高考英语写作点拨苏炳添中国航天等热点话题作文六篇
1 神州十二
（2021·辽宁丹东·高期末）前久校学生观国神州十二号飞船发射直播家受鼓舞学生解更航天知识校决定举行次关航天科学（Space Science）讲座假设国际学校学生会席李华请英语写书面通知容包括：
1 讲座时间点
2 讲座目容
3 希学踊跃参加
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
参考范文
Notice
In order to let students learn more about Space Science a lecture about it will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours
The lecture mainly involves 2 parts the first of which is a brief introduction of our recent launch The second part will be given by the same experts and will be about the scientific benefits of space flight It will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it You will learn a lot and have a better understanding of space
Everyone who is interested in the lecture is welcome
The Students’ Union
详解
1 词汇积累
演讲：speechlecture
解：learn aboutknow about
：recentlatest
感兴趣：be interested intake an interest in
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
It will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it You will learn a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of space
拓展句：
Since it will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it you will learn a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of space
点睛
高分句型1：
In order to let students learn more about Space Science a lecture about it will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours (运定式作目状语)
高分句型2：
The lecture mainly involves 2 parts the first of which is a brief introduction of our recent launch (运介词+关系代词非限制性定语句)
2 苏炳添钦佩运动员
（2021·四川省成市新中·高二期末）假定某中学学生李华美国笔友Tom中国运动员苏炳添东京奥运会表现印象深刻特信分享钦佩情询问谁钦佩运动员请根点Tom写封回信：
1 赞Tom法
2 介绍钦佩运动员
3 钦佩理
参考词汇：东京奥运会 Tokyo Olympics
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Tom
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Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Tom
How are you From your letter I get to know Su Bingtian charms you Yes I couldn’t agree more with you that he is an excellent athlete worth admiring And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary
As a matter of fact besides Su Bingtian there are many other outstanding athletes in China too among whom I admire Quan Hongchan most She was born into a poor family However with her talent and more importantly her persistent efforts she changes her life Her story really inspires me to pursue my own dream bravely
Su Bingtian and Quan Hongchan set a good example for us We both should hold on to our dream right
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
详解
1 词汇积累
事实：as a matter of factin fact
优秀：outstandingexcellent
欣赏：admireappreciate
鼓励：inspireencourage
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary
拓展句：
And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary which is impressive
点睛
高分句型1：
As a matter of fact besides Su Bingtian there are many other outstanding athletes in China too among whom I admire Quan Hongchan most (运介词+whom引导非限制性定语句)
高分句型2：
Yes I couldn’t agree more with you that he is an excellent athlete worth admiring (运that引导宾语句)
3 苏炳添豪
（2021·甘肃兰州市第二十七中学·高三阶段练）假高三学生李华英国网友Jack中国运动员苏炳添东京奥运会百米赛跑半决赛（semifinal）中刷新亚洲记录非常敬佩想解苏炳添关情况请根提示英语回封电子邮件容：
1 苏炳添成绩感豪
2 简单介绍关情况肯定付出努力
3 谈谈感受
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Jack
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Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
Knowing that you admire Su Bingtian very much because he broke the Asian record in the semifinal of the 100m race in the Tokyo Olympic Games I’m proud of his achievement as well
Su Bingtian 32yearold is a Chinese runner He was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989 He took part in the regular match in November 2004 for the first time After that he won many first prizes in all kinds of matches Because of his dedication and efforts in 2021 Su Bingtian did what no Chinese runner had done before as he sprinted to secure a place in the 100m men’s final at the Olympic Games in Tokyo
I believe he deserves this medal and he really is a flying man of China and of Asia
Yours
Li Hua
详解
1 词汇积累
……豪：be proud oftake pride in
参加：take part inparticipate in
赛：matchcompetition
：because ofdue toowing to
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
Su Bingtian 32yearold man is a Chinese runner He was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989
拓展句：
Su Bingtian 32yearold is a Chinese runner who was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989
点睛
高分句型1：
