物描写类文章般说会求考生描写身边老师学父母偶等文章布局说般会外貌职业性格爱事件等方面进行描写细节方面说进行外貌描写语言描写心理描写动作描写
写作策略
认真审题确定体裁时态称
物描写类文章应第三称单数物进行评价性概括性介绍时应般现时态果涉发生具体事例般时态
二 构思提纲列出写作点
物描写类文章般总－分－总结构进行写作先物进行概括性介绍特点事迹进行详细介绍进行概括性评价
物描写类文章
容
典句式
第段
简介绍物姓名等信息
The person I respect most is my English teacher Mr Black
I have many good teachers in the last three years Mr Black is the one I respect most
第二段
方面物进行介绍
外貌描写[源]
Jane is a tall girl with curly hair
She has beautiful big eyes I haven’t seen before[源]
Mr Black is a wise man with a medium build
He wears a pair of black glasses [源Z§X§X§K]
特长爱描写
Jack is good atfond ofdoes well in skating
His favorite sporthobby is to ……
Whenever he is free he plays football with his friend
Although he is short he is a great basketball player
性格描写
She is an outgoing person who can make friends easily
(optimistic independent active able ambitious friendly)
事件描写
She is always helping people in need with all her heart
On a rainy Saturday morning we went to ……
Suddenly LuckilyFinallySurprisingly……
第三段
总结评价
In my mind my mother is the best mother in the world
I want to be an excellent teacher just like Mr Black
三遣词造句
写作步骤根确定提纲点选择适词汇造句造句时初写作者简单句复合句特殊句式写作思路进行写作保证句子基正确基础简单句润色稍复杂句式学@
描写物常句式翻译练
1 擅长交流性格外少年
2 喜欢数学老师方法课堂生动起
3 影响父亲
4 身处困境未放弃梦想
5 坚信放弃做事情
6 月两次孤院帮孩子洗衣服扫卫生
7 遇什困难朋友总身边
8 相信父亲陪伴会健康成长
9 正享受晚餐时候难忘事情发生
10 汤姆坐第排穿着蓝色T恤男孩子
11 然年纪强壮
12 非常喜欢位特朋友
13 会永远尊敬爱戴数学老师
14 没帮助成功
15 正父母帮取进步
16 遇困难放弃时微笑出现脑海中振奋
17 什父母会满足
18 爱生命温暖家妈妈
19 爱生命中指引走光明正确道路老师
20 等长会妈妈顾样顾
答案
1 He is good at communicating with others because he is an outgoing teenager
2 I like my math teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively
3 The person who has influenced me most is my father
4 He never gave up his dream even though he was in trouble
5 He believes that he can almost do anything as only as he doesn’t give up
6 He goes to an orphanage twice a month to wash clothes and do some cleaning for the children there
7 No matter what difficulties I meet my best friend is always by my side
8 I am sure I will grow up healthily with my father’s accompany
9 While we were enjoying our dinner something unforgettable happened
10 Tom is the boy sitting in the first row who is wearing a blue Tshirt
11 Although he is very old yet he is quite strong
12 She is my special friend who I like a lot
13 I will respect an love my math teacher forever
14 Without her help I couldn’t have succeeded
15 It’s my parents that help me make great progress
16 Whenever I am in trouble and am about to give up her smile will appear in my mind and cheer me up at once
17 Whatever I ask for my parents will try to get it
18 I love my mother who gives me life and a warm home to live in
19 I love my teacher who leads me to a bright and right way in my life
20 When I grow up I will look after my mother as she does for me
四组句成篇
读文章检查否存语法拼写错误句句间增加衔接渡词汇组句成篇
真题链接
（2014呼伦贝尔市）
母爱情深母爱价学会感恩学会回报某英语网站举办My mother题英语征文活动请根面表格提供信息写篇短文
提示：1．短文应包括表格中全部信息条理清楚行文连贯段落分明
2．短文中出现真实名名
3．词数90词左右开头已出计入总词数
写作点
1．介绍母亲 信息包括年龄外貌特征工作特长兴趣爱
2．描述母亲做什感受
3．做什回报母爱
My mother
We need love We also need to love The person I love most is my mother
参考范文
We need love We also need to love The person I love most is my mother
My mother is 41 years old She is a woman of medium build with long black hair She is a history teacher in a middle school What she likes most is dancing And She can cook delicious food
She did a lot for me when I was a child She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn’t have much money
When I grow up I will do what I can to make my mother happy I’ll save money and buy her what she wants I’ll take her to the sights around China Most importantly I will stay with her when I have free time That’s what she wants most I think
点评
实战演练（荆门卷）
三年初中生活中肯定遇老师言爱学校英语广播电台开展I love youmy English teacher英语征文活动请根面写作点求写封英语广播稿．
写作点：
1．中等身高戴眼镜性格外善交流喜欢运动常学篮球
2．爱工作严格关爱学生帮助家庭困难学生
3．课堂趣充满活力常开展丰富彩活动课帮助学困生学英语成绩．
参考词汇：mediumoutgoingcommunicatestrictcare aboutin troublecolorfulThanks to
写作求：
1．词数80100（短文开始结束语已出计入总词数）
2．容完整语言流畅逐句翻译适发挥
3．短文中出现真实姓名校名．
I love youmy English teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacherMr Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．
I love youmy English teacher I will never forget you forever
参考范文
