专题05 网络
1．（2021·河北衡水中学模拟预测）假定李华网络已世界变成真正全球村请某报社写封信网络教育影响谈谈法容包括：
1网络教育影响（利弊）
2建议
注意：
1写作词数应80左右
2请格式答题卡相应位置作答
2．（2021·宁夏·银川中高期中）假定李华疫情美国朋友Tom正网课邮件中询问提高网课效率请英语写封回信提高网课效率提建议容点：
1 网课时远离电子设备专心听课
2 制定学计划合理规划时间
3 老师学沟通
注意：1 词数100左右2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：疫情 pandemic网课 online course 效率 efficiency
电子设备 electronic device
Dear Tom
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Yours
Li Hua
3．（2021·浙江台州·高二期中）假定李华英国笔友Charles学录取疫情正犹豫否应该通网课程学知网课写信寻求建议请写封回信容包括：
1远程学优点缺点：
2建议
注意：1词数80左右2适增加细节行文连贯（疫情：epidemic）
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4．（2021·吉林农安·高二期末）假李华新冠肺炎(COVID19)疫情期间美国笔友Tom家网课想解网课体会请写封电子邮件说明感受想法
点：
1网课帮助
2网课缺陷
3建议
注意：1词数100左右
2适发挥行文连贯
3开头结尾已出计入总词数
参考词汇：online class网课additionally外selfcontrol控制interaction互动
Dear Tom
How are things going with you
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Yours
Li Hua
5．（2022·河北武邑中学高期末）学期开学受次新冠疫情影响学生家中网课请校刊写篇短文叙述网课法容：
1 网课背景
2 网课利弊
3 应弊端做法（少两点）
注意：
1 需写标题
2 词数80左右
3 参考词汇：网课 online classes新冠疫情 COVID19
6．（2021·甘肃·天水市第中学高阶段练）新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间学生停课停学家进行网课学现校英文报Study Online题征文解学生网课学情况请根点写稿参加：
1网络学利弊
2观点法
注意：1词数100左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：新冠病毒肺炎COVID19
注意：1词数100左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
7．（2021·浙江浙江·高三阶段练）着互联网发展许网络课堂应运生假李华学校拟举办场英文演讲赛现面全校学生征文文章题目网络课堂请The online course题写篇演讲稿容：
1简析网络课堂处
2简析网络课堂坏处
3认网络课堂未发展前景样
The online course
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8．（2021·全国·高三专题练）学校英语报举行题关线课征文赛请写篇短文参赛谈谈 线课法点：
1线课优点
2线课缺点
注意1标题开头已写
2词数100左右
On Online Learning
With the introduction of the Internet many changes have taken place in our lives
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9．（2021·广东中山·高期末）班举办题How to Stay Safe Online英语沙龙活动请结合身体会拟写份英语发言稿容包括：
1健康网远离良网站信息
2控制网时间注意保护
注意：
1写作词数应100左右
2发言稿开头已写
Hello everyone It＇s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online
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10．（2021·全国·高三二模）假设红星中学高学生李华美国笔友 Jim 校社团期活动非常感兴趣请英语写封信介绍社团边远区学生提供线课程情况具体容包括：
1 该活动目
2 该活动涉容
3 参该活动感受注意：1 词数少 50
2 开头结尾已出计入总词数提示词：线课程 online courses
Dear Jim
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Yours
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．Dear Sir Madam
The Internet has transformed the world into a global village altering all aspects of our life especially education Here I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one
The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs regardless of time and space As a result learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easier than ever The downside is just as noticeable Along with individualized courses the Internet presents halftruths that puzzle the young minds where selfcontrol and judging power are still forming
Therefore I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults And parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生某报社写封信网络教育影响谈谈考生法
详解
1词汇积累
转换：transform → turn
积极：positive→ active
困惑：puzzle→ confuse
建议：suggest→ advise
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village altering all aspects of our life especially education
拓展句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village which is altering all aspects of our life especially education
点睛
高分句型1Along with individualized courses the Internet presents halftruths that puzzle the young minds where selfcontrol and judging power are still forming（运关系代词that关系副词where引导定语句）
高分句型2Therefore I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults（运that引导宾语句）
2．Dear Tom
I’m sorry to learn that you need to take the online course because of the pandemic When taking the online course improving your study efficiency is of great importance I’m writing this email with the purpose of offering some useful suggestions to you
To begin with when taking online courses you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices which may distract your attention all the time Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily In addition it is a good idea to make a study schedule which can help you make better use of your time By doing so I’m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved Last but not the least why not keep frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face The more you communicate with them the less problem you will have which can save a lot of your time
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you Take good care of yourself during the pandemic
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生英语疫情正网课美国朋友Tom写封回信提高网课效率提建议
详解
1 词汇积累
重：important →of great importance
：helpful →useful
建议：advice →suggestion
首先：Firstly To begin with
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By doing so I’m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved
拓展句：If you do this I＇m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved
点睛
[高分句型1] To begin with when taking online courses you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices which may distract your attention all the time句话运which引导非限制性定语句
[高分句型2] The more you communicate with them the less problem you will have which can save a lot of your time句话运the+较级……the+较级……结构
3．Dear Charles
Congratulations on your success Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic I＇m writing to offer you some advice
Admittedly we can benefit a lot from distance education For example we don＇t need to worry about getting infected with novel coronavirus or getting stuck in traffic However distance learning requires selfdiscipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills Therefore I suggest you complete your degree at university instead of studying at home
I＇m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生已学录取正犹豫否应该通网课程学英国笔友Charles建议网课学谈谈利弊予相关建议
详解
1词汇积累
解：learn→know
建议：suggestion→advice
适……：be fit for…→be suitable for…
机会：chance→opportunity
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills
拓展句：Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together which makes it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills
点睛
高分句型1Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic I＇m writing to offer you some advice (运现分词短语作状语whether引导宾语句)
高分句型2However distance learning requires selfdiscipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance (运who引导限制性定语句)
4．Dear Tom
How are things going with you Hearing that you are also having online classes at home I＇d like to share with you my opinion about it
Since the outbreak of the COVID19 we have experienced more than a month of online classes which have benefited us a lot First it is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol Additionally we can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions However online classes also have disadvantages There is a lack of learning atmosphere just like in the classroom Sometimes you may get bored easily I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求美国笔友Tom写封电子邮件说明家网课感受想法
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态： 般现时
结构：总分法
第部分文章开头段说明写邮件原第二部分支持段说明家网课感受想法第三部分结尾段希方答复
求：
1 说明写信原：Tom分享家网课感受
2 说明家网课感受想法
① 网课帮助：提高控制力老师时沟通
② 网课缺陷：缺少课堂学氛围会感聊
③ 建议：学互动效果会更
3希答复
第二步列提纲 （重点词组）
have online classesshare sth with sbthe outbreak of the COVID19benefit sba good opportunity to do…communicate withdisadvantagea lack ofget bored
第三步：连词成句
(1) Hearing that you are also having online classes at home I＇d like to share with you my opinion about it
(2) Since the outbreak of the COVID19 we have experienced more than a month of online classes
(3) Online classes have benefited us a lot
(4) It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol
(5) We can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions
(6) Online classes also have disadvantages
(7) There is a lack of learning atmosphere online
(8) Sometimes you may get bored easily
(9) I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates
(10) I am looking forward to hearing from you
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇
1表文章结构序：first …additionally
2表转折关系：however
点睛
[高分句型1]
We have experienced more than a month of online classes which have benefited us a lot（which引导非限制性定语句）
[高分句型2]
It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol（it作形式语句式）
5．Due to the frequent outbreaks of COVID19 since the beginning of this term we have to spend a long time learning online
Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress But the negative aspects are also apparent For one thing lacking facetoface interaction online classes make it easier for students who are poor at selfdiscipline to be distracted For another long time exposure to the Internet environment has a negative effect on our health
To cope with the problems I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively During leisure time I often do indoor exercise to keep fit
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生疫情家网课事发表网课法
详解
1词汇积累
：owing tobecause of→due to
明显：obvious→apparent
影响：influence→effect
处理：deal with→cope with
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress
拓展句：There is no doubt that online classes are the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress
点睛
高分句型1For one thing lacking facetoface interaction online classes make it easier for students who are poor at selfdiscipline to be distracted (运who引导限制性定语句)
高分句型2To cope with the problems I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively (运动词定式作目状语分词短语作置定语)
6． Study Online
With the outbreak of the COVID19 a lot of students have to study online at home As for online studying it has two sides On the one hand it not only can release teachers from repeating the same contents and students can replay the teaching materials as well On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
