刺中考•中考英语书面表达高分技巧
结构清晰
结构清晰点真重知道阅卷老师规定时间批阅千份作文清晰结构会阅卷老师目然然会喜欢作文
什结构呢？三段式
第段开门见山直接出题家举例子写妈妈第段直接说 My mother is a worker She is beautiful and she is a good mother 明确观点
第二段说什妈妈1 She works hard 2 She is very strict with me 3 She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble 详细说出妈妈优点
第三段出结家发表观点提出建议希I love my mother I love my family
二时态准确
英语作文结构阅卷老师敏感时态篇作文否高分关键明确文章时态时称致数致首尾呼应根容求现确定事情已发生未发生记叙件事般时写常发生事物描写般现时未憧憬般时事情现造成影响延续现状况现完成时定乱乱配
三短语运灵活
学写作文时候量握词避免必失分然定语句宾语句等句型关键时候两会增添文章文采英语中存简单表达意思短语短语运作文更加原汁原味
关联词first of allsecondlyfinallylastso thatin order thatnotbutnot onlybut also等高级点in a wordall in all （表示总结）butyethowever（表示转折）等
验阅卷老师意逻辑连接词词体现整文章思路
四写全点
年中考英语提示性作文较说写作容点提示确切说出写作提纲通常3 ～ 5提示点种作文学定记住逐字翻译提示点必须文章中体现文章写果缺少点会扣分点文章第二段容学提示点写全然围绕提示点充分发挥丰富写容
五书写认真
点学必须高度重视作文书写定保持规范整洁篇文章书写规范整洁书写混乱间25分差距
阅卷老师留深刻印象书写简单分点认真书写工整漂亮书写会评卷老师留美第印象愉快心情扣分时然会手留情
家切记涂改情况允许前提草稿避免必丢分
漂亮字体练出家心里注意书写会写
作文评分标准
中考作文般容语言组织结构三方面进行评分（总分20分）：
（）容（满分8）
78分：容切题意思连贯表达清楚完整
56分：容基切题意思致连贯表达基清楚够完整
24分：容够切题意思够连贯表达够清楚离题
01分：文题表达清
（二）语言（满分8）
词数：少5单词扣05分类推写出单词词成句分
拼写：处错误扣05分错误重复计数
语法：处错误扣05分语法错误重复扣分
标点符号写：两处错误扣05分扣分总超1分
（三）组织结构（满分4）
容充实文连贯语规范表达准确语法错误词汇句型句式运恰见句型惯表达语者34分
容充实写废话文连贯语规范表达准确少见语法错误词汇句型句式运恰见句型惯表达语者2分
般情况容语言累计分15分者（含）方12分组织结构分
容语言15分者文中值肯定句型表达酌情考虑1分组织结构分
通篇句型句式单词汇贫乏者语法错误般予组织结构分
分类作文提纲
活动介绍类
首段：
(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a Nowlet me offer you some useful information
(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a Nowlet me offer you some useful information about it
(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soonSurprisinglythere is aan prepared for usNowlet me offer you some information about it
体段：
1时间&点：The will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th2019
2容：
(1)题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it
(2)点First of allYou will be invited to You will be given a chance to which will
After thatIt will be more than interesting for you to It will impress you a lot to so that
At lastdoing sth will play an important part in So
尾段：
That’s allI firmly believe that if you join in ityou will
That’s allI sincerely hope that you can come and share the happinessfun with us
二写叙事类
首段：
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeedI have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life Let me introduce him to you
(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to mewithout doubtthe answer is my Let me introduce him to you
(3) 老师：In both my life and studymy teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character
体段：
1外貌： is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes
2性格：is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her is very kind to others and easy to get on withis so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him
3爱：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me
4事例：
（1）Linda is like an angel Whenever I meet trouble she will always be there When I fail my test She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail At the same time she shares her good ways of studying with me
（2）My Chinese teacher Ms Li not only teaches us how to learn but also teaches us how to be a person I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven that was to copy others’ homework Ms Li knew that Instead of being angry with me she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future
（3）Last term I failed my exam I was so that that I cried sadly in my room When my mother came from work late she talked with me patiently and cheered me up That evening when I woke up at night my mother was still working I was deeply moved Then I made up my mind to study harder than before
尾段：
As a sunshine teenager Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn fromI will treasure the friendship forever
Now I understand my father’s love to me I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever
三咨询建议类
首段：
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing Don’t worry about itHere are some useful suggestions I d like to share with you
体段：
1题句：Actuallyif you are careful you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem
2点：
First and foremostIt’s +adjn+forof sb to do So that
In additionyou are supposed to do which can not only but also
