爸爸持召开家庭时事报告会爸妈积极登台演讲讲述评议国外重事件抒见气氛热烈表现关心国家事天翁精神
辨析：立意①合题意说赚表明件事家非首次谈新鲜社会商赚钱皆更算新鲜立意②立意鞠躬充分表现孝敬③④⑤较立意合题深度
实例二文题材料：英国诗柯勒律治读者分四类：第类计时沙漏读书漏沙注进头点痕迹没留第二类海绵什吸收挤挤流出东西原封动甚脏第三类滤豆浆布袋豆浆流留豆渣第四类宝石矿床里苦工矿渣甩旁拣纯净宝石读段名言受什启发？请属类读者？题联系实际写篇议文
解说：
明显段名言中心思想告诉正确读书方法做沙漏海绵布袋似读者做宝石矿床里苦工样读者书山中拾取纯净宝石中心思想实际写议文中心点确定中心点写般议文样举出生活中事例进行证行
实例三文题材料：赵国家里老鼠成灾吃苦头中山国猫猫会捉老鼠爱咬鸡月家老鼠确实没鸡没子事发愁说：什猫赶走呢？说：道理懂家祸害老鼠没鸡老鼠偷吃粮食咬坏衣服穿通墙壁毁家具器皿挨饿受冻没鸡害处更？没鸡吃鸡罢离挨饿受冻远着呢什猫赶走呢？求：根寓言理解联系实际写篇议文
解说：
寓言事角度思考说明道理说角度概括中心思想：①失②世界事物十全十美利必弊③问题全面正面反面④问题流方材料种思想决定材料种立意题目没作限制抓住中种立意取点余
高效训练
（）面题已角度分立意请辨析立意优劣
1．题目：家庭风波
审题：家庭限制取材范围风波喻纠纷乱子限定材料性质家温暖说明什时候充满笑语亲间互相体贴说什时候融洽间隙矛盾处．分歧处家庭旋律温馨睦种协调插曲认识见解差异日常生活中种种避免磕碰思想意识交锋兄弟姊妹间缝隙老少辈间代沟见
认真分析实际情况作文题素材丰富然篇文章中够反映种矛盾突说反映种矛盾决定历体会应根材料积累定选材时量选家庭中重事件样立意会较深．叙述时易出波折会增加文章分量注意事件结果般宜矛盾化解喜剧收场
立意：
（1〕爷爷婚爷爷年六十五岁奶奶前年世爷爷心灵孤独朋友帮助产生婚念头姑妈支持件事父母叔叔坚决反
（２）年优异成绩考市重点中学家庭济条件爸爸想学妈妈肯定说：穷’字娃前途耽误砸锅卖铁念
（3）电视报道知长江嫩江洪灾严重消息爸妈心情沉重决定灾区民献片爱心捐款数额发生争执
２．题目：事悔
审题事文章基容文章中心物叙事称悔重点题旨发’心深处种表白文章思想感情凝聚点行文紧扣悔深处立意材料必须回味价值启发深思信手拈写题前提
立意
（ｌ）物理单元考前帮助邻居陈冬复功课结果物理考砸事悔
（２）升学考试时升高级学校买通班里尖子生张军请关终考取理想学校心安没什悔毕竟愿偿进入梦寐求重点中学
（3）昨天学块街买东西店老板忙乱中找十元钱发现退事说嘴肉吐出傻瓜点悔
（4）高考前夕舅舅美国电话说公司生意兴隆急需招聘员工希前职保证更加优厚遇快谢绝舅舅意决心全力赴考取名牌师范学毕生精力献祖国教育事业亲戚朋友说昏头认准条路
（二）读面事选择恰角度拟题目写篇短评
材料：山忧心忡忡卵石说：孙骨肉越长越呢？：峥嵘峻峭岩石磷峋岿然动：根基没棱没角处乱滚成什样子？卵石然回答：样子什？
（提示：三方面立意：山角度喻老辈革命者劳动者坚韧刚强身洋溢着民族精神立面卵石代表时部分缺少信仰波逐流青年二卵石角度喻气蓬勃青年代敢破传统锐意改革断适应社会发展需立面山代表老辈中具保守思想惯新生事物部分三山卵石重谈谈代沟问题意老辈青年代互相理解互相信
（四）列作文题确立点？深新？
1．谈压力
（提示：确立样点：①化压力动力②压力怕怕没压力③正确心态压力④压力太会精神崩溃⑤父母孩子太精神压力⑥压力适度⑦加压点中⑦富新意般样外压力角度思考点立足样断超越实现新突破）
2．减负
（提示：确立样点：①减少作业量②减少考试次数③减轻学生重负担④减负学生题海战术中解放出⑤重减轻学生心理负担⑥增效减负⑦减负项系统工程点中①②较浅事事⑥⑦较深⑥揭示增效减负相互存制约转化辩证关系具启发性⑦着眼全局整体视野开阔）
3．前印度位富裕农民寻找埋藏宝石土变卖家产出外探索吃少苦获终贫困死卖出土里发现世界珍贵祖母绿宝石