Knowing that you admire Su Bingtian very much because he broke the Asian record in the semifinal of the 100m race in the Tokyo Olympic Games I’m proud of his achievement as well (运现分词作状语that引导宾语句because引导原状语句)
高分句型2：
Because of his dedication and efforts in 2021 Su Bingtian did what no Chinese runner had done before as he sprinted to secure a place in the 100m men’s final at the Olympic Games in Tokyo (运what引导宾语句)
4 宇航
（2022·江西沂水县第中学·高三阶段练）三位中国宇航员成功送入太空请事写篇发言稿容包括：
1 讲述感受
2 表达进取决心
3 发出倡议
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
提示词：航天器spacecraft
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参考范文
Dear classmates
When watching the historic moment when the three Chinese astronauts were sent up into space I felt so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tears This great achievement has showed not only our advanced technology but also the great power of China At the same time it made me realize our responsibility And I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge Only in this way can we make great contributions to our country
Dear classmates let’s study harder for a more powerful China
Thanks for your listening
详解
1 词汇积累
激动：excitedthrilled
抑制：hold backcontrol
决定：make up one’s minddecide
强：powerfulstrong
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
At the same time it made me realize our responsibility And I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge
拓展句：
At the same time not only did it make me realize our responsibility but also I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge
点睛
高分句型1：
When watching the historic moment when the three Chinese astronauts were sent up into space I felt so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tears (运when引导时间状语句sothat句型)
高分句型2：
Only in this way can we make great contributions to our country (运部分倒装)
5 王亚
（2021·江苏徐州·高三期中）神州十三号利升空王亚成国第太空行走女性航天员十年日刻苦训练言弃终实现航天梦校正组织学征文活动请写篇英语短文介绍优秀品质谈谈作青年学
注意：
1 写作词数应80左右
2 请格式答题卡相应位置作答
My Space Hero
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参考范文
Wang Yaping the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decadelong arduous training Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream
How can we young people learn from Wang especially her perseverance resilience and diligence Firstly when failing in exams we need to reflect on our weak areas and do more exercise rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment Regarding difficulties we meet in our daily life bouncing back from low spirits and quickly regaining our composure as Wang Yaping did definitely count
详解
1 词汇积累
终：ultimatelyfinally
考虑：reflect onthink over
艰苦：arduoushard
恢复：bounce backrecover
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
How can we young people learn from Wang especially her perseverance resilience and diligence
拓展句：
How can we young people learn from Wang when it comes to her perseverance resilience and diligence
点睛
高分句型1：
Wang Yaping the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decadelong arduous training (运who引导定语句)
高分句型2：
Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream (运倒装句式)
6 神州十二航天
（2022·江苏姜堰中学·高二期末）假定李华学校英文报约稿写篇关国2021年6月17日神州十二号航天员（聂海胜刘伯明汤洪波）进入太空太空执行期3月飞行务英文报道容包括：
1 新闻概
2 太空生活工作
3 意义
注意：
1 词数应80左右
2 适增加情节行文连贯
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Shenzhou12 sent first crew to new space station
China launched three astronauts into orbit by Shenzhou12 to begin the work in the country’s new space station which lasted 3 months from June 17th of 2021
The life up in space was totally different from that on the earth which posed a lot of challenges to the astronauts They performed some daily routines as well as scientific researches and experiments in the circumstances of low gravity
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date demonstrating China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
详解
1 词汇积累
开始：beginstart
完全：totallycompletely
日：dailyeveryday
2 句式拓展
义句转化
原句：
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date demonstrating China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
拓展句：
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date which demonstrates China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
点睛
高分句型1：
China launched three astronauts into orbit by Shenzhou12 to begin the work in the country’s new space station which lasted 3 months from June 17th of 2021 (运which引导非限制性定语句)
高分句型2：
The life up in space was totally different from that on the earth which posed a lot of challenges to the astronauts (运which引导非限制性定语句)
