高三英语物传记作文复突破
How to write biography
Teaching aims
Knowledge aims
1 Get the students to know some basic knowledge about English writing
2 Get the students to know the words and expressions about describing persons
3 Get the students to improve your composition with advanced words and complex structures
Ability aims
1 Be able to use the some basic knowledge about English writing
2 Be able to use some advanced words and complex structures
Emotional aims
1 Stimulate the students’ learning motivation
2 Improve their ability of cooperating with each other through discussing
Teaching difficult point and important points
Get students to make use of the skills to write a good English composition
Teaching methods
1 Taskbased teaching and learning
2 Group work and discussion
Teaching aids teaching plan multimedia and slide
Teaching procedures
Step 1 Presentation
1 Show the students a writing task
2 Disscuss the requests of the task
Step 2 The structure of biography
1 Birthday and birthplace
Was born on… in…
2 Family background
1…was born ininto a poor rich family
hisher family was so poor that…
… was the son of a poor family
描述时候成长历程：
when he was a small boy young
as a child as a boy of 15
during his her childhood
… spend his childhood in…
描述生活：
live a happy hard life
with the help of…
his father was strict with him…
亚伯翰·林肯 1809年2月12日出生贫穷家庭
简单句：
Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family on February 121809
列句：
Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family and born on February 121809
句（定语句）：
Abraham Lincoln who was born on February 121809 was the son of a poor family
Abraham Lincoln who was the son of a poor family was born on February 121809
句（位语句）：
Abraham Lincoln the son of a poor family was born on February 121809
3 Education background
be admitted to …college…学录取
graduate from…department（院系）of …university毕业…
when at college he majored in…学修
receive a doctor’s degreea PhD degree获博士学位
be awarded …(奖项) 嘉奖…
go abroad for further studies出国深造
have little schooling (education)受少教育
Practice 出生贫苦家庭狄更斯受少教育句：
定语句：
Charles Dickens who was born in a poor family had little schooling
非谓语：
1）分词充定语修饰前面名词
Charles Dickens born in a poor family had little schooling
2）分词充状语表原
Born in a poor family Charles Dickens had little schooling
4 Big events in one’s life
1）be interested in… be fond of…
…感兴趣喜爱
2）work hard at…
…工作努力
3）serve as…
作…
4）devote his lifetimeoneself to…
生投入…
5）concentrate oneself on…
集中某注意力做…
6）do research about into…
做关…研究
7）make up one’s mind to do sth
定决定做某事
8）do sth with great determination and perseverance
着巨决心毅力做
9）be strict in sth
…严格求
10）have a …way of doing sth
做某事方面着…方式
11）try one’s best to do sth
全力做某事
12）encourage sb to do
鼓励某做某事
13）fight for give up one’s life for sbsth
…奋斗某某事放弃生命
14）win a prizethe first prize in …competition
赛中获奖励获第名
15)receiveobtainwin the Nobel Prize for…
…获诺贝尔奖
16)be good at… do well in…
…做
17)be crazy about… enjoy …
…着迷享受…
18)make rapid progress in …
…做出进步
19)set a new world record of …
创造项新世界纪录
20)equalbreak the world record
破世界纪录
21)win (won) a gold silver bronze medal
获金牌银牌铜牌
22）win the xxth place
获第名
23)be selected to become a member of…
选… 成…员
24)study hard train hard
学努力训练努力
25)go through hardship
历困难挫折
26)have a gift talent for …(language)
… (语言)天份
27)realize one’s dream
实现梦想
28)overcome many difficulties
克服困难
pratice高锟1933年11月4日出生海富裕家庭做试验产生浓厚兴趣
定语句：
Gaokun who was born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
非谓语（定语）
Gaokun born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
非谓语（状语）
Born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
61957年伦敦念学1963年获博士学位
列句：
He studied in a university in London in 1957 and received a doctor’s degree in 1963
After he studied in a a university in London in 1957 received a doctor’s degree in 1963
句：
In 1957 He studied in a university in London where he gained a doctor’s degree in 1963
非谓语：
Having studied in a university in London in 1957 he gained a doctor’s degree in 1963
practice 中山学英语系毕业出国深造
列句：连词
After graduating from the English Department of Zhongshan University she went abroad for further studies
非谓语：
Having graduated from the English Department of Zhongshan University she went abroad for further studies
practice 1983年毕业哥伦亚学1988年考入哈佛法学院1991年获博士学位
列句：连词
In 1983 he graduated from Columbia University and in 1988 he was admitted to Harvard Law School where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991定语句