（提示：材料中提炼出点：①宝贵东西许身边②珍惜拥③善发现潜力④解世界捷径解）
第五篇：初中作文辅导
初中作文辅导：写篇
记叙文说早接触种文章写作时早接触文体记叙文似写记叙文真容易？遗憾发现学存种种问题问题具定普遍性
事老套陈旧写老师定挑灯批改作业雨天送回家写父母总着风雪背着医生写朋友总初然误解起亲爱学现代社会80年代流行统治21世纪头脑嚼馍馍已索然味第吃螃蟹伟效仿者常常落入东施效颦嫌疑
二塑造物模式化汉语种伟美丽语言汉语词库里形容形容词胜枚举遗憾部分学写时候写完美缺乏真实感觉妈妈总慈祥爸爸总严厉老师总充满关爱没缺点物饱满
三写作技巧提高（1）缺乏物描写物显干瘪（2）叙述太淡带情感缺乏感力量连感动作品没办法感动（3）表达方式太单调板叙述白开水索然味
综合问题症药现写作通常课堂作文讲究兴发挥写作文需课外功夫课外功夫走第步路
第步：课外功夫
学发现般说作文写学较喜欢阅读者良摘抄惯俗语说冰冻三尺非日寒非常道理会觉生活淡物写样观念错生活淡淡细微震撼心情波动事情觉生活淡缺乏观察缺乏心体会更常身边出现动事情缺乏记录惯常常材料擦肩外生活真实写文章中获灵感样刻画物作鉴描写物作物模板联想身边样
怕阅读印象深刻某物作写作象符合题目求虚构真实真切真实效果差总言：
1 观察生活心体会
2 身携带笔记错灵感感动震惊瞬间
3 阅读中模仿物刻画阅读中汲取材料
第二步：确定中心
然写文章学般会选择熟悉写选择会成问题会成问题样描写显然老套写法行写通常表现突出物某种性格特点更深入赞颂者批判表达怀念许通物描写见反映社会背景说孔乙样写记叙文确立样中心：1 单纯表现某物性格特点2 赞颂批判品质特征3 通回忆交表达怀念4 通某特定描写表现社会具样特征群反映社会背景
通常说选择前三种中心较第四种中心果写出便十分出彩题较难握
第三步确定件事
写记叙文分写单写两写群体写单事写事写写群体文章谁爱实际写团体性张家写群体余种模式千秋注意重点
（1）事 样记叙文通件较完整事情表现求事情具体生动选择够表现物典型事件选择印象深感动事情写求事件表现物典型特征者特征事件中慢慢呈现出摄影时候镜头慢慢推进物叙述程中慢慢丰满起
（2）事初中记叙文求字数600字事写
限制通常两三事超四五事样文章生厌写事情太匆忙笔带样文章求详略段落间互相补充写事通常代表着角度身特征然排相互联系件事情写某方面典型性格
（3）两文章通常体现两间某种情谊物间新型关系写类文章前弄清两间联系次位意识两物间应相互映衬相互影响
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奶奶年七十八岁家然开心果绰号什呢？面告诉关耳朵插曲
奶奶年纪耳朵背听声音总非常模糊闹出笑话
记次奶奶坐沙发电视客厅里聊走走突然想问奶奶热热果热奶奶扇扇子便问奶奶：奶奶热？奶奶回答说：饿热？听奶奶热听成饿次热说特重饿奶奶次回答坐旁爸爸说：方言奶奶讲普通话然听成饿怪哈哈方言奶奶说遍奶奶终明白意思笑着说：回听着孙女说清楚点声喽屁股坐口里呼着气说：声快嗓子喊破事想挺搞笑 嘻嘻……
次爸爸妈妈班家里奶奶中午想吃炒土豆丝然奶奶说：奶奶想吃炒土豆丝吃什？奶奶问土豆丝什土豆丝连说遍奶奶没听清楚实没办法跑厨房出土豆手指着说：吃奶奶明白笑前仰合累行听事奶奶概解吧奶奶家开心果奶奶家操劳辈子爱奶奶
奶奶
身穿蓝色襟衣穿着黑裆裤偶尔吃饭掉粒米会拾起放口袋里说奶奶脏呀奶奶说：干净吃没病吃剩饭更说等吃抢先吃
天饭坏妈妈邻居家鸡吃奶奶说：倒掉惜吃呢说奶奶书说饭坏吃生病呀奶奶说书
瞎说吃年见生病呢？听说什奶奶衣着朴素懂事起奶奶总穿着蓝衣黑裤子做布鞋时妈妈买新衣服穿说天天家里穿着糟蹋？说衣服新呢穿吧说奶奶现什年代您身衣服难死穿妈妈买
奶奶说衣服穿着舒服呢紧身衣兜着屁股腿难受？
奶奶迷信生病医生烧香拜佛求安奶奶封建记夏天晚天气热家睡着坐电视穿着单件衣服奶奶穿着褂妈妈说妈天气热褂脱吧凉快奶奶说行行电视里见办？时逗哄堂笑说：奶奶电视里见……瞧家老古董———奶奶