I love youmy English teacher I have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacherMr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．Mr．Huang is of medium height and a little thin．He wears a pair of glasses．He is good at communicating with others because he is outgoing．He likes sports．You can see him play basketball with us students after class．Mr．Huang enjoys his work．And he is a strict but caring teacher．He is very strict with us but cares about every student．When the students from poor families are in troublehe is always ready to help them．
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively and active．In his classwe often have different kinds of activities such as reading．competition and discussion．His class is so funny and exciting that all of us fall in love with English．After classhe usually helps the students who have difficulties in learning English．Thanks to his hard workwe have improved our English a lot．
I love youmy English teacherI will never forget you
实战演练二（2018年山东省沂卷）
亲爱学三年初中生活中 总会学成朋友请 My Best Friend and I 题 根求提示 英语写篇短文
求
1 果朋友女生请名字Mary 果男生 请Jeff短文中出现真实名校名相关信息否予评分
2 少60词
提示
I Who is your best friend
2 How long have you been friends And how did you become friends
3 How are you the same as and different from your best friend And what do you like about him her
My Best Friend and I
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
My Best Friend and I
I have made many good friends during the past three years However in my mind my best friend is always Jeff
Three years ago as a new student in our class I felt very lonely Jeff got close to me with his warm smile At that time my English was very poor Jeff often helped me learn English With his help I made much progress in English Though we are both tall and thin we are different Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer While I’m quieter than him I do well in playing basketball We spend lots of happy time playing with and helping each other According to me he is always a warm and kind boy who helps others
I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever
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物描写类文章般说会求考生描写身边老师学父母偶等文章布局说般会外貌职业性格爱事件等方面进行描写细节方面说进行外貌描写语言描写心理描写动作描写
写作策略
认真审题确定体裁时态称
物描写类文章应第三称单数物进行评价性概括性介绍时应般现时态果涉发生具体事例般时态
二 构思提纲列出写作点
物描写类文章般总－分－总结构进行写作先物进行概括性介绍特点事迹进行详细介绍进行概括性评价
物描写类文章
容
典句式
第段
简介绍物姓名等信息
The person I respect most is my English teacher Mr Black
I have many good teachers in the last three years Mr Black is the one I respect most
第二段
方面物进行介绍
外貌描写[源]
Jane is a tall girl with curly hair
She has beautiful big eyes I haven’t seen before[源]
Mr Black is a wise man with a medium build
He wears a pair of black glasses [源Z§X§X§K]
特长爱描写
Jack is good atfond ofdoes well in skating
His favorite sporthobby is to ……
Whenever he is free he plays football with his friend
Although he is short he is a great basketball player
性格描写
She is an outgoing person who can make friends easily
(optimistic independent active able ambitious friendly)
事件描写
She is always helping people in need with all her heart
On a rainy Saturday morning we went to ……
Suddenly LuckilyFinallySurprisingly……
第三段
总结评价
In my mind my mother is the best mother in the world
I want to be an excellent teacher just like Mr Black
三遣词造句
写作步骤根确定提纲点选择适词汇造句造句时初写作者简单句复合句特殊句式写作思路进行写作保证句子基正确基础简单句润色稍复杂句式学@
描写物常句式翻译练
1 擅长交流性格外少年
2 喜欢数学老师方法课堂生动起
3 影响父亲
4 身处困境未放弃梦想
5 坚信放弃做事情
6 月两次孤院帮孩子洗衣服扫卫生
7 遇什困难朋友总身边
8 相信父亲陪伴会健康成长
9 正享受晚餐时候难忘事情发生
10 汤姆坐第排穿着蓝色T恤男孩子
11 然年纪强壮
12 非常喜欢位特朋友
13 会永远尊敬爱戴数学老师
14 没帮助成功
15 正父母帮取进步
16 遇困难放弃时微笑出现脑海中振奋
17 什父母会满足
18 爱生命温暖家妈妈
19 爱生命中指引走光明正确道路老师
20 等长会妈妈顾样顾
答案
1 He is good at communicating with others because he is an outgoing teenager
2 I like my math teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively
3 The person who has influenced me most is my father
4 He never gave up his dream even though he was in trouble
5 He believes that he can almost do anything as only as he doesn’t give up
6 He goes to an orphanage twice a month to wash clothes and do some cleaning for the children there
7 No matter what difficulties I meet my best friend is always by my side
8 I am sure I will grow up healthily with my father’s accompany
9 While we were enjoying our dinner something unforgettable happened