As far as I’m concerned although online classes are a better option when it comes to the special situation at the moment I prefer to study in class because what students acquire at school is more than knowledge
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间学生停课停学家进行网课学现校英文报Study Online题征文解学生网课学情况
详解
1词汇积累
解放：free from→release from
获：obtain→acquire
选择：choice→option
目前：at present→at the moment
2句式拓展
列句变复合句
原句：On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
拓展句：On the other hand since online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
点睛
[高分句型1] On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision (运宾语句)
[高分句型2] As far as I’m concerned although online classes are a better option when it comes to the special situation at the moment I prefer to study in class because what students acquire at school is more than knowledge (运although引导步状语句)
7．The Online Course
As a newlydeveloping learning style the online course has become more and more popular recently Online courses often offer much convenience which is beneficial for students to save more time Online courses allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place What’s more any type of online course can be found easily However there is an obvious disadvantage of online course Not all the people can highly focus on the teachers while studying online so the freedom that makes online course such a great thing for some people but can be a challenge for others From my perspective online courses will become a trend in the future
解析
分析
篇书面表达属议文求考生根题目求学校举办英文演讲赛写篇题网络课堂（The online course）演讲稿
详解
1词汇积累
流行：popular→ welcome be sought after catch on
提供：offer→ providesupply
益：beneficial→ helpfuladvantageous
专注：focus on→ pay attention to
观点：perspective→ viewpointopinion
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Online courses allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place
拓展句：Online courses are convenient because they allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place
点睛
[高分句型1]Online courses often offer much convenience which is beneficial for students to save more time(which引导定语句)
[高分句型2]Not all the people can highly focus on the teachers while studying online so the freedom that makes online course such a great thing for some people but can be a challenge for others(so引导结果状语句)
8．Online Learning which used to be taught in classrooms is particularly popular now But online learning has its own disadvantages and advantages Advantages It isn’t limited by time and space students can enjoy better professional teaching resources learning interest is higher Disadvantages The biggest drawback of online learning is the lack of interaction between teachers and students teachers＇ supervision of students is not in place too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games
解析
分析
文篇说明文文章介绍线课优点缺点
详解
1词汇积累（4）
常：used to→would
……害：be harmful to→do harm to
尤特：particularly→in particular
助导致：contribute to→lead to→result in
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games
拓展句：Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things which contributes to their addiction to online games
点睛
[高分句型1 ] Online Learning which used to be taught in classrooms is particularly popular now句中which引导非限制性定语句
[高分句型2 ] Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games句中现分词作伴状语
9．Hello everyone It＇s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on Many students get addicted to the Internet They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies What＇s more spending too much time on the Internet can make us shortsighted and do harm to our health too So we should control our time online Last but not the least protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生结合身体会拟写份英语发言稿题网保持安全
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态：根提示时态般现时
结构：总分法
总分法指题句作总说支持句作分说种方式安排写容
求：
1健康网远离良网站信息
2控制网时间注意保护
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
too much do harm to and so on get addicted to concentrate on give away
第三步：连词成句
1 There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on
2 Many students get addicted to the Internet
3 They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies
4 Last but not the least protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1表文章结构序：First of all FirstlyFirst SecondlySecond… And then Finally In the end At last
2表列补充关系：What is more Besides Moreover Furthermore In addition As well as not only…but (also) including
3表转折关系：However On the contrary but Although +clause(句) In spite of +ndoing On the one hand…On the other hand… Some…while others…as for so…that…
4表果关系：Because As So Thus Therefore As a result
连句成文注意恰连词进行句子间衔接渡书写定规范清晰
点睛
[高分句型1] There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on句话运关系代词that引导定语句