What’s moreyou had better (not) do because
Last but not leastI suggest you (should) do from whichyou’re able to do
尾段：
With these suggestions carried outI firmly believe you will improve a lot
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great helpLooking forward to your earliest reply
四观点法类
首段：
With the development of the science and technologysocietyis becoming more and more seriousthe problem about is under a heated discussion has become a hot topicAs for thatThere are different opinions among people
体段：
On the one hand some people hold the idea that The reasons are as followsFirst Second Last
On the other handothers disagreeThey suppose that Because More importantly
尾段：
As far as I’m concernedevery coin has two sidesand is not a n exceptionAs long as we treat properlyit will be of great help
中考作文典词句
常名言警句
1 Actions speak louder than words 事实胜雄辩
2 A friend in need is a friend indeed 患难朋友真朋友
3 Where there is a will there is a way 志者事竟成
4 All roads lead to Rome 条条道通罗马
5 Every man has his weak side 缺点
6 Failure is the mother of success 失败成功母
7 Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it 世难事怕心
8 A life without a friend is a life without a sun 友生命中没太阳
9 All things are difficult before they are easy 万事开头难
10 Always prepare for a rainy day 未雨绸缪
11 Practice makes perfect熟生巧
12 Bad news has wings 事出门坏事传千里
13 You have to believe in yourself That’s the secret of success 必须相信成功关键
14 Don’t judge a man by his looks 貌取
二常渡语
1 表起始渡语
first of all to begin with first and foremost等
2 表时间渡语
first at first then later in the end finally afterwards after that since then for the first time at last as soon as the next moment meanwhile later on soon 等
3 表空间渡语
on the rightleft to the rightleft of on one side of…on the other side of… at the foottopend of in the middlecentre of next to far from in front of等
4 表果渡语
for sinceasbecause of thus so as a result (of)等
5 表转折渡语
but yet however after all in fact while on the contrary instead of although otherwise in spite of等
6 表列举渡语
for example such as like as follows in other words and so on等
7 表推进渡语
on one hand… on the other hand… in addition to as well still also in other words not only…but also… besides in addition furthermore what’s more moreover等
8 表总结渡语
in short in a word in general in brief in all all in all above all等
三常句型
1重点句型
1) It’s adj for sb to do 做…某说…
2) …so … that … … …
…too … to do 太… …
such … that … … …
3) not…until… 直……
例 I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back
4)The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 原…
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie ( 生气原说谎)
5) That is why + 句子 …原
6) That is because + 句子 …
7) It is said that + 句子 说…
It is reported that + 句子 报道…
8) There is no doubt that + 句子 毫疑问…
9) It goes without saying that + 句子 言喻毫疑问
10) There is no need to do没必做…
11) There is no point in doing 做某事毫意义
2 提建议
had better (not) do ()做
It’s +adjn offor sb to do
I suggest that you (should) do 建议做…
be supposed to do 应该做
If I were you I would do…话会做…
Don’t forget to doRemember to do
Why not do why don’t you do… 什…
How about what about doing …样
3 表示喜欢感兴趣
like love doingenjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A愿做B
be interested in doing show take great interest in n doing 感兴趣
4努力做…
try to do努力做…
try one’s best to do do one’s best to do 竭全力做…
make efforts to do make every effort to do 力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 力做…
spare no effort to do 遗余力做…
do what everything sb can to do 某全力做…
5 算做… 计划做…
intend plan to do 算做… be going to do 算计划做…
decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做…
make up one’s mind to do定决心做…
6 表示想希
want to do would like to do 想做…
hopewish to do 希做… expect to do 期着做…
desire to dohave a great desire to do
7 加doing作宾语动词
finish keep practice suggest allow consider mind miss avoid imagine enjoy doing
固定搭配
look forward to doing 盼做…
keep on doing 坚持做…
dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情禁做…
keep stop prevent sb from doing 阻止某做…
be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙做…
spend time money (in )doing spend time money on + 名词 花费时间做…
have fun have a good time enjoy oneself doing 玩开心
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结构清晰