10 Tom is the boy sitting in the first row who is wearing a blue Tshirt
11 Although he is very old yet he is quite strong
12 She is my special friend who I like a lot
13 I will respect an love my math teacher forever
14 Without her help I couldn’t have succeeded
15 It’s my parents that help me make great progress
16 Whenever I am in trouble and am about to give up her smile will appear in my mind and cheer me up at once
17 Whatever I ask for my parents will try to get it
18 I love my mother who gives me life and a warm home to live in
19 I love my teacher who leads me to a bright and right way in my life
20 When I grow up I will look after my mother as she does for me
四组句成篇
读文章检查否存语法拼写错误句句间增加衔接渡词汇组句成篇
真题链接
（2014呼伦贝尔市）
母爱情深母爱价学会感恩学会回报某英语网站举办My mother题英语征文活动请根面表格提供信息写篇短文
提示：1．短文应包括表格中全部信息条理清楚行文连贯段落分明
2．短文中出现真实名名
3．词数90词左右开头已出计入总词数
写作点
1．介绍母亲 信息包括年龄外貌特征工作特长兴趣爱
2．描述母亲做什感受
3．做什回报母爱
My mother
We need love We also need to love The person I love most is my mother
参考范文
We need love We also need to love The person I love most is my mother
My mother is 41 years old She is a woman of medium build with long black hair She is a history teacher in a middle school What she likes most is dancing And She can cook delicious food
She did a lot for me when I was a child She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn’t have much money
When I grow up I will do what I can to make my mother happy I’ll save money and buy her what she wants I’ll take her to the sights around China Most importantly I will stay with her when I have free time That’s what she wants most I think
点评
实战演练（荆门卷）
三年初中生活中肯定遇老师言爱学校英语广播电台开展I love youmy English teacher英语征文活动请根面写作点求写封英语广播稿．
写作点：
1．中等身高戴眼镜性格外善交流喜欢运动常学篮球
2．爱工作严格关爱学生帮助家庭困难学生
3．课堂趣充满活力常开展丰富彩活动课帮助学困生学英语成绩．
参考词汇：mediumoutgoingcommunicatestrictcare aboutin troublecolorfulThanks to
写作求：
1．词数80100（短文开始结束语已出计入总词数）
2．容完整语言流畅逐句翻译适发挥
3．短文中出现真实姓名校名．
I love youmy English teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacherMr Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．
I love youmy English teacher I will never forget you forever
参考范文
I love youmy English teacher I have met many good teachers in the last three years．My English teacherMr．Huang is one of them．Now let me tell you something about him．Mr．Huang is of medium height and a little thin．He wears a pair of glasses．He is good at communicating with others because he is outgoing．He likes sports．You can see him play basketball with us students after class．Mr．Huang enjoys his work．And he is a strict but caring teacher．He is very strict with us but cares about every student．When the students from poor families are in troublehe is always ready to help them．
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively and active．In his classwe often have different kinds of activities such as reading．competition and discussion．His class is so funny and exciting that all of us fall in love with English．After classhe usually helps the students who have difficulties in learning English．Thanks to his hard workwe have improved our English a lot．
I love youmy English teacherI will never forget you
实战演练二（2018年山东省沂卷）
亲爱学三年初中生活中 总会学成朋友请 My Best Friend and I 题 根求提示 英语写篇短文
求
1 果朋友女生请名字Mary 果男生 请Jeff短文中出现真实名校名相关信息否予评分
2 少60词
提示
I Who is your best friend
2 How long have you been friends And how did you become friends
3 How are you the same as and different from your best friend And what do you like about him her
My Best Friend and I
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
My Best Friend and I
I have made many good friends during the past three years However in my mind my best friend is always Jeff
Three years ago as a new student in our class I felt very lonely Jeff got close to me with his warm smile At that time my English was very poor Jeff often helped me learn English With his help I made much progress in English Though we are both tall and thin we are different Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer While I’m quieter than him I do well in playing basketball We spend lots of happy time playing with and helping each other According to me he is always a warm and kind boy who helps others
I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever
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