妈妈
时候母亲颗滚烫爱心教会做道理炎热夏天母亲伞遮挡烈日严寒冬天母亲火炉抵御寒冷母亲世界伟园丁私爱呵护着茁壮成长母亲位母亲颗滚烫心教会许做道理
妈妈双炯炯神眼睛笑起月牙弯弯柳叶眉双眼睛映衬显美丽方巧鼻子嘴巴张圆圆脸更番韵味妈妈头齐耳短发略显黄色头发显清爽干净妈妈北方着南方皮肤光滑细腻
妈妈见妈妈方朴实勇敢爱心等等2014年5月12日场特震牵动着心努力帮助家园毁纷纷捐款然学校集体募集午老师布置完件捐款事老师没说捐少说力努力班级争光全校争光国家争光说完便放学
心里想捐少5元？10元？20？更？家家庭富裕想捐进门妈妈说：天学校捐款问妈妈捐少妈妈没说话会说算捐少？说知道老师没说妈妈说：问觉应该捐少？说着妈妈便起包说：20？妈妈笑笑说：啊200元纳闷说：捐20元？200啊？妈妈说：20元捐出剩代表爸爸妈妈捐遇种事力中国关键时候应该站起起迎接困难次沉默心里种妈妈豪
妈妈事中部分妈妈形中做榜样教应该样做天母亲样样样中创造伟
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叔叔乐观家
提起叔叔颇负盛名便拉院子里问问知道次家窜门时候招帮警察惹哭孩位老奶奶摔跤究竟回事呢？听慢慢道天火车站接叔叔叔叔见高兴说：呦长高刚帮行李群警察气势汹汹拉身声说：朋友注意远离坏正纳闷知道发生什事然群警察叔叔团团围住叔叔愣笑眯眯说：家钱请保镖？差点晕倒警察弄清叔叔身份知道派出呆久呢
叔叔拎着沉重行李回住院子时位老奶奶推着婴身边问声奶奶继续家走走段路身传阵哭闹声回头见叔叔婴弄哭急忙跑叔叔站满脸笑容说：瞧家伙哭起爱什？家弄哭说爱真没见样老奶奶满白眼正安慰宝宝叔叔笑着推老奶奶说：行谁知劲太老奶奶推倒赶紧扶起生怕出什事老奶奶起训斥叔叔叔叔满脸堆笑哭笑
家算计着叔叔走家没日子太乐观遇什事笑惹全院怕丁冬糟会叔叔吧先闪步
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学期开学第二天老师坐桌开始没意黄毛丫头堂堂男子汉
第二天午放学时操场玩耍慎语文书弄丢急热锅蚂蚁学期三分语文课现语文书丢办？早读课伫立课桌前呆呆着黑板出神时桌似发现什伸友谊手关切询问道：啦？说吧？硬男子汉丢脸说吧？闷心里算啦队委员汇报思想：没什语文书丢没什？方现出惊讶神情接着起课放反反复复鬼知道葫芦里卖什药稍犹豫会书递：书毛手毛脚什？简直相信耳朵惯瞧起黄毛丫头居然说出句话什……什……办？半天吞吞吐
吐挤出字紧办法天办？合俩便认真开始早读
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第二天早读着旧书读书课开旧书封面已撕裂书页角里翻书脊线断少两页课新书换意
中午时发现桌抄什奇怪午没作业呀？净干鬼事走呀正抄两篇掉课文书句便抄书页白纸传进耳里沙沙写字声出现眼前行行整齐清秀字累便甩甩胳膊然聚精会神抄起点意决定复印婉言谢绝抄出浆糊纸粘劲针针缝
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老师
子高微微发胖脸双时常眯起慈祥眼睛头花白短发更衬出忠厚条强壮右腿左腿膝全部截根油亮圆木棍支撑条腿时什截知道记次讲课讲女娲氏补天造传说时候笑着说：女娲氏手捏泥捏累便树枝沾起泥巴甩甩泥巴变成女娲甩力量太摔丢腿胳膊时候甩掉条腿教室里然腾起片笑声笑学生心头泛起股酸涩感情时更增加刘老师尊敬
着健壮右腿根木棍天站时讲课逢写板书时候木棍撑右腿离身体急速转便转黑板写完粗壮粉笔字拐杖圆心转讲台年半百老师天知道样跳跃旋转少次次转引起学生次激动心跳课讲极祖国历史豪讲历代民族英雄慷慨陈词常常激动落泪讲祖国代史受屈辱岁月常常哽咽沉重低头考入学历史系刘老师影响极关系
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