[高分句型2] They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies 句话运so that引导结果状语句
[高分句型3] What＇s more spending too much time on the Internet can make us shortsighted and do harm to our health too 句话运动名词短语作语
10．Dear Jim
How is it going I’ m glad to know you’re interested in the activities of our student clubs
Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in ChinaOur courses cover a wide variety including Chinese English math physics history and so on We also organize some students to answer questions online every Saturday afternoon I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term and enjoy it a lot Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others
Do you have anything similar in your school Write back and share with me
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生美国笔友 Jim写封信介绍社团边远区学生提供线课程情况
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态：根提示时态般现时少量现完成时等
结构：总分法
总分法指题句作总说支持句作分说种方式安排写容
求：
1 该活动目
2 该活动涉容
3 参该活动感受
第二步列提纲 （重点词组）
online courses help middle school students in rural areas cover a wide variety organize some students to answer questions online be part of this activity feel the joy of helping others
第三步：连词成句
1 I’ m glad to know you’re interested in the activities of our student clubs
2 Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in China
3 Our courses cover a wide variety including Chinese English math physics history and so on
4 We also organize some students to answer questions online every Saturday afternoon
5 I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term and enjoy it a lot
6 Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others
7 Do you have anything similar in your school
8 Write back and share with me
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
：表列补充关系：including等
连句成文注意恰连词进行句子间衔接渡书写定规范清晰
点睛
[高分句型1] Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in China（限制性定语句运）
[高分句型2] Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others（现分词作状语）
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1．（2021·河北衡水中学模拟预测）假定李华网络已世界变成真正全球村请某报社写封信网络教育影响谈谈法容包括：
1网络教育影响（利弊）
2建议
注意：
1写作词数应80左右
2请格式答题卡相应位置作答
2．（2021·宁夏·银川中高期中）假定李华疫情美国朋友Tom正网课邮件中询问提高网课效率请英语写封回信提高网课效率提建议容点：
1 网课时远离电子设备专心听课
2 制定学计划合理规划时间
3 老师学沟通
注意：1 词数100左右2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：疫情 pandemic网课 online course 效率 efficiency
电子设备 electronic device
Dear Tom
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Yours
Li Hua
3．（2021·浙江台州·高二期中）假定李华英国笔友Charles学录取疫情正犹豫否应该通网课程学知网课写信寻求建议请写封回信容包括：
1远程学优点缺点：
2建议
注意：1词数80左右2适增加细节行文连贯（疫情：epidemic）
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4．（2021·吉林农安·高二期末）假李华新冠肺炎(COVID19)疫情期间美国笔友Tom家网课想解网课体会请写封电子邮件说明感受想法
点：
1网课帮助
2网课缺陷
3建议
注意：1词数100左右
2适发挥行文连贯
3开头结尾已出计入总词数
参考词汇：online class网课additionally外selfcontrol控制interaction互动
Dear Tom
How are things going with you
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Yours
Li Hua
5．（2022·河北武邑中学高期末）学期开学受次新冠疫情影响学生家中网课请校刊写篇短文叙述网课法容：
1 网课背景
2 网课利弊
3 应弊端做法（少两点）
注意：
1 需写标题
2 词数80左右
3 参考词汇：网课 online classes新冠疫情 COVID19
6．（2021·甘肃·天水市第中学高阶段练）新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间学生停课停学家进行网课学现校英文报Study Online题征文解学生网课学情况请根点写稿参加：
1网络学利弊
2观点法
注意：1词数100左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
参考词汇：新冠病毒肺炎COVID19
注意：1词数100左右
2适增加细节行文连贯
7．（2021·浙江浙江·高三阶段练）着互联网发展许网络课堂应运生假李华学校拟举办场英文演讲赛现面全校学生征文文章题目网络课堂请The online course题写篇演讲稿容：
1简析网络课堂处
2简析网络课堂坏处
3认网络课堂未发展前景样
The online course
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8．（2021·全国·高三专题练）学校英语报举行题关线课征文赛请写篇短文参赛谈谈 线课法点：
1线课优点
2线课缺点
注意1标题开头已写
2词数100左右
On Online Learning
With the introduction of the Internet many changes have taken place in our lives
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9．（2021·广东中山·高期末）班举办题How to Stay Safe Online英语沙龙活动请结合身体会拟写份英语发言稿容包括：
1健康网远离良网站信息
2控制网时间注意保护
注意：
1写作词数应100左右
2发言稿开头已写
Hello everyone It＇s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online
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10．（2021·全国·高三二模）假设红星中学高学生李华美国笔友 Jim 校社团期活动非常感兴趣请英语写封信介绍社团边远区学生提供线课程情况具体容包括：
1 该活动目
2 该活动涉容
3 参该活动感受注意：1 词数少 50
2 开头结尾已出计入总词数提示词：线课程 online courses
Dear Jim
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Yours
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．Dear Sir Madam
The Internet has transformed the world into a global village altering all aspects of our life especially education Here I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one
The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs regardless of time and space As a result learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easier than ever The downside is just as noticeable Along with individualized courses the Internet presents halftruths that puzzle the young minds where selfcontrol and judging power are still forming