After graduating from Columbia University In 1983he was admitted to Harvard Law School where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991
practice米高菲尔普斯美国非游泳运动员1985年6月出生美国马利兰州巴尔摩市
Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985
Michael Phelps born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985 is a great American swimmer
Born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985 Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer
practice7岁开始游泳历艰苦训练
When he was 7 years old he started swimming and experienced much tough professional training ( go through much hard training)
practice 15岁时候参加2000年奥运会200米蝶泳赛中获第五
At the age of 15 he attended the 2000 Olympic Games
and won the fifth place in the 200meter butterfly
practice北京奥运会实现8枚金牌梦破7
世界纪录创造历史
At the Beijing Olympic Games Phelps realized his dream of wining 8 gold medal and broke 7 world records which created the history
非限制性定语句指代前句
5Evaluation
1)one of the best most important …
重佳
2)set a good example for…
…作榜样
3)a model teacherworker
模范教师员工
4)be respected by everyone
尊敬
5)speak think highly of…
高度评价
6)be honored as (an excellent athlete)
誉（优秀运动员）
7)his hard work brought him great success
努力工作带巨成功
8)he is the pride of China
中国骄傲
9)His heroic story spread all over the city
英雄事迹传遍整城市
10)make great contributions to…
…作出巨贡献
11)ConsistencyPerseverance is the key to success
坚持成功秘诀
12)be famousknown as be regarded as
…著名称…
13)become a world champion at …Championships
…成世界冠军
14)remember sb forever
…永垂朽
15)a new chapter of history has been turned
翻开历史新页
16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit
雷锋产义精神赞扬
6务介绍常句子：
Step 3 the skills of im proving the writing
1A 概况
译：钟南山１９４１年出生广州中国伟医生
B外貌性格
译：历史老师漂亮女长着两眼睛留着长发
C 教育历：
译： 毕业中山学外语系继续出国深造获博士学位
D．生：
译： 仅科学兴趣音乐天份
译：创造新世界游泳纪录中国队获面金牌
E：评价
译：中国伟说家永远怀念
s语法句法高分tips
1A 概况
译：钟南山１９４１年出生广州中国伟医生
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941 Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China
2)Zhong Nanshan one of the greatest doctors in China was born in Guangzhou in 1941
B外貌性格
译：历史老师漂亮女长着两眼睛留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair
C 教育历：
1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University she went on further education and received a doctor＇s degree
D．生：
1）Not only is he interested in science but also he has a gift for music
2）He set a new world record of swimming which won a gold medal for China Team
E．评估：
2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man
2做句式灵活？
1)列句
2)复合句
(定语句状语句名词性句)
3)强调句型
4)非谓语动词
5)倒装句
6)句型结构
3文章连贯？(渡词)
1) 时间：
soon then suddenly meanwhile before after earlier in the morning afterwards later immediately next the other day nowadays gradually…
2) 空间
above below up down under near far
from in front of behind beside beyond
on the rightleft around inside outside
opposite to next to on top of across
3) 列举：
for example such as first(ly) second(ly) finally besides apart form for one thing…for another thing …
4) 较
like unlike on the contrary in contrast to on the one hand…on the other hand than not so…as… as…as… while similarly the former the latter some…others one…the other compared with…
5) 逻辑关系：
a 列：and as well as also…
b 转折：but however yet…
c 递进：besides apart from in addition
what’s more furthermore
moreover to make things worse
d原：because because of as sincefor that reason…
e 结果：so therefore thus as a result…
f 步：though although in spite of…
Step 4 Writing
1 After all the above steps the students have a general idea of a good composition then show them the task again and let the students finish the writing
2 Show them the sample writing
Last week I am very lucky to interview a foreign volunteer teaching in rural China Eckart Loewe talking about his way of volunteering Eckart Loewe born in Hamburg Germany in 1968 began to love the countryside of Guangxi after 3month tour (3 months’ tour)in China in the summer of 1990 Since 1999 he has been a volunteer teacher in a village there During teaching in China he finds that Chinese parents always pay attention to their children’s grades but ignore their natures and interests In his opinion if a person lives only for others’ ideas he will never find the direction and power of himself
Step 5 Homework
Polish your writing using the skills
Blackboard
How to write biography
The outline
1 Birthday and birthplace
2 Family background
3 Education background
4 Big events in one’s life
5Evaluation
The tips
Teaching reflexion
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How to write biography
Teaching aims