结构清晰点真重知道阅卷老师规定时间批阅千份作文清晰结构会阅卷老师目然然会喜欢作文
什结构呢？三段式
第段开门见山直接出题家举例子写妈妈第段直接说 My mother is a worker She is beautiful and she is a good mother 明确观点
第二段说什妈妈1 She works hard 2 She is very strict with me 3 She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble 详细说出妈妈优点
第三段出结家发表观点提出建议希I love my mother I love my family
二时态准确
英语作文结构阅卷老师敏感时态篇作文否高分关键明确文章时态时称致数致首尾呼应根容求现确定事情已发生未发生记叙件事般时写常发生事物描写般现时未憧憬般时事情现造成影响延续现状况现完成时定乱乱配
三短语运灵活
学写作文时候量握词避免必失分然定语句宾语句等句型关键时候两会增添文章文采英语中存简单表达意思短语短语运作文更加原汁原味
关联词first of allsecondlyfinallylastso thatin order thatnotbutnot onlybut also等高级点in a wordall in all （表示总结）butyethowever（表示转折）等
验阅卷老师意逻辑连接词词体现整文章思路
四写全点
年中考英语提示性作文较说写作容点提示确切说出写作提纲通常3 ～ 5提示点种作文学定记住逐字翻译提示点必须文章中体现文章写果缺少点会扣分点文章第二段容学提示点写全然围绕提示点充分发挥丰富写容
五书写认真
点学必须高度重视作文书写定保持规范整洁篇文章书写规范整洁书写混乱间25分差距
阅卷老师留深刻印象书写简单分点认真书写工整漂亮书写会评卷老师留美第印象愉快心情扣分时然会手留情
家切记涂改情况允许前提草稿避免必丢分
漂亮字体练出家心里注意书写会写
作文评分标准
中考作文般容语言组织结构三方面进行评分（总分20分）：
（）容（满分8）
78分：容切题意思连贯表达清楚完整
56分：容基切题意思致连贯表达基清楚够完整
24分：容够切题意思够连贯表达够清楚离题
01分：文题表达清
（二）语言（满分8）
词数：少5单词扣05分类推写出单词词成句分
拼写：处错误扣05分错误重复计数
语法：处错误扣05分语法错误重复扣分
标点符号写：两处错误扣05分扣分总超1分
（三）组织结构（满分4）
容充实文连贯语规范表达准确语法错误词汇句型句式运恰见句型惯表达语者34分
容充实写废话文连贯语规范表达准确少见语法错误词汇句型句式运恰见句型惯表达语者2分
般情况容语言累计分15分者（含）方12分组织结构分
容语言15分者文中值肯定句型表达酌情考虑1分组织结构分
通篇句型句式单词汇贫乏者语法错误般予组织结构分
分类作文提纲
活动介绍类
首段：
(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a Nowlet me offer you some useful information
(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a Nowlet me offer you some useful information about it
(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soonSurprisinglythere is aan prepared for usNowlet me offer you some information about it
体段：
1时间&点：The will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th2019
2容：
(1)题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it
(2)点First of allYou will be invited to You will be given a chance to which will
After thatIt will be more than interesting for you to It will impress you a lot to so that
At lastdoing sth will play an important part in So
尾段：
That’s allI firmly believe that if you join in ityou will
That’s allI sincerely hope that you can come and share the happinessfun with us
二写叙事类
首段：
(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeedI have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life Let me introduce him to you
(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to mewithout doubtthe answer is my Let me introduce him to you
(3) 老师：In both my life and studymy teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character
体段：
1外貌： is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes
2性格：is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her is very kind to others and easy to get on withis so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him
3爱：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me
4事例：
（1）Linda is like an angel Whenever I meet trouble she will always be there When I fail my test She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail At the same time she shares her good ways of studying with me
（2）My Chinese teacher Ms Li not only teaches us how to learn but also teaches us how to be a person I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven that was to copy others’ homework Ms Li knew that Instead of being angry with me she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future
（3）Last term I failed my exam I was so that that I cried sadly in my room When my mother came from work late she talked with me patiently and cheered me up That evening when I woke up at night my mother was still working I was deeply moved Then I made up my mind to study harder than before
尾段：
As a sunshine teenager Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn fromI will treasure the friendship forever
Now I understand my father’s love to me I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever
三咨询建议类
首段：
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing Don’t worry about itHere are some useful suggestions I d like to share with you
体段：
1题句：Actuallyif you are careful you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem
2点：
First and foremostIt’s +adjn+forof sb to do So that
In additionyou are supposed to do which can not only but also
