高考书面表达
（七）求助信
．写作结构
第段： 1介绍
2写信原
3写信目
第二段： 具体问题
第三段： 1表达感谢 2期盼回复
二．典套话
1介绍
I m LiHua a student from XingHua high school
I’m LiHuawho is a student from…
I’m LiHua a 17yearold boy studying in XinHua high school
2写信原
I heard that you are very good at …
My teacher told me that you are …
As we all knowyou are…
3写信目
Now I am writing to ask you for help
4 做某事困难
I have (much) troubledifficulty in doing sth
I find it extremely hard for me to do sth
5希请求表达感谢盼回复
I sincerely hope that you can…
I would trulydeeply really appreciate it if you could…
Your generous help and immediate response will be truly appreciated
I am looking forward to your reply
I wonder if you can recommend some effective methods of doing sth
6具体需帮助事项
Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some suggestionshelp on the following problems First of all(困难)which has annoyed me for quite a long time Besides（困难二）…Finally (困难三)
8常见困难
1）生活方面
相处 ：get along well with my classmates the new teacher my parents
握时间：arrange and make full use of my everyday time for valuable things
明确目标 know the purpose of my life and direction of my future
2) 学方面：
懂语法 have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into speaking and writing
背单词容易忘记 have trouble in recite words even though I recite well I can’t remember soon
三．范文学
范文：2016年高考英语全国卷Ⅰ书面表达题： 假定李华暑假想家外资公司兼职已写申请书简历（resume）外教Ms Jenkins写信 请帮修改附材料文字格式（format）
注意：1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
容分析 写作题思路非常清晰：写信目阐述写作背景描述求助容期回复表达感谢
Dear Jenkins
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term I’m writing to ask for your help
I’m applying for a parttime job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation and I have just completed my application letter and resume However I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used I know you have a busy schedule but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment（附件）
Thank you for your kindness
Yours Li Hua
范文二
Dear Robot
I’m LiHua a senior high school student As I know you are an expert in English learning I m writing to ask you about some problems I come across
Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some suggestions on following problems First of all English is such a headache for me that I am not interested in it Besides I have much trouble in remembering words which annoyed me for quite a long time What’s worse I am afraid to take part in group discussion because of my poor English
I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions I am looking forward to your reply
Yours LiHua
实战演练：
假李华学英语遇困难语法难理解会害怕写作希美国笔友John建议
句子：
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Dear John
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高考书面表达
（七）求助信
．写作结构
第段： 1介绍
2写信原
3写信目
第二段： 具体问题
第三段： 1表达感谢 2期盼回复
二．典套话
1介绍
I m LiHua a student from XingHua high school
I’m LiHuawho is a student from…
I’m LiHua a 17yearold boy studying in XinHua high school
2写信原
I heard that you are very good at …
My teacher told me that you are …
As we all knowyou are…
3写信目
Now I am writing to ask you for help
4 做某事困难
I have (much) troubledifficulty in doing sth
I find it extremely hard for me to do sth
5希请求表达感谢盼回复
I sincerely hope that you can…
I would trulydeeply really appreciate it if you could…
Your generous help and immediate response will be truly appreciated
I am looking forward to your reply
I wonder if you can recommend some effective methods of doing sth
6具体需帮助事项
Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some suggestionshelp on the following problems First of all(困难)which has annoyed me for quite a long time Besides（困难二）…Finally (困难三)
8常见困难
1）生活方面
相处 ：get along well with my classmates the new teacher my parents
握时间：arrange and make full use of my everyday time for valuable things
明确目标 know the purpose of my life and direction of my future
2) 学方面：
懂语法 have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into speaking and writing
背单词容易忘记 have trouble in recite words even though I recite well I can’t remember soon
三．范文学
范文：2016年高考英语全国卷Ⅰ书面表达题： 假定李华暑假想家外资公司兼职已写申请书简历（resume）外教Ms Jenkins写信 请帮修改附材料文字格式（format）
注意：1 词数100左右
2 适增加细节行文连贯
容分析 写作题思路非常清晰：写信目阐述写作背景描述求助容期回复表达感谢
Dear Jenkins
I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term I’m writing to ask for your help
I’m applying for a parttime job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation and I have just completed my application letter and resume However I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used I know you have a busy schedule but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment（附件）
Thank you for your kindness
Yours Li Hua
范文二
Dear Robot
I’m LiHua a senior high school student As I know you are an expert in English learning I m writing to ask you about some problems I come across
Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some suggestions on following problems First of all English is such a headache for me that I am not interested in it Besides I have much trouble in remembering words which annoyed me for quite a long time What’s worse I am afraid to take part in group discussion because of my poor English
I would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions I am looking forward to your reply
Yours LiHua
实战演练：
假李华学英语遇困难语法难理解会害怕写作希美国笔友John建议
句子：
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear John
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文档香网(httpswwwxiangdangnet)户传
《香当网》用户分享的内容，不代表《香当网》观点或立场，请自行判断内容的真实性和可靠性！
该内容是文档的文本内容，更好的格式请下载文档