Knowledge aims
1 Get the students to know some basic knowledge about English writing
2 Get the students to know the words and expressions about describing persons
3 Get the students to improve your composition with advanced words and complex structures
Ability aims
1 Be able to use the some basic knowledge about English writing
2 Be able to use some advanced words and complex structures
Emotional aims
1 Stimulate the students’ learning motivation
2 Improve their ability of cooperating with each other through discussing
Teaching difficult point and important points
Get students to make use of the skills to write a good English composition
Teaching methods
1 Taskbased teaching and learning
2 Group work and discussion
Teaching aids teaching plan multimedia and slide
Teaching procedures
Step 1 Presentation
1 Show the students a writing task
2 Disscuss the requests of the task
Step 2 The structure of biography
1 Birthday and birthplace
Was born on… in…
2 Family background
1…was born ininto a poor rich family
hisher family was so poor that…
… was the son of a poor family
描述时候成长历程：
when he was a small boy young
as a child as a boy of 15
during his her childhood
… spend his childhood in…
描述生活：
live a happy hard life
with the help of…
his father was strict with him…
亚伯翰·林肯 1809年2月12日出生贫穷家庭
简单句：
Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family on February 121809
列句：
Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family and born on February 121809
句（定语句）：
Abraham Lincoln who was born on February 121809 was the son of a poor family
Abraham Lincoln who was the son of a poor family was born on February 121809
句（位语句）：
Abraham Lincoln the son of a poor family was born on February 121809
3 Education background
be admitted to …college…学录取
graduate from…department（院系）of …university毕业…
when at college he majored in…学修
receive a doctor’s degreea PhD degree获博士学位
be awarded …(奖项) 嘉奖…
go abroad for further studies出国深造
have little schooling (education)受少教育
Practice 出生贫苦家庭狄更斯受少教育句：
定语句：
Charles Dickens who was born in a poor family had little schooling
非谓语：
1）分词充定语修饰前面名词
Charles Dickens born in a poor family had little schooling
2）分词充状语表原
Born in a poor family Charles Dickens had little schooling
4 Big events in one’s life
1）be interested in… be fond of…
…感兴趣喜爱
2）work hard at…
…工作努力
3）serve as…
作…
4）devote his lifetimeoneself to…
生投入…
5）concentrate oneself on…
集中某注意力做…
6）do research about into…
做关…研究
7）make up one’s mind to do sth
定决定做某事
8）do sth with great determination and perseverance
着巨决心毅力做
9）be strict in sth
…严格求
10）have a …way of doing sth
做某事方面着…方式
11）try one’s best to do sth
全力做某事
12）encourage sb to do
鼓励某做某事
13）fight for give up one’s life for sbsth
…奋斗某某事放弃生命
14）win a prizethe first prize in …competition
赛中获奖励获第名
15)receiveobtainwin the Nobel Prize for…
…获诺贝尔奖
16)be good at… do well in…
…做
17)be crazy about… enjoy …
…着迷享受…
18)make rapid progress in …
…做出进步
19)set a new world record of …
创造项新世界纪录
20)equalbreak the world record
破世界纪录
21)win (won) a gold silver bronze medal
获金牌银牌铜牌
22）win the xxth place
获第名
23)be selected to become a member of…
选… 成…员
24)study hard train hard
学努力训练努力
25)go through hardship
历困难挫折
26)have a gift talent for …(language)
… (语言)天份
27)realize one’s dream
实现梦想
28)overcome many difficulties
克服困难
pratice高锟1933年11月4日出生海富裕家庭做试验产生浓厚兴趣
定语句：
Gaokun who was born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
非谓语（定语）
Gaokun born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
非谓语（状语）
Born in a rich family on Nov4th1933 Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood
61957年伦敦念学1963年获博士学位
列句：
He studied in a university in London in 1957 and received a doctor’s degree in 1963
After he studied in a a university in London in 1957 received a doctor’s degree in 1963
句：
In 1957 He studied in a university in London where he gained a doctor’s degree in 1963
非谓语：
Having studied in a university in London in 1957 he gained a doctor’s degree in 1963
practice 中山学英语系毕业出国深造
列句：连词
After graduating from the English Department of Zhongshan University she went abroad for further studies
非谓语：
Having graduated from the English Department of Zhongshan University she went abroad for further studies
practice 1983年毕业哥伦亚学1988年考入哈佛法学院1991年获博士学位
列句：连词
In 1983 he graduated from Columbia University and in 1988 he was admitted to Harvard Law School where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991定语句
After graduating from Columbia University In 1983he was admitted to Harvard Law School where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991