What’s moreyou had better (not) do because
Last but not leastI suggest you (should) do from whichyou’re able to do
尾段：
With these suggestions carried outI firmly believe you will improve a lot
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great helpLooking forward to your earliest reply
四观点法类
首段：
With the development of the science and technologysocietyis becoming more and more seriousthe problem about is under a heated discussion has become a hot topicAs for thatThere are different opinions among people
体段：
On the one hand some people hold the idea that The reasons are as followsFirst Second Last
On the other handothers disagreeThey suppose that Because More importantly
尾段：
As far as I’m concernedevery coin has two sidesand is not a n exceptionAs long as we treat properlyit will be of great help
中考作文典词句
常名言警句
1 Actions speak louder than words 事实胜雄辩
2 A friend in need is a friend indeed 患难朋友真朋友
3 Where there is a will there is a way 志者事竟成
4 All roads lead to Rome 条条道通罗马
5 Every man has his weak side 缺点
6 Failure is the mother of success 失败成功母
7 Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it 世难事怕心
8 A life without a friend is a life without a sun 友生命中没太阳
9 All things are difficult before they are easy 万事开头难
10 Always prepare for a rainy day 未雨绸缪
11 Practice makes perfect熟生巧
12 Bad news has wings 事出门坏事传千里
13 You have to believe in yourself That’s the secret of success 必须相信成功关键
14 Don’t judge a man by his looks 貌取
二常渡语
1 表起始渡语
first of all to begin with first and foremost等
2 表时间渡语
first at first then later in the end finally afterwards after that since then for the first time at last as soon as the next moment meanwhile later on soon 等
3 表空间渡语
on the rightleft to the rightleft of on one side of…on the other side of… at the foottopend of in the middlecentre of next to far from in front of等
4 表果渡语
for sinceasbecause of thus so as a result (of)等
5 表转折渡语
but yet however after all in fact while on the contrary instead of although otherwise in spite of等
6 表列举渡语
for example such as like as follows in other words and so on等
7 表推进渡语
on one hand… on the other hand… in addition to as well still also in other words not only…but also… besides in addition furthermore what’s more moreover等
8 表总结渡语
in short in a word in general in brief in all all in all above all等
三常句型
1重点句型
1) It’s adj for sb to do 做…某说…
2) …so … that … … …
…too … to do 太… …
such … that … … …
3) not…until… 直……
例 I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back
4)The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 原…
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie ( 生气原说谎)
5) That is why + 句子 …原
6) That is because + 句子 …
7) It is said that + 句子 说…
It is reported that + 句子 报道…
8) There is no doubt that + 句子 毫疑问…
9) It goes without saying that + 句子 言喻毫疑问
10) There is no need to do没必做…
11) There is no point in doing 做某事毫意义
2 提建议
had better (not) do ()做
It’s +adjn offor sb to do
I suggest that you (should) do 建议做…
be supposed to do 应该做
If I were you I would do…话会做…
Don’t forget to doRemember to do
Why not do why don’t you do… 什…
How about what about doing …样
3 表示喜欢感兴趣
like love doingenjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A愿做B
be interested in doing show take great interest in n doing 感兴趣
4努力做…
try to do努力做…
try one’s best to do do one’s best to do 竭全力做…
make efforts to do make every effort to do 力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 力做…
spare no effort to do 遗余力做…
do what everything sb can to do 某全力做…
5 算做… 计划做…
intend plan to do 算做… be going to do 算计划做…
decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做…
make up one’s mind to do定决心做…
6 表示想希
want to do would like to do 想做…
hopewish to do 希做… expect to do 期着做…
desire to dohave a great desire to do
7 加doing作宾语动词
finish keep practice suggest allow consider mind miss avoid imagine enjoy doing
固定搭配
look forward to doing 盼做…
keep on doing 坚持做…
dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情禁做…
keep stop prevent sb from doing 阻止某做…
be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙做…
spend time money (in )doing spend time money on + 名词 花费时间做…
have fun have a good time enjoy oneself doing 玩开心
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