Therefore I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults And parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens
Yours faithfully
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生某报社写封信网络教育影响谈谈考生法
详解
1词汇积累
转换：transform → turn
积极：positive→ active
困惑：puzzle→ confuse
建议：suggest→ advise
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village altering all aspects of our life especially education
拓展句：The Internet has transformed the world into a global village which is altering all aspects of our life especially education
点睛
高分句型1Along with individualized courses the Internet presents halftruths that puzzle the young minds where selfcontrol and judging power are still forming（运关系代词that关系副词where引导定语句）
高分句型2Therefore I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults（运that引导宾语句）
2．Dear Tom
I’m sorry to learn that you need to take the online course because of the pandemic When taking the online course improving your study efficiency is of great importance I’m writing this email with the purpose of offering some useful suggestions to you
To begin with when taking online courses you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices which may distract your attention all the time Keeping a distance with them will help you focus on your lessons more easily In addition it is a good idea to make a study schedule which can help you make better use of your time By doing so I’m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved Last but not the least why not keep frequent communication with your teachers and classmates even though you can not meet them face to face The more you communicate with them the less problem you will have which can save a lot of your time
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you Take good care of yourself during the pandemic
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生英语疫情正网课美国朋友Tom写封回信提高网课效率提建议
详解
1 词汇积累
重：important →of great importance
：helpful →useful
建议：advice →suggestion
首先：Firstly To begin with
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：By doing so I’m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved
拓展句：If you do this I＇m sure your study efficiency will be greatly improved
点睛
[高分句型1] To begin with when taking online courses you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices which may distract your attention all the time句话运which引导非限制性定语句
[高分句型2] The more you communicate with them the less problem you will have which can save a lot of your time句话运the+较级……the+较级……结构
3．Dear Charles
Congratulations on your success Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic I＇m writing to offer you some advice
Admittedly we can benefit a lot from distance education For example we don＇t need to worry about getting infected with novel coronavirus or getting stuck in traffic However distance learning requires selfdiscipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills Therefore I suggest you complete your degree at university instead of studying at home
I＇m looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生已学录取正犹豫否应该通网课程学英国笔友Charles建议网课学谈谈利弊予相关建议
详解
1词汇积累
解：learn→know
建议：suggestion→advice
适……：be fit for…→be suitable for…
机会：chance→opportunity
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills
拓展句：Moreover students do not have opportunities to socialize together which makes it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills
点睛
高分句型1Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic I＇m writing to offer you some advice (运现分词短语作状语whether引导宾语句)
高分句型2However distance learning requires selfdiscipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance (运who引导限制性定语句)
4．Dear Tom
How are things going with you Hearing that you are also having online classes at home I＇d like to share with you my opinion about it
Since the outbreak of the COVID19 we have experienced more than a month of online classes which have benefited us a lot First it is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol Additionally we can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions However online classes also have disadvantages There is a lack of learning atmosphere just like in the classroom Sometimes you may get bored easily I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求美国笔友Tom写封电子邮件说明家网课感受想法
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态： 般现时
结构：总分法
第部分文章开头段说明写邮件原第二部分支持段说明家网课感受想法第三部分结尾段希方答复
求：
1 说明写信原：Tom分享家网课感受
2 说明家网课感受想法
① 网课帮助：提高控制力老师时沟通
② 网课缺陷：缺少课堂学氛围会感聊
③ 建议：学互动效果会更
3希答复
第二步列提纲 （重点词组）
have online classesshare sth with sbthe outbreak of the COVID19benefit sba good opportunity to do…communicate withdisadvantagea lack ofget bored
第三步：连词成句
(1) Hearing that you are also having online classes at home I＇d like to share with you my opinion about it
(2) Since the outbreak of the COVID19 we have experienced more than a month of online classes