practice米高菲尔普斯美国非游泳运动员1985年6月出生美国马利兰州巴尔摩市
Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985
Michael Phelps born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985 is a great American swimmer
Born in Baltimore Maryland on June 301985 Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer
practice7岁开始游泳历艰苦训练
When he was 7 years old he started swimming and experienced much tough professional training ( go through much hard training)
practice 15岁时候参加2000年奥运会200米蝶泳赛中获第五
At the age of 15 he attended the 2000 Olympic Games
and won the fifth place in the 200meter butterfly
practice北京奥运会实现8枚金牌梦破7
世界纪录创造历史
At the Beijing Olympic Games Phelps realized his dream of wining 8 gold medal and broke 7 world records which created the history
非限制性定语句指代前句
5Evaluation
1)one of the best most important …
重佳
2)set a good example for…
…作榜样
3)a model teacherworker
模范教师员工
4)be respected by everyone
尊敬
5)speak think highly of…
高度评价
6)be honored as (an excellent athlete)
誉（优秀运动员）
7)his hard work brought him great success
努力工作带巨成功
8)he is the pride of China
中国骄傲
9)His heroic story spread all over the city
英雄事迹传遍整城市
10)make great contributions to…
…作出巨贡献
11)ConsistencyPerseverance is the key to success
坚持成功秘诀
12)be famousknown as be regarded as
…著名称…
13)become a world champion at …Championships
…成世界冠军
14)remember sb forever
…永垂朽
15)a new chapter of history has been turned
翻开历史新页
16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit
雷锋产义精神赞扬
6务介绍常句子：
Step 3 the skills of im proving the writing
1A 概况
译：钟南山１９４１年出生广州中国伟医生
B外貌性格
译：历史老师漂亮女长着两眼睛留着长发
C 教育历：
译： 毕业中山学外语系继续出国深造获博士学位
D．生：
译： 仅科学兴趣音乐天份
译：创造新世界游泳纪录中国队获面金牌
E：评价
译：中国伟说家永远怀念
s语法句法高分tips
1A 概况
译：钟南山１９４１年出生广州中国伟医生
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941 Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China
2)Zhong Nanshan one of the greatest doctors in China was born in Guangzhou in 1941
B外貌性格
译：历史老师漂亮女长着两眼睛留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair
C 教育历：
1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University she went on further education and received a doctor＇s degree
D．生：
1）Not only is he interested in science but also he has a gift for music
2）He set a new world record of swimming which won a gold medal for China Team
E．评估：
2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man
2做句式灵活？
1)列句
2)复合句
(定语句状语句名词性句)
3)强调句型
4)非谓语动词
5)倒装句
6)句型结构
3文章连贯？(渡词)
1) 时间：
soon then suddenly meanwhile before after earlier in the morning afterwards later immediately next the other day nowadays gradually…
2) 空间
above below up down under near far
from in front of behind beside beyond
on the rightleft around inside outside
opposite to next to on top of across
3) 列举：
for example such as first(ly) second(ly) finally besides apart form for one thing…for another thing …
4) 较
like unlike on the contrary in contrast to on the one hand…on the other hand than not so…as… as…as… while similarly the former the latter some…others one…the other compared with…
5) 逻辑关系：
a 列：and as well as also…
b 转折：but however yet…
c 递进：besides apart from in addition
what’s more furthermore
moreover to make things worse
d原：because because of as sincefor that reason…
e 结果：so therefore thus as a result…
f 步：though although in spite of…
Step 4 Writing
1 After all the above steps the students have a general idea of a good composition then show them the task again and let the students finish the writing
2 Show them the sample writing
Last week I am very lucky to interview a foreign volunteer teaching in rural China Eckart Loewe talking about his way of volunteering Eckart Loewe born in Hamburg Germany in 1968 began to love the countryside of Guangxi after 3month tour (3 months’ tour)in China in the summer of 1990 Since 1999 he has been a volunteer teacher in a village there During teaching in China he finds that Chinese parents always pay attention to their children’s grades but ignore their natures and interests In his opinion if a person lives only for others’ ideas he will never find the direction and power of himself
Step 5 Homework
Polish your writing using the skills
Blackboard
How to write biography
The outline
1 Birthday and birthplace
2 Family background
3 Education background
4 Big events in one’s life
5Evaluation
The tips
Teaching reflexion
节课关物介绍写作课条理清楚讲解清晰板书工整学生物写作基结构相关词汇句型掌握节课容量挺学生基础扎实写作技巧中复合句特殊句型易掌握应该加写作训练该方面句子写作讲解
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