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1 神州十二
（2021·辽宁丹东·高期末）前久校学生观国神州十二号飞船发射直播家受鼓舞学生解更航天知识校决定举行次关航天科学（Space Science）讲座假设国际学校学生会席李华请英语写书面通知容包括：
1 讲座时间点
2 讲座目容
3 希学踊跃参加
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Notice
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
参考范文
Notice
In order to let students learn more about Space Science a lecture about it will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours
The lecture mainly involves 2 parts the first of which is a brief introduction of our recent launch The second part will be given by the same experts and will be about the scientific benefits of space flight It will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it You will learn a lot and have a better understanding of space
Everyone who is interested in the lecture is welcome
The Students’ Union
详解
1 词汇积累
演讲：speechlecture
解：learn aboutknow about
：recentlatest
感兴趣：be interested intake an interest in
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
It will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it You will learn a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of space
拓展句：
Since it will be given in such a way that you will easily understand it you will learn a lot from the lecture and have a better understanding of space
点睛
高分句型1：
In order to let students learn more about Space Science a lecture about it will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours (运定式作目状语)
高分句型2：
The lecture mainly involves 2 parts the first of which is a brief introduction of our recent launch (运介词+关系代词非限制性定语句)
2 苏炳添钦佩运动员
（2021·四川省成市新中·高二期末）假定某中学学生李华美国笔友Tom中国运动员苏炳添东京奥运会表现印象深刻特信分享钦佩情询问谁钦佩运动员请根点Tom写封回信：
1 赞Tom法
2 介绍钦佩运动员
3 钦佩理
参考词汇：东京奥运会 Tokyo Olympics
注意：
1 词数80左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Tom
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Tom
How are you From your letter I get to know Su Bingtian charms you Yes I couldn’t agree more with you that he is an excellent athlete worth admiring And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary
As a matter of fact besides Su Bingtian there are many other outstanding athletes in China too among whom I admire Quan Hongchan most She was born into a poor family However with her talent and more importantly her persistent efforts she changes her life Her story really inspires me to pursue my own dream bravely
Su Bingtian and Quan Hongchan set a good example for us We both should hold on to our dream right
Best wishes
Yours
Li Hua
详解
1 词汇积累
事实：as a matter of factin fact
优秀：outstandingexcellent
欣赏：admireappreciate
鼓励：inspireencourage
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary
拓展句：
And indeed his performance in Tokyo Olympics is extraordinary which is impressive
点睛
高分句型1：
As a matter of fact besides Su Bingtian there are many other outstanding athletes in China too among whom I admire Quan Hongchan most (运介词+whom引导非限制性定语句)
高分句型2：
Yes I couldn’t agree more with you that he is an excellent athlete worth admiring (运that引导宾语句)
3 苏炳添豪
（2021·甘肃兰州市第二十七中学·高三阶段练）假高三学生李华英国网友Jack中国运动员苏炳添东京奥运会百米赛跑半决赛（semifinal）中刷新亚洲记录非常敬佩想解苏炳添关情况请根提示英语回封电子邮件容：
1 苏炳添成绩感豪
2 简单介绍关情况肯定付出努力
3 谈谈感受
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
Dear Jack
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack
Knowing that you admire Su Bingtian very much because he broke the Asian record in the semifinal of the 100m race in the Tokyo Olympic Games I’m proud of his achievement as well
Su Bingtian 32yearold is a Chinese runner He was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989 He took part in the regular match in November 2004 for the first time After that he won many first prizes in all kinds of matches Because of his dedication and efforts in 2021 Su Bingtian did what no Chinese runner had done before as he sprinted to secure a place in the 100m men’s final at the Olympic Games in Tokyo
I believe he deserves this medal and he really is a flying man of China and of Asia
Yours
Li Hua
详解
1 词汇积累
……豪：be proud oftake pride in
参加：take part inparticipate in
赛：matchcompetition
：because ofdue toowing to
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
Su Bingtian 32yearold man is a Chinese runner He was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989
拓展句：
Su Bingtian 32yearold is a Chinese runner who was born in Zhongshan City Guangdong Province on August 20th 1989
点睛
高分句型1：
Knowing that you admire Su Bingtian very much because he broke the Asian record in the semifinal of the 100m race in the Tokyo Olympic Games I’m proud of his achievement as well (运现分词作状语that引导宾语句because引导原状语句)