(3) Online classes have benefited us a lot
(4) It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol
(5) We can communicate more with teachers online whenever we have questions
(6) Online classes also have disadvantages
(7) There is a lack of learning atmosphere online
(8) Sometimes you may get bored easily
(9) I think it could be more effective if you could have more interactions with your classmates
(10) I am looking forward to hearing from you
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇
1表文章结构序：first …additionally
2表转折关系：however
点睛
[高分句型1]
We have experienced more than a month of online classes which have benefited us a lot（which引导非限制性定语句）
[高分句型2]
It is a good opportunity to improve our ability of selfcontrol（it作形式语句式）
5．Due to the frequent outbreaks of COVID19 since the beginning of this term we have to spend a long time learning online
Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress But the negative aspects are also apparent For one thing lacking facetoface interaction online classes make it easier for students who are poor at selfdiscipline to be distracted For another long time exposure to the Internet environment has a negative effect on our health
To cope with the problems I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively During leisure time I often do indoor exercise to keep fit
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生疫情家网课事发表网课法
详解
1词汇积累
：owing tobecause of→due to
明显：obvious→apparent
影响：influence→effect
处理：deal with→cope with
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Online classes are undoubtedly the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress
拓展句：There is no doubt that online classes are the perfect solution to ensure students’ academic progress
点睛
高分句型1For one thing lacking facetoface interaction online classes make it easier for students who are poor at selfdiscipline to be distracted (运who引导限制性定语句)
高分句型2To cope with the problems I concentrate on the questions raised by teachers and think actively (运动词定式作目状语分词短语作置定语)
6． Study Online
With the outbreak of the COVID19 a lot of students have to study online at home As for online studying it has two sides On the one hand it not only can release teachers from repeating the same contents and students can replay the teaching materials as well On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
As far as I’m concerned although online classes are a better option when it comes to the special situation at the moment I prefer to study in class because what students acquire at school is more than knowledge
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文新冠病毒肺炎肆虐期间学生停课停学家进行网课学现校英文报Study Online题征文解学生网课学情况
详解
1词汇积累
解放：free from→release from
获：obtain→acquire
选择：choice→option
目前：at present→at the moment
2句式拓展
列句变复合句
原句：On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
拓展句：On the other hand since online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision
点睛
[高分句型1] On the other hand online teaching lacks teacherstudent interactions and people doubt whether students have selfdiscipline without supervision (运宾语句)
[高分句型2] As far as I’m concerned although online classes are a better option when it comes to the special situation at the moment I prefer to study in class because what students acquire at school is more than knowledge (运although引导步状语句)
7．The Online Course
As a newlydeveloping learning style the online course has become more and more popular recently Online courses often offer much convenience which is beneficial for students to save more time Online courses allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place What’s more any type of online course can be found easily However there is an obvious disadvantage of online course Not all the people can highly focus on the teachers while studying online so the freedom that makes online course such a great thing for some people but can be a challenge for others From my perspective online courses will become a trend in the future
解析
分析
篇书面表达属议文求考生根题目求学校举办英文演讲赛写篇题网络课堂（The online course）演讲稿
详解
1词汇积累
流行：popular→ welcome be sought after catch on
提供：offer→ providesupply
益：beneficial→ helpfuladvantageous
专注：focus on→ pay attention to
观点：perspective→ viewpointopinion
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Online courses allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place
拓展句：Online courses are convenient because they allow students to study knowledge at any time and any place
点睛
[高分句型1]Online courses often offer much convenience which is beneficial for students to save more time(which引导定语句)
[高分句型2]Not all the people can highly focus on the teachers while studying online so the freedom that makes online course such a great thing for some people but can be a challenge for others(so引导结果状语句)
8．Online Learning which used to be taught in classrooms is particularly popular now But online learning has its own disadvantages and advantages Advantages It isn’t limited by time and space students can enjoy better professional teaching resources learning interest is higher Disadvantages The biggest drawback of online learning is the lack of interaction between teachers and students teachers＇ supervision of students is not in place too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games
解析
分析
文篇说明文文章介绍线课优点缺点
详解
1词汇积累（4）
常：used to→would
……害：be harmful to→do harm to
尤特：particularly→in particular
助导致：contribute to→lead to→result in
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games
拓展句：Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things which contributes to their addiction to online games
点睛
[高分句型1 ] Online Learning which used to be taught in classrooms is particularly popular now句中which引导非限制性定语句
[高分句型2 ] Too long exposure to computers mobile phones tablets and other electronic products is not only harmful to health but also aggravates children＇s interest in these things contributing to their addiction to online games句中现分词作伴状语
9．Hello everyone It＇s my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to stay safe online There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on Many students get addicted to the Internet They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies What＇s more spending too much time on the Internet can make us shortsighted and do harm to our health too So we should control our time online Last but not the least protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生结合身体会拟写份英语发言稿题网保持安全
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态：根提示时态般现时
结构：总分法
总分法指题句作总说支持句作分说种方式安排写容
求：
1健康网远离良网站信息
2控制网时间注意保护
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
too much do harm to and so on get addicted to concentrate on give away
第三步：连词成句
1 There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on
2 Many students get addicted to the Internet
3 They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies
4 Last but not the least protect ourself and never give away any personal information when surfing the Internet
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1表文章结构序：First of all FirstlyFirst SecondlySecond… And then Finally In the end At last
2表列补充关系：What is more Besides Moreover Furthermore In addition As well as not only…but (also) including
3表转折关系：However On the contrary but Although +clause(句) In spite of +ndoing On the one hand…On the other hand… Some…while others…as for so…that…
4表果关系：Because As So Thus Therefore As a result
连句成文注意恰连词进行句子间衔接渡书写定规范清晰
点睛
[高分句型1] There is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet like violence porn and so on句话运关系代词that引导定语句
[高分句型2] They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies 句话运so that引导结果状语句
[高分句型3] What＇s more spending too much time on the Internet can make us shortsighted and do harm to our health too 句话运动名词短语作语
10．Dear Jim
How is it going I’ m glad to know you’re interested in the activities of our student clubs
Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in ChinaOur courses cover a wide variety including Chinese English math physics history and so on We also organize some students to answer questions online every Saturday afternoon I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term and enjoy it a lot Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others
Do you have anything similar in your school Write back and share with me
Yours
Li Hua
解析
分析
篇书面表达属应文求考生美国笔友 Jim写封信介绍社团边远区学生提供线课程情况
详解
第步：审题
体裁：应文
时态：根提示时态般现时少量现完成时等
结构：总分法
总分法指题句作总说支持句作分说种方式安排写容
求：
1 该活动目
2 该活动涉容
3 参该活动感受
第二步列提纲 （重点词组）
online courses help middle school students in rural areas cover a wide variety organize some students to answer questions online be part of this activity feel the joy of helping others
第三步：连词成句
1 I’ m glad to know you’re interested in the activities of our student clubs
2 Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in China
3 Our courses cover a wide variety including Chinese English math physics history and so on
4 We also organize some students to answer questions online every Saturday afternoon
5 I have been part of this activity since the beginning of the term and enjoy it a lot
6 Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others
7 Do you have anything similar in your school
8 Write back and share with me
根提示关键词（组）进行遣词造句注意谓致时态问题
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
：表列补充关系：including等
连句成文注意恰连词进行句子间衔接渡书写定规范清晰
点睛
[高分句型1] Frankly the one that impresses me most is the online courses we offer to help middle school students in rural areas in China（限制性定语句运）
[高分句型2] Hearing the students’ sincere words of appreciation I feel the joy of helping others（现分词作状语）
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