高分句型2：
Because of his dedication and efforts in 2021 Su Bingtian did what no Chinese runner had done before as he sprinted to secure a place in the 100m men’s final at the Olympic Games in Tokyo (运what引导宾语句)
4 宇航
（2022·江西沂水县第中学·高三阶段练）三位中国宇航员成功送入太空请事写篇发言稿容包括：
1 讲述感受
2 表达进取决心
3 发出倡议
注意：
1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
提示词：航天器spacecraft
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Dear classmates
When watching the historic moment when the three Chinese astronauts were sent up into space I felt so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tears This great achievement has showed not only our advanced technology but also the great power of China At the same time it made me realize our responsibility And I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge Only in this way can we make great contributions to our country
Dear classmates let’s study harder for a more powerful China
Thanks for your listening
详解
1 词汇积累
激动：excitedthrilled
抑制：hold backcontrol
决定：make up one’s minddecide
强：powerfulstrong
2 句式拓展
合简单句
原句：
At the same time it made me realize our responsibility And I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge
拓展句：
At the same time not only did it make me realize our responsibility but also I have made up my mind to gain a good command of knowledge
点睛
高分句型1：
When watching the historic moment when the three Chinese astronauts were sent up into space I felt so excited that I couldn’t hold back my tears (运when引导时间状语句sothat句型)
高分句型2：
Only in this way can we make great contributions to our country (运部分倒装)
5 王亚
（2021·江苏徐州·高三期中）神州十三号利升空王亚成国第太空行走女性航天员十年日刻苦训练言弃终实现航天梦校正组织学征文活动请写篇英语短文介绍优秀品质谈谈作青年学
注意：
1 写作词数应80左右
2 请格式答题卡相应位置作答
My Space Hero
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Wang Yaping the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decadelong arduous training Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream
How can we young people learn from Wang especially her perseverance resilience and diligence Firstly when failing in exams we need to reflect on our weak areas and do more exercise rather than drown ourselves in sorrow or disappointment Regarding difficulties we meet in our daily life bouncing back from low spirits and quickly regaining our composure as Wang Yaping did definitely count
详解
1 词汇积累
终：ultimatelyfinally
考虑：reflect onthink over
艰苦：arduoushard
恢复：bounce backrecover
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
How can we young people learn from Wang especially her perseverance resilience and diligence
拓展句：
How can we young people learn from Wang when it comes to her perseverance resilience and diligence
点睛
高分句型1：
Wang Yaping the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII deserves our highest respect for her persistence in the decadelong arduous training (运who引导定语句)
高分句型2：
Never did she say never and ultimately she lived her space dream (运倒装句式)
6 神州十二航天
（2022·江苏姜堰中学·高二期末）假定李华学校英文报约稿写篇关国2021年6月17日神州十二号航天员（聂海胜刘伯明汤洪波）进入太空太空执行期3月飞行务英文报道容包括：
1 新闻概
2 太空生活工作
3 意义
注意：
1 词数应80左右
2 适增加情节行文连贯
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Shenzhou12 sent first crew to new space station
China launched three astronauts into orbit by Shenzhou12 to begin the work in the country’s new space station which lasted 3 months from June 17th of 2021
The life up in space was totally different from that on the earth which posed a lot of challenges to the astronauts They performed some daily routines as well as scientific researches and experiments in the circumstances of low gravity
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date demonstrating China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
详解
1 词汇积累
开始：beginstart
完全：totallycompletely
日：dailyeveryday
2 句式拓展
义句转化
原句：
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date demonstrating China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
拓展句：
As it turns out this is China’s longest crewed space mission to date which demonstrates China’s growing confidence and capability in the space domain
点睛
高分句型1：
China launched three astronauts into orbit by Shenzhou12 to begin the work in the country’s new space station which lasted 3 months from June 17th of 2021 (运which引导非限制性定语句)
高分句型2：
The life up in space was totally different from that on the earth which posed a lot of challenges to the astronauts (运which引导非限制性定